Who Dares to Say That I Am a Shameful Trainer?

So far, it seems that there are no major problems. The writing is very interesting, the battles are watchable, the author is very interesting, and the plot is also good. There is still a problem with the lack of money: sometimes it is a bit unreasonable. For example, many elf evolution methods are not known, and there are many small unreasonable points. But I can read a good Pokémon novel The second revision has a lot of pitfalls. It's the same as other Pokémon stories. You can probably guess the plot afterwards, so it's a bit boring and doesn't have its own characteristics, but I can still watch it.

The content is very interesting, I would recommend it

The content is very interesting. If you don't take the usual path, you don't know what he is going to do next.

The structure is clear, the purpose is clear, and there is no rush.

Advantages: The overall world view is fully expressed, and the world situation in the whole book is quietly expressed to the readers. The oppressive feeling of various mythical beasts and champion elves is also written. The character dialogue is not awkward and natural. The plot has small climaxes from time to time. The combat power is divided by numerical levels. The gaps are clearly and intuitively seen. The attitude, state of mind and means of various supporting characters towards something are different. The supporting characters are qualified, and the plot is not advanced well. When reading, you will not feel like jumping to the chapter directly. Disadvantages: The symbols used for pet star ratings make the experience of listening to this book a bit poor. There are no illustrations for elves and you need to look through the illustrated book. Some plots are written to end the chapter, but the next chapter is suddenly skipped or the environment is changed, which makes the reader's experience somewhat torn. Summary: It has some minor flaws but is overall a very exciting Pokémon fanfic. It ranks among the top 10% of all Pokémon fanfics.

Except that the transition is too stiff, everything else is pretty good. It cannot be denied that this is a good book, but the prerequisite is that the habit of transition must be corrected. Then there are too few battle scenes. It would be better if more can be written.

This book is good, but the only drawback is that the battle section is too long. In fact, there is no need to write about how so many viewers were shocked. Just write down the move battle process well.

Overall, it's good, the writing is good, and the descriptions of battles are not bad. I've read dozens of chapters, but one drawback is that the author suddenly stopped writing about a few battles when they were critical, and then directly talks about the results of the battles in the next chapter, which is a bit affecting the senses. Maybe the author feels that his writing skills are not enough. There are also some places that are a bit awkward, and the plot arrangement is not interesting. I hope to continue to improve. In summary, I think it is a good work. I plan to follow up and read more. This book contains many techniques and combinations of moves. It is very imaginative. I hope to keep it up. Come on.

Damn, it's so good. Please update the author soon! ! ! Just don't read what the introduction says, okay. Although it seems very arrogant and makes people have no desire to read it, I guarantee that this book will be very interesting to you as you read it. He didn't want to look at it at first, but he stopped talking. He looked at it for a while and couldn't stop. Regardless of the low score, which is due to the lack of people, this tree is particularly beautiful, highly recommended, highly recommended.

I feel like this is a very good book among elf fans, but I don't understand why it only has an 8.8

I've seen 1/3, it's very good, the plot is connected smoothly, the bond is well written, and it mainly leans towards fantasy rather than mystery. It has the style of a master, and the potential level is relatively clear and not flashy. I'll give it a 4.5. The advantage is that the plot and cross-blank space are very good. If you deduct 0.5, It means that there is a bit too much space. The author is just being lazy and just leaves it blank. It collapsed in the mid-term, and the protagonist was too hung up. Then, all the opponents lowered their wits and no strategies and tactical combinations were used. Including the championship match in previous years, two people of the same level fought directly against each other, with no ability to fight back. Not to mention that the author lowered the opponent's level, even the tactical skills were lowered a little, and the battle description and spiritual bond were gone. It's a pity for this book. Before the first 1/3 of the game, it can be said that it was five-star. After the game, all the details, tactics and levels collapsed. It was obvious that I couldn't control the situation. Multiple lines and multiple openings were drawn directly to the end. Not to mention the Japanese exchange student plot. Now this situation can be said to be completely broken. I jumped all over the place later on. Judging from the situation, there was no risk or bond. It turned into a completely pure white text that was inconsistent with the early stage. There was no one above seven stars in the later stage. The final level did break through 100 and reached level 105, and it was all about power and gain. All parties took advantage of the situation. If you want to see the city, why should I come over to see you, little elf?

This novel is actually okay, but many important events or key matches are skipped inexplicably, such as the critical moment of a duel, the passionate final blow, and talking about one's research with family members.

2333. The shortcomings mentioned in the comments would be fine if there was no skipping. Anyway, I didn't feel anything when I watched it. Anyway, the overall tone is just Pokémon, and those insignificant things are not forced to be eaten hard. If this part is passed as a joke, it will be quite interesting, and it is only one or two chapters. It's just that there are too few and it's not enough to watch. Please update it soon. I'm afraid I won't be able to catch up if I keep following the series. There are all the chattering mythical beasts in the back. Basically, the protagonist goes there, lets the mythical beasts plunder the formation next to them, and then chats and trades. There is nothing to see. There is no use for teammates here, except to compare the power of the divine beast. There is no content at all. New legendary Pokémon appear, and then the protagonist rushes up to chat, and then the familiar bargaining with wool, and then continues to the next legendary Pokémon.

It's well written, please update more, but I suggest you integrate your own spirits occasionally. It seems that the protagonist doesn't write much about his own strength, and it all feels like a free rein.

The writing style is still a bit immature, but the plot is still good. Although the description of the research is a bit sloppy, the rhythm is still very good. As a Pokémon fanfiction, it is above average. If you like Pokémon, you can take a look. [Thinking] I have read more than 280 chapters, and the protagonist's rhythm is still steady and steady. He does not feel that he is invincible because of his cerebral palsy, and he has not forgotten to help his family improve their strength. It is highly recommended to readers who like to promote the evolution of Pokémon and scientific research on Pokémon. 🥰

It's okay, it's something you can read in most elf texts.

It's really beautiful, I don't know why the rating is only 8.8.

Yes, there are no Pokémon novels like the ones before, where you just use a few skills to fight back and forth in regular competitions, and you can connect these together. You must write more, more than 10 million words. After all, there are not many Pokémon novels that are so good. Come on,

It's endlessly good-looking, and the main character is both sinister, mean, and charming. I have been following this book. It is very exciting. I have been reluctant to read the ending before, but now I am willing to read it. It is like a dream. It's very good-looking. The protagonist is a normal character written by one of the few normal humans. There is no plot that sees the world through the eyes of others. There are no vulgar plots, no disgusting descriptions, and no humiliating plots. The protagonist is very passionate, very middle-aged, very youthful, and the plot is very exciting. The whole book is not awkward at all.

Finally found a good Pokémon article

Love it. It's the most enjoyable Pokémon article I've ever read.

The overall fluency of the novel is very high, and the writing is also very good. The moves and personalities of the elves and some details are relatively restored to the original work. The narrative flow of most of the elf fan fiction, from a novel to having the support and recognition of major mythical beasts, is still attractive. The early and middle stages are very good. I hope there will be no female protagonist and it will not be unfinished.

I keep up with updates every day, and suddenly one day I saw it was only about 7:00. I was scared to death. It was stable for three chapters, and it was okay. If you like to watch show-offs, you can give it a look.

It's okay, but the battles are always described with blank spaces. Not once, but almost every fierce battle is full of passion, skipping the confrontation process and ending directly.

There is no doubt that the total score is 8.5. Almost all Pokémon are included in it. The world view is very good and the logic is also good. Especially Lin Bai, the protagonist who protects money and the world, provided many of my laughs in this book. After reading this book, I saw at the end that the author had written another book similar to it. I went to Kangkang first [learned]

Sense of immersion: 3.9 Stars Writing style: 4.1 Stars Plot: 3.9 Stars Attractiveness: 4 stars Cool point: 3.9 Stars 3.9/4.1/3.9/4/3.9 Summary: 4 stars (Purely personal opinion, please don't criticize) It was a bit overwhelming in the early stage, but there was nothing wrong with it in the later stage.

There is a certain amount of secondary content, the plot is very compact, and the battles are interspersed with life. You can see that the protagonist is surrounded by living people with distinctive personalities. It is not an NPC. It is a book that I personally like.

In fact, sometimes I look down on these supporting characters in today's cities. Because of their route. There were people who did better in the original version. —

I finished reading it in one go, but I found that more than 400 chapters were not enough. This book is considered good even among the top elf books. The last time I saw it, the more novel one was Su Wen's. The writing is good, and the combat descriptions are remarkable. The article moves toward micro-group portraits, and the protagonist develops in two ways: combat + research. Z-moves, mega evolution, giant pincer mantis and other evolutions are all proposed by the protagonist. In addition, the protagonist has three generations of officers, a strong background, and golden fingers. It is really fun to watch. It is worth mentioning that the elves conquered by the protagonist are not the popular Charizard, Gengar, Gardevoir, Lucario, etc. They are all relatively niche. After reading dozens of elven articles, I have not found anyone who has conquered the Blue Flame Blade Demon or the Aluminum Steel Dragon. It's also because the protagonist develops in two ways. The training of elves will be described in the early stage, but it is basically not mentioned in the later stage. With the help of legendary power, the elves will rise slowly. Also because of the micro-group portrait, many other characters and their elves are described. I still want to see more descriptions and fights about the protagonist's elf. When I saw this, I also realized that the author seems to be planning to make a big one. The Ultimate Cave, Jade Purple, Xi Cui, and even Arceus were not mentioned. Various legendary elves are swarming out. The world view is quite large. It depends on how the author develops it later. The last step is to urge updates, write quickly, write quickly, write quickly, ten chapters a day is not too much, hahaha.

I love this book very much. I read it carefully and felt the most sincere heart of Pokémon. The main character was a little confused, but the description of Pokémon and people in this book moved me. I hope you will be moved too.