An Ordinary Worker in the Apocalypse

The first 58 chapters are full of ambiguity, and the rest is about what you want to read. Don't ask me why I know [laughs evilly].

Thank you for your valuable opinions. I will definitely make more corrections*^_^* Solemn promise: I will not ask for leave for 100 days. Don't ask me why [currently in progress] ps: The protagonist is an ordinary person in the early stage, there is no invincibility system, and there is no prophet rebirth. He is an innocent little virgin in the early stage, but in the later stage he becomes [admiration][admiration][admiration]

The book is really good and the arrangement is reasonable. The so-called dog-licking behavior in the early stage should be understood as everyone's sincerity to sincerity. This is the correct way to communicate feelings, and this is not a rebirth novel, and there is no bitterness or hatred. However, the survival mode of the male protagonist is still a bit like playing the human world, which is not suitable for this theme. The male protagonist can be shaped into an image of working hard to strengthen himself externally and being funny internally. Also why only one of the two Hans has been promoted, and Bai seems to have not. If necessary to advance the plot, I still hope that Han and Bai will be ranked first. The author must keep writing, this book is really good.

Personally, I feel good about it, but the combat power is a bit vague. There is no specific level division. The protagonist eats meat a little slowly at the beginning, but then it becomes really too fierce [laughing] [laughing]

Overall, it is invincible and fun. The two parts about amnesia and separation are a bit awkward. You need to use your brain to see it. You can just flip through it. There are quite a few plots that are foreshadowing the fun later.

I feel that most people may feel a little uncomfortable watching the first part, after all, it is a bit licking 🤦, but the second part is fine. What is the food writer going to do? There is no meat, and what to do with the fighting power? What if someone from the girl's family comes to pick him up, but the girl's family doesn't agree? I hope the author can complete the description of the combat power and add more flesh 🍉, preferably a space ring 🍉

Not bad, not bad, but some details were not handled well, and there were a lot of punctuation errors, which did not affect the plot, but it was still a bit uncomfortable. I felt good after reading it, and the writing was okay.

After surviving the first few dozen chapters, the rest will be exciting [laughing]

Different, a post-apocalyptic novel, good!!!

Man, the writing of the novel is really good. The more you write, the better. Come on, support.