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It's quite good-looking, with many interesting plot designs, and the characters of the heroine and supporting characters are very distinctive. The car drives smoothly and stealthily, and the fighting scenes are very graphic.
Let's talk about the shortcomings. The number of words is a bit short, and the pace of the first three chapters is a bit slow. There is a section in the middle where the protagonist uses a cosplay prop of a woman in order to hide his ability to be immune to supernatural powers. This makes me, a straight man, slightly uncomfortable. However, fortunately, there are not too many such plots at the moment, and it is within the acceptable range.
All in all, the book is a good book. I hope the author can polish it more and not stop updating it.
The further it goes, the more exciting it becomes. The author drives so fast that sometimes he can't keep up. The last scene playing billiards also made me stunned for a moment, and my face was crushed. It's so awesome! In addition, I also want to give you a thumbs up for the series of operations performed by Xiaorili. It's so cool to watch. 👍
Very good but relatively few
Marrying a wife with nine clones is equivalent to marrying ten wives with different shapes and personalities [laughter]
There are a thousand Hamlets among a thousand readers. Everyone's pleasure is different, and some readers' pleasure may be poison in the eyes of others. So when something I write makes readers uncomfortable, please point it out directly and I will try my best to change it.
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It's not too much to give yourself a five-star review, right?
Wang Po sells melons, and I want to brag about myself. In addition to the selling point of the heroine's doppelgänger, I think the subsequent plot is also very exciting. I will rack my brains to design every fighting scene, and the protagonist will carefully lay out before each battle.
In addition, the protagonist will be a little confused when he first arrives in another world (he will use a vest in the first 40 chapters), but the moment he goes to the island country, he returns to his true nature, with sparks and lightning all the way. The subsequent battles will be dominated by battles of wits, supplemented by crushing strength. The protagonist often plays tricks on various forces.
In addition to the battle plot, I also carefully designed the characters of each heroine. They all have very outstanding personalities. There will always be one you like. Also, the interaction between the protagonist and the heroines will become more exciting as the game progresses [laughter].
It's good-looking, and the male protagonist's golden finger is quite interesting, just like the guy in Academy City. The setting of the heroine is quite interesting. You might say it's multiple heroines, but the women are all the same person. You might say it's a single heroine, and each heroine has a different personality.
After seeing the latest chapter, I must come over and give it a five-star review. It is so relieving. I remember that there was a Chinese who did similar things in real life, so I must give it a thumbs up. There is a chapter called "Welcome King Su to Japan". I didn't expect it to be literal. It really means "Welcome to Japan".
Apart from this plot, the other plots are also quite exciting. The car drives very fast, and sometimes I only realize it when I hit my face. So is the theory about cows and earth made up by the author himself? It makes sense.
The back is so beautiful, why are there so few people?
After reading it, go faster, go faster, the donkeys in the production team don't dare to drag like you. Can you sleep at your age? Are you embarrassed to sleep? Start coding now. Let's code until 5 am first. Then get up at 7:00 am and continue coding. Two hours of sleep a day is enough. You don't need to sleep that much at your age. Just sleep through, more! Even! Even! 🤺
This book is so powerful, it will definitely become a hit, right?
It's beautiful, don't stop it
Super pretty! Come on
How many chapters does the author plan to have the heroine confess and tell the hero?
The book is very good, but why is it not popular?
The content is novel, and I was fascinated by it [laughing evilly] It's a very good book, but there are too few, gkdgkd
I can only say that some people like the cos transformation and some people don't like it. I am the kind of person who likes it. I beg the author not to delete it completely. It can be less but it must be there [send heartfelt]
On the yellow dot I love to watch [laughing evilly]
Good looking, good luck to the author
The author must finish it, finish it, finish it
[Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] Dirty dirty~Thomas the Tank Engine is starting
The writing is good, but I'm very disappointed that I didn't update ten times a day [laughter]
The author needs to work harder. I feel like it's gone even before I started reading. Can there be more updates?
There aren't many negative reviews, so why is it 6.3?
I skipped it and watched it. It's actually pretty good. I think we can promote more emotions between the male and female protagonists [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]
The plot and setting are both good so far, good luck to the author💪
This book is not bad.
Good luck, good luck, author!
The novel is okay, but it's too convoluted. I'd better stop reading it in the future! Come on
After reading more than 20 chapters, there is a confusing point, why the heroine must conceal her identity, and where the hero was thrown from behind, it felt like there was no heroine the night before, only a clone.
The plot is quite good, but the clone and the main body are so harmonious.
Very good, very good, very wonderful
Looks good, come on, come on! ! The roses in our hands, the setting sun, our youth are about to end...
There are some flaws, but overall it's pretty good.
It's well written and the plot is smooth, but I didn't understand that the main character wants to join the Public Security Bureau.
The author has been missing since September 15th. He is male and his age is unknown. The reason for his disappearance is unknown. It is unknown whether the missing person has family members and whether a case can be filed.
It's quite good-looking, with many interesting plot designs, and the characters of the heroine and supporting characters are very distinctive. The car drives smoothly and stealthily, and the fighting scenes are very graphic. Let's talk about the shortcomings. The number of words is a bit short, and the pace of the first three chapters is a bit slow. There is a section in the middle where the protagonist uses a cosplay prop of a woman in order to hide his ability to be immune to supernatural powers. This makes me, a straight man, slightly uncomfortable. However, fortunately, there are not too many such plots at the moment, and it is within the acceptable range. All in all, the book is a good book. I hope the author can polish it more and not stop updating it. The further it goes, the more exciting it becomes. The author drives so fast that sometimes he can't keep up. The last scene playing billiards also made me stunned for a moment, and my face was crushed. It's so awesome! In addition, I also want to give you a thumbs up for the series of operations performed by Xiaorili. It's so cool to watch. 👍
Very good but relatively few Marrying a wife with nine clones is equivalent to marrying ten wives with different shapes and personalities [laughter]
There are a thousand Hamlets among a thousand readers. Everyone's pleasure is different, and some readers' pleasure may be poison in the eyes of others. So when something I write makes readers uncomfortable, please point it out directly and I will try my best to change it. I also ask all readers to show mercy in the comment area. [Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post] It's not too much to give yourself a five-star review, right? Wang Po sells melons, and I want to brag about myself. In addition to the selling point of the heroine's doppelgänger, I think the subsequent plot is also very exciting. I will rack my brains to design every fighting scene, and the protagonist will carefully lay out before each battle. In addition, the protagonist will be a little confused when he first arrives in another world (he will use a vest in the first 40 chapters), but the moment he goes to the island country, he returns to his true nature, with sparks and lightning all the way. The subsequent battles will be dominated by battles of wits, supplemented by crushing strength. The protagonist often plays tricks on various forces. In addition to the battle plot, I also carefully designed the characters of each heroine. They all have very outstanding personalities. There will always be one you like. Also, the interaction between the protagonist and the heroines will become more exciting as the game progresses [laughter].
It's good-looking, and the male protagonist's golden finger is quite interesting, just like the guy in Academy City. The setting of the heroine is quite interesting. You might say it's multiple heroines, but the women are all the same person. You might say it's a single heroine, and each heroine has a different personality.
After seeing the latest chapter, I must come over and give it a five-star review. It is so relieving. I remember that there was a Chinese who did similar things in real life, so I must give it a thumbs up. There is a chapter called "Welcome King Su to Japan". I didn't expect it to be literal. It really means "Welcome to Japan". Apart from this plot, the other plots are also quite exciting. The car drives very fast, and sometimes I only realize it when I hit my face. So is the theory about cows and earth made up by the author himself? It makes sense. The back is so beautiful, why are there so few people?
After reading it, go faster, go faster, the donkeys in the production team don't dare to drag like you. Can you sleep at your age? Are you embarrassed to sleep? Start coding now. Let's code until 5 am first. Then get up at 7:00 am and continue coding. Two hours of sleep a day is enough. You don't need to sleep that much at your age. Just sleep through, more! Even! Even! 🤺
This book is so powerful, it will definitely become a hit, right?
It's beautiful, don't stop it Super pretty! Come on
How many chapters does the author plan to have the heroine confess and tell the hero?
The book is very good, but why is it not popular?
The content is novel, and I was fascinated by it [laughing evilly] It's a very good book, but there are too few, gkdgkd I can only say that some people like the cos transformation and some people don't like it. I am the kind of person who likes it. I beg the author not to delete it completely. It can be less but it must be there [send heartfelt]
On the yellow dot I love to watch [laughing evilly]
Good looking, good luck to the author
The author must finish it, finish it, finish it
[Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] Dirty dirty~Thomas the Tank Engine is starting
The writing is good, but I'm very disappointed that I didn't update ten times a day [laughter]
The author needs to work harder. I feel like it's gone even before I started reading. Can there be more updates?
There aren't many negative reviews, so why is it 6.3?
I skipped it and watched it. It's actually pretty good. I think we can promote more emotions between the male and female protagonists [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]
The plot and setting are both good so far, good luck to the author💪
This book is not bad.
Good luck, good luck, author!
The novel is okay, but it's too convoluted. I'd better stop reading it in the future! Come on
After reading more than 20 chapters, there is a confusing point, why the heroine must conceal her identity, and where the hero was thrown from behind, it felt like there was no heroine the night before, only a clone.
The plot is quite good, but the clone and the main body are so harmonious.
Very good, very good, very wonderful
Looks good, come on, come on! ! The roses in our hands, the setting sun, our youth are about to end...
There are some flaws, but overall it's pretty good.
It's well written and the plot is smooth, but I didn't understand that the main character wants to join the Public Security Bureau.
The author has been missing since September 15th. He is male and his age is unknown. The reason for his disappearance is unknown. It is unknown whether the missing person has family members and whether a case can be filed.