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It's actually quite good. The male protagonist has upright views. This is not a brainless novel. You don't have to rush so fast. Just read it slowly. Isn't it normal for a time traveler who has never been in love to be cheated on? Also, the woman in front clearly has bad views and is not in harmony with the protagonist. Why do you have to force it, right? But it is understandable that the routine used by the author is indeed outdated. I suggest the author come up with new ideas. This way it would be more perfect. [Thinking][thinking]

Not bad, keep working hard, I hope I can evolve to the Sun Sacred Body

Tomato novel is a masterpiece. I have read the latest chapters in full. There is no poisonous point along the way. The emotional line is also very good. The narrative writing is very good. It is not like other novels that are either lousy or do not even have a female protagonist. It is like a monk traveling through the past.

I initially went for the single female protagonist, maybe in the first 100 chapters, the male protagonist liked Wenwen at first, but not long after they separated, he slept with Wen Ting. From here, I felt that the male protagonist may have liked Wenwen and Wen Ting together at the beginning. After all, the relationship changed too quickly, so at this time I thought the female protagonist was Wen Ting. After all, she played the role of a single female protagonist and slept with someone again. She was a proper female protagonist. But, the family looked down, the heroine's name is Shiyun, okay, I felt a little uncomfortable when I saw this, so I continued reading for the single female protagonist. After all, there are very few single female protagonists in male-channeled novels, and the male protagonist is young, cannot recognize each other, and is deceived. As long as he is loyal to the female protagonist in the end, it will be fine. However, after the appearance of Shiyun, the author did not write any female supporting characters, and the male protagonist never cheated on her mentally or physically, so I will give it 4 stars. The 1 point deducted is because the male protagonist slept with a woman other than the female protagonist. If the author wants to show the male protagonist's novice in the early stage, he can write about the feelings of being cheated, and he can let the female protagonist trick the male protagonist into going through fire and water for her. Forgive me for being a girl. Even though I have read the full text, I still have to deduct this point. Finally, the author worked hard on coding and hopes to write better and better in the future!

The protagonist is decisive in doing things and never verbose. Never talk nonsense when killing enemies, just do it! Unlike many novels, the protagonist takes a long time to kill everyone before starting the fight.

Fortunately, smart people are not people who have extensive knowledge, but people who have useful knowledge. Just like you! A wise person is not a person who has extensive knowledge, but a person who has mastered useful knowledge. Just like you! The young master should only see paintings, and I only know Tianjin, and write about the water and the sky, and he must not be a person in the world of dust.

It sounds good, but it's a bit lacking, not enough.

Why is such a classic book gone? This book has a score of at least 9.5. Why is the score so low? This is a classic book that I discovered when I was short of books. It's a pity that the score is too low! ! !

At present, there is no poison point, or my poison resistance is a bit high. Update quickly, even the donkeys in the production team dare not stop like this

The score of 7.9 Is a bit low. It can't be more than 9 points. It's very well written, please keep up the good work.

If the plot hadn't been changed before, it might have been more toxic. I haven't watched the previous one, but now that I'm watching it, it feels pretty good. At least I can still watch it.

This book is very interesting. There is no ink. The state should be fast or slow. The content is not monotonous. When the content changes quickly, it does not seem to annoy old book friends. The content is very flexible. The author has clear thinking. I like it for you. There is no satirical host content. I like it very much. <>The author has worked hard, thank you for your support and likes

I didn't expect to find such an article in Tomato. This kind of subject matter is really hard to find, and there are few. I hope the author can persevere.

I hope there won't be any interruptions in the future. It's okay to update 2 chapters every day.

It's beautiful, but it's a little lacking. Come on! (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

Very nice! A complete classic fairy tale! A novel that perfectly expresses the importance of cultivating immortals without forgetting the original intention, loving relatives and attaching great importance to affection and righteousness! No matter how much life is missing, it would be a pity. Between life and death, there are joys, sorrows, parents, husbands, children, brothers and sisters. Kudos to the author!

It's a little jerky at the front, but it gets better and better at the back.

It's good-looking. It's the kind that gets better the more you write it.

Fast pace, comprehensive logic, good plot, not boring

A friend recommended it to me and it was really good. It suited my appetite and quenched my thirst. !

I hope the author will persevere and give me 5 stars.

It's a very good book, at least it's not a system or anything like that. Systems are not good things!

🥂Be sure to do something you don't want to do every day. This is the most precious rule. It can help you develop the habit of conscientiously fulfilling your responsibilities without feeling bitter. --Mark Twain

It's okay, there are some holes that I haven't filled in yet. Damn, you don't even want a wife, right?

The subject matter is okay, although the plot is a bit fast, overall it's pretty good

It's very good. The plot develops a bit quickly and is not too toxic. It's worth watching.

It is worth reading. The plot is not like other novels, with many routines. It can be seen that the author has a certain cultural background and his writing style is also very good.

Good. No nonsense. There is a desire to chase!

It's pretty good, but the protagonist's golden finger is a bit lacking.

Originally, this was a maximum of 4 stars. Since you are a newbie, I will give you a five-star author. Please work harder.