Who Dares Call Me a Disgrace to Trainers?

So far, it seems that there are no major problems. The writing is very interesting, the battles are watchable, the author is very interesting, and the plot is also good. There is still a problem with the lack of money: sometimes it is a bit unreasonable. For example, many elf evolution methods are not known, and there are many small unreasonable points. But I can read a good Pokémon novel The second revision has a lot of pitfalls. It's the same as other Pokémon stories. You can probably guess the plot afterwards, so it's a bit boring and doesn't have its own characteristics, but I can still watch it.

The content is very interesting, I would recommend it

The content is very interesting. If you don't take the usual path, you don't know what he is going to do next.

The structure is clear, the purpose is clear, and there is no rush.

Advantages: The overall world view is fully expressed, and the world situation in the whole book is quietly expressed to the readers. The oppressive feeling of various mythical beasts and champion elves is also written. The character dialogue is not awkward and natural. The plot has small climaxes from time to time. The combat power is divided by numerical levels. The gaps are clearly and intuitively seen. The attitude, state of mind and means of various supporting characters towards something are different. The supporting characters are qualified, and the plot is not advanced well. When reading, you will not feel like jumping to the chapter directly. Disadvantages: The symbols used for pet star ratings make the experience of listening to this book a bit poor. There are no illustrations for elves and you need to look through the illustrated book. Some plots are written to end the chapter, but the next chapter is suddenly skipped or the environment is changed, which makes the reader's experience somewhat torn. Summary: It has some minor flaws but is overall a very exciting Pokémon fanfic. It ranks among the top 10% of all Pokémon fanfics.

Except that the transition is too stiff, everything else is pretty good. It cannot be denied that this is a good book, but the prerequisite is that the habit of transition must be corrected. Then there are too few battle scenes. It would be better if more can be written.

This book is good, but the only drawback is that the battle section is too long. In fact, there is no need to write about how so many viewers were shocked. Just write down the move battle process well.

Overall, it's good, the writing is good, and the descriptions of battles are not bad. I've read dozens of chapters, but one drawback is that the author suddenly stopped writing about a few battles when they were critical, and then directly talks about the results of the battles in the next chapter, which is a bit affecting the senses. Maybe the author feels that his writing skills are not enough. There are also some places that are a bit awkward, and the plot arrangement is not interesting. I hope to continue to improve. In summary, I think it is a good work. I plan to follow up and read more. This book contains many techniques and combinations of moves. It is very imaginative. I hope to keep it up. Come on.

Damn, it's so good. Please update the author soon!!! Just don't read what the introduction says, okay. Although it seems very arrogant and makes people have no desire to read it, I guarantee that this book will be very interesting to you as you read it. He didn't want to look at it at first, but he stopped talking. He looked at it for a while and couldn't stop. Regardless of the low score, which is due to the lack of people, this tree is particularly beautiful, highly recommended, highly recommended.

I feel like this is a very good book among elf fans, but I don't understand why it only has an 8.8