[✧Protagonist configuration: white hair with pink eyes + legal lolita + little devil with horns + fierce fighting]
[✧Novel type: lighthearted and funny + no male protagonist + operation upgrade + bad face system + real IKUN/little black man, please don't enter]
✧Introduction: Bai Xiaomo was originally just a cute little lolita, only 1.5 Meters tall... The originally quiet campus life was going on in an orderly manner. One day, while eating in the canteen with her best friend Qin Yu, she was choked to death by Xiao Jerry who accidentally got into the dishes...
Bai Xiaomo, who was dying, was reborn into an unknown new world. After her rebirth, she was bound to the same system as "The Combination of Ants and Spreaders", and gained the strongest initiative of Asia God at the beginning - the bottomless abyss!
Xiaomo was stunned: It's over! Now am I an Abo man?
How can Mengxin Xiaomo pass through this real dungeon of hell difficulty with only the power of Yashen? Soon Xiao Mo picked up a level 4 active synthesis treasure bag. For only 8 yuan, he could get a small locust that looked like a floating flying knife through the abyss. How would Xiao Mo rationally operate and skillfully use two powerful props to become an invincible existence?
Adventures alone are always boring. Xiaomo used the power of the system to win over the NPCs in the original game, fruit fly sister, angel sister and siren siren as partners... To form an adventure team with output, control and health recovery.
At this moment, a mysterious blue man...
But they were blocking their way in front!
[The battle between Yalan⚔ is inevitable]
"Bai Xiaomo, are you a Yamen or a Lanmen?"
"Neither, or both!"
Reader comments
[Sending Hearts] My friend is cute! It's not easy to continue this idea, so I use the plots of blockbuster movies to drive cars! Because looking back, I felt that I was really driving too fast. I wonder if I should slow down a little later?
You can watch "The Binding of Isaac" if you haven't played it. Anyway, I haven't played enough to understand this game after 1,400 hours...
Also, I absolutely do not discriminate against any game players. There is a small amount of trolling and trolling in the article, but there is absolutely no malice!
By the way, I haven't finished the revision yet. The previous plot is a bit disconnected, so it's a reworked version. The plot has been slightly revised and polished. I was not in a normal state of mind at the time. Now I look back and see how crazy the writing was. And after switching to a new mobile phone, I realized that everyone's segmentation points may be different depending on the scene. I... Well, now I feel that the segmentation is also very ugly. I will polish it a little more and wait for everyone to read it after it is finished. Hehe, I feel that it is a level better than before! But it's still very low. The road is long and far away.
It's very cute, and the main theme is a meat pigeon that clears the levels every day.
But there is a big problem, that is, I can't understand it.
There is no reference.
It's unfamiliar to people who haven't played Isaac.
For example, equipment, attributes, maps, etc.
Traditional online game writing handles these aspects very well.
Such as: equipment
[Equipment name]
[Equipment Attack and Defense]
[Equipment special effects]
[Introduction or complaint]
and characters
[Health volume (heart count)]
[Movement speed] (Xm/s) (You can also change the size of the level room into m units for reference)
[Luck] (regular luck limit or probability of obtaining rare items)
And in the following chapters, copy and paste the current total attributes every few chapters.
During battle, you can also add BOSS blood volume, damage value, blood deduction volume, current blood volume, etc.
Each of Isaac's attributes can be replaced by the popular.
That is - reference & repetition to strengthen memory & popularization (numerical visualization)
This way we can more clearly understand what the battle is like.
(After all, the theme is about pigeon fighting)
Don't be afraid of water. It's normal to make up the word count, but it can whet your appetite (condemn this behavior, and recommend more updates)
Otherwise, it would look... Very confusing.
I can feel that the author is very interesting and the protagonist is very strong, but I don't know why, but I can't relate to it.
The sword 999 is very cliché, but it has become a classic precisely because when the red damage value of "999" bursts out from the monster's head, it gives people an irreplaceable sense of satisfaction.
Congratulations, then I will be a regular reader (laughs)
I left three comments. Your perseverance is beyond my imagination.
[Sending Hearts] My friend is cute! It's not easy to continue this idea, so I use the plots of blockbuster movies to drive cars! Because looking back, I felt that I was really driving too fast. I wonder if I should slow down a little later? You can watch "The Binding of Isaac" if you haven't played it. Anyway, I haven't played enough to understand this game after 1,400 hours... Also, I absolutely do not discriminate against any game players. There is a small amount of trolling and trolling in the article, but there is absolutely no malice! By the way, I haven't finished the revision yet. The previous plot is a bit disconnected, so it's a reworked version. The plot has been slightly revised and polished. I was not in a normal state of mind at the time. Now I look back and see how crazy the writing was. And after switching to a new mobile phone, I realized that everyone's segmentation points may be different depending on the scene. I... Well, now I feel that the segmentation is also very ugly. I will polish it a little more and wait for everyone to read it after it is finished. Hehe, I feel that it is a level better than before! But it's still very low. The road is long and far away.
It's very cute, and the main theme is a meat pigeon that clears the levels every day. But there is a big problem, that is, I can't understand it. There is no reference. It's unfamiliar to people who haven't played Isaac. For example, equipment, attributes, maps, etc. Traditional online game writing handles these aspects very well. Such as: equipment [Equipment name] [Equipment Attack and Defense] [Equipment special effects] [Introduction or complaint] and characters [Health volume (heart count)] [Movement speed] (Xm/s) (You can also change the size of the level room into m units for reference) [Luck] (regular luck limit or probability of obtaining rare items) And in the following chapters, copy and paste the current total attributes every few chapters. During battle, you can also add BOSS blood volume, damage value, blood deduction volume, current blood volume, etc. Each of Isaac's attributes can be replaced by the popular. That is - reference & repetition to strengthen memory & popularization (numerical visualization) This way we can more clearly understand what the battle is like. (After all, the theme is about pigeon fighting) Don't be afraid of water. It's normal to make up the word count, but it can whet your appetite (condemn this behavior, and recommend more updates) Otherwise, it would look... Very confusing. I can feel that the author is very interesting and the protagonist is very strong, but I don't know why, but I can't relate to it. The sword 999 is very cliché, but it has become a classic precisely because when the red damage value of "999" bursts out from the monster's head, it gives people an irreplaceable sense of satisfaction. Congratulations, then I will be a regular reader (laughs)
I left three comments. Your perseverance is beyond my imagination.
Big cheers for the author