Ordinary people, extraordinary actions.
Go against the grain, fight at the top, and stand at the top.
The universe begins to revive and spiritual energy revives.
What kind of secret is hidden behind the recovery?
It's a new book for a newbie, so it might be a little dull at the beginning, but it'll be better at the end.
Reader comments
It's not bad, but I feel like the country in the book only takes the protagonist's things, only uses the protagonist, and doesn't give anything. Now it's no better than before, and it doesn't count as before. Just like Confucius said that Zilu redeemed people. Now it seems that it has finally developed a very powerful technology. The country lets you teach a few people for free. Who would be willing to do this all the time?
It's good, but there are too many heroines, bye bye [vomit]
At the beginning, I said I went home to escape the world, but then I turned a corner and taught others how to use swordsmanship and how to use swords.
It's obviously about cultivating immortals, but it's about martial arts training. Just write about martial arts training. Why write about so many women, and then write about the country?
If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. It's embarrassing.
The writing is pretty good, keep writing.
Not bad, the author should work hard
It's quite nice to see. It's a unique martial art in the city, and the flavor of aura reviving is that the Golden Finger is quite sudden. It's not like a simulation, where whatever is needed appears, and the strength increases suddenly.
It's not bad, but I feel like the country in the book only takes the protagonist's things, only uses the protagonist, and doesn't give anything. Now it's no better than before, and it doesn't count as before. Just like Confucius said that Zilu redeemed people. Now it seems that it has finally developed a very powerful technology. The country lets you teach a few people for free. Who would be willing to do this all the time?
It's good, but there are too many heroines, bye bye [vomit]
At the beginning, I said I went home to escape the world, but then I turned a corner and taught others how to use swordsmanship and how to use swords.
It's obviously about cultivating immortals, but it's about martial arts training. Just write about martial arts training. Why write about so many women, and then write about the country?
If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. It's embarrassing.
The writing is pretty good, keep writing.
Not bad, the author should work hard
It's quite nice to see. It's a unique martial art in the city, and the flavor of aura reviving is that the Golden Finger is quite sudden. It's not like a simulation, where whatever is needed appears, and the strength increases suddenly.