Rebirth************

I hope the author can always remain productive

I hope the author doesn't want to be a eunuch. Reading the latest chapter in one go is not enough.

Actually, I personally think it's okay [thinking] However, after reading other comments, I realized that different people do have different feelings. Some are attracted by the introduction, want to see the daily life relaxed and have the fun of cheating, and some can't accept the male protagonist's harem. From a personal point of view, the only bad thing is probably the description of the battle on the Yakuza side. There are no details and the progress is very fast. In other aspects, I don't think there are any big problems. The writing is okay, not bad, not bad, passing mark. Maybe it just feels like the author didn't think much about the general direction of the work. Now there are too many elements in the book, which has become a poisonous point for book lovers who want to read specific content. There will indeed be many negative reviews. For example, the yandere who was rescued was a bit difficult for me to accept personally, but some people also like to see yandere. I don't know what to say. I hope the author will continue writing. He's just a bad reader. Come on

Come on, the writing is good. The only thing I want to ask is who is the heroine?

To be honest, I still like this book. Although there are some parts of the content that I really don't want to read. I even think that the addition of some characters ruins the plot, but it does not affect my desire to continue to support this book. The story in it cannot be said well, but it is indeed better here. As I continue reading, as long as I can accept some of the poison in it, this book is still very good. Perhaps the character of the protagonist is not very popular with readers. This book is also a slow-burning type and has always been tepid. I hope to see the end. Come on, the author. I like to see a better plot and a better ending.

I would like to make a suggestion, don't write about the clichéd urban style of daily light novels. In the early days of Huang Mao, I had a strong sense of urban novels, but overall it is still good-looking, with some shortcomings, but it has already formed the prototype of a good Japanese novel, just like 7. Crow's bad girlfriend. No matter how badly she was scolded in the early stage, the future will be more interesting. Come on! I believe the author will write better and better!

I've just finished reading the first volume. Overall, it doesn't have any bad points. The writing is also good. I don't quite understand it. I feel like the rating could be higher. Overall, it's a pretty good part of Tomato, and I would recommend it to friends if they ask.

Can you please stop taking a break and typing 24 hours a day? It's totally not enough. Also, will you continue to have contact with the eldest lady in the future? Will the protagonist's job later turn into working for a large group and then get involved?

The writing is very detailed, although the characters are rich, but the control of details and the logic and order of the characters' appearances are very good. The emotions of the characters look very comfortable, and the development is full, without any sudden feeling. It is a rare masterpiece among the brainless harems of Tomatoes. Especially in the third volume, the plot is still developing steadily, which is really good! ! !

Hope it gets more exposure! ! ! You write very well, don't underestimate yourself! The writing, logic, plot, etc. Are all very good, neither arrogant nor arrogant. Their situations and stories are well connected. There is no inexplicable burst of strength that defies the sky, the earth, and the air, and there are no plots that are brainless, logical, and boring. One of the few excellent works. Come on and support you. The book is obviously very good. If anyone sees this comment, please help the author click a small reminder. This book is obviously an excellent book. I think it lacks exposure and the results are a bit bleak. Let me give three good reasons. 1. I think the book's characters, plot, environment, and logic are all very good. It's in the middle and upper reaches, and it's not overly unreasonable or illogical. The plots are intertwined, the story is well drawn, the male and female protagonists have full characters, their personalities are clear and the things they do are very logical. The storyline unfolds from point to point, first yourself, then colleagues, boss, friends - they also have their own stories and interact with the protagonist. It's worth tasting and watching. 2. I think the author writes carefully. I have seen many, many good books abandoned because of lack of exposure, which is not a pity. 3. This author is very hard-working, updates a lot of chapters every day, and is very diligent, which is rare. It is a great help.

Author, five stars are given, but don't forget the other one: Western Fantasy Sign-in

Five-star review. Although the male protagonist's character is a bit hesitant, but unlike other novels, the boy and girl do not refuse or agree to get along even if they are in a good relationship. I don't know whether the god will be released in the next volume or the last volume. So I don't understand, it's only been a few hours since I watched it, and I haven't even finished watching the plot yet, and I'm writing a review. Are you serious? What kid is talking about? Post the method. If you have the money, let's do it together.

I want Kamen Rider. When will Rider be written?

Shuangwen, it looks okay in the beginning, but I don't know in the later stage.

Good books should be rewarded. I feel comfortable reading them so far, but I would like to ask if the author also likes the New Year series [laughter]

It's a great book, why doesn't anyone read it? [Eating Melon] I finished reading it in one sitting.

I don't know why the rating is so low. As a Tokyo novel, it fits my fantasy perfectly. I like this very much.

It's beautiful. The author's writing is very good. He writes everyone's mood and makes each character come alive. I recommend it.

In addition to the details, it still needs polishing, and the characterization of the main characters is basically complete. The plot is relatively coherent before Chapter 50, but becomes slightly disjointed after the gang. Evaluation: The characters in the plot are all within the routine. Although they have not escaped from it, they have made some innovations. It is a good online novel. Suggestion: Draw psychological descriptions and try to create innovative characters. Eliminate cluttered plots, and don't stall! No stallion! No stallion! Say important things three times.

I'm dying by raising books. Alas, I'll give you a review and sweep my grave [crying]

Yes, as an anime lover, I still like this type of subject matter. I hope the author can continue to work hard

I'm probably the last one [almost crying]

It's obviously well written, but why is it so little popular?

Can this novel really be finished? With so many female characters [face covering] can the author of Shura Field handle it in the later stage? [What]

I hope the author will be more active and ask for more 5 stars. There will be more than 100 reminders for updates, but less than 10 people will rate it, and none of the books will be rated. Also, I want to ask, is this book a harem?

Damn it, why do books of this type have so few words?

I won't say anything else, it must be five stars.

Don't get me wrong, these five stars don't belong to you, they belong to Eri Uesugi in Chapter 76

It feels great. Why is the rating so low?

It's a pretty good book, why doesn't anyone read it?