Qingmeng Xianyuan

It feels relatively fresh, unconventional, friendly and natural. At first glance, it feels a bit watery and the pace is not fast. But gradually I feel that it looks more real, immersive and comfortable. Come on, author,

The writing is good, and the writing style of the article is very good. As an old bookworm, I have one thing to say. According to the traditional customs of cultivating immortals, one cannot have spiritual consciousness before building the foundation, let alone release it, because Qi training monks can only open the lower Dantian, and the upper Dantian can only be opened after building the foundation. It is also called Zifudang, except for those with extraordinary talents.

This novel is very well written, and the author's skills are also very good. I just want to relax while reading the novel, but to read a novel, you have to be humane and sophisticated. Although I think it should be like this, if I were the protagonist, I would try my best to be like this, but I am the reader, not the protagonist, so I feel a little uncomfortable and uncomfortable reading it! Even so, I still give it five stars, hoping that the author can go one step further between refreshing and rational.

I feel like the plot is good. It's still developing into a cultivating family. It has past life memories and a corresponding lifestyle. It's very good. There are no ambiguous adjectives in the description of women, and there is no harem for the time being. I personally feel good about it, like it👍 I have read almost 300 chapters, and the first part is very satisfying. As soon as he entered the sect, he not only flirted with women, but also found some modern words such as "soldier" and "company commander", which still felt strange. And he always stands out, loves to show off, and everyone revolves around the protagonist. Personally, I think the gap is a bit big. I'm a little disappointed, I can't stand it anymore, so I quit, I'm sorry.

Let me say a few words after seeing this. The overall writing style is good, witty and humorous, with occasional tension, and some small knowledge points combined with reality are also small highlights. What I have given so far is ten grains, which are edible. However, the overall writing is a bit "stuck" and feels frustrating. The explanations during practice are average, but the process of advanced training lacks a sense of urgency. There is no wave-by-wave advancement, which makes people eager to read the next chapter. For example, if you look at some stories that travel through fictional history, when the protagonist goes out to fight, you can't just write about the war. You should also combine the preparation of materials, strategic layout, conspiracy, the opponent's reaction, and finally the exciting battlefield battle. This is a wave of compactness. Anyway, it's just my personal suggestion. I hope the author will write better and better in the future. First give me five stars for support. Also, can anyone answer my question? After all, who stipulated that the duel of cultivators involves throwing skills from a distance? This setting? ? ? As soon as the main character is mentioned in the book, the comments are in trouble. From the earlier journey to Piaomiao, Zhu Xian and others also had close combat. Not to mention our traditional apotheosis of gods, Journey to the West, Erlangshen and the Great Sage all have to be physically sanctified. Heavenly soldiers and generals also come down to earth with weapons to "suppress bandits" The master master invited by the Four-Eyed God also hit a zombie with a hammer, so why did he have to lose his functions? ? ? Some comments said that Xiu Zhen's fighting involves losing abilities from a distance. Wouldn't that make me laugh to death? ? ? The duel of cultivators is a 360-degree indiscriminate attack on the spirit and terrain. In fact, the later stages of Dragon Ball are more consistent, except that there is no spiritual attack.

The writing is up to standard, the ideas are novel, the plot is reasonable, and the pace is not sluggish. There is almost no word count, but there is just a little too much explanation. What I like most about this book is that all the pitfalls are filled in, and the protagonist leaves no regrets. Only the origin of a mysterious light group at the end is not revealed, and it is agreed to be revealed in the next book. It is quite good.

It's a pretty good novel, but there's nothing special about it.

It's well written. It's the best novel I've read recently. The author keeps it up. It's great. A little suggestion, but give the protagonist some setbacks appropriately. If it is written smoothly all the time, it will be a bit dull. For specific content, please refer to Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. The protagonist has so many talents and treasures, but he does not crush them randomly when fighting against his peers. Those who cultivate to become immortals will always have their merits. Also, since you have written Taoist couples, you cannot write Taoist couples as backgrounds, allowing them to participate in the plot at the right time, or to follow the protagonist's footsteps by chance. As an old reader, sometimes I don't actually hate Taoist couples, but as a man, and the most important other half in life is a dispensable person. It makes me uncomfortable to think about it. The above are some small suggestions. I hope the author will write better and better. I give you a thumbs up👍🏻!

After reading it, the score is as I thought, 8.8, 8 Is passing, 9 is excellent, and 9.5 Is a masterpiece! If I had read this book ten years ago, I would have scored 9.2! Now I can only score 8.8 Points! Good work too! The work as a whole has no flaws and nothing particularly fascinating. It is a straightforward narrative! The designed Chinese martial arts fighting style is pretty good! The general framework is considered a traditional fairy tale! The rebirth of design can also be done without being obtrusive! The protagonist's character is very Chinese-style, smooth and sophisticated, and it would be impossible to write about it without some experience! He can have the heart of a Bodhisattva and the angry eyes of a Vajra! It can be seen that the author spent a lot of effort to understand the fighting design of the Chinese martial arts. Although there are flaws, the flaws are not hidden! It can be seen that I was a complete layman before, but it is great to be able to write it through the combination of literature! The author's writing skills are also very solid, and he feels very talented! Now the only thing left to get out of the circle is experience! The story must have pain points and empathy, and the technique of suppressing first and then elevating must be perfect! Every masterpiece has famous scenes! Finally, congratulations to the author for the perfect ending of his first work! Looking forward to your follow-up! Come on!

After reading the first and second chapters, I already felt that it was well written, with content and soul. I saw Chapter 7. The writing is concise and orderly with good details and informative content. The author's meticulous writing and wisdom are revealed between the lines! When I saw Chapter 103, the author made the characters flesh and blood and soul. The summary of Chapter 130 is very insightful! Chapter 316 is so relevant that the characters have souls. The post-war part of Chapter 515 feels a bit watery. The ending is very good. The earth is also a prison. The protagonist uses the formation to revive the aura of the earth. There will also be immortal cultivators on the earth! I hope the author will write a second book about cultivating immortals on earth, and imagine that Earth's scientific civilization plus cultivating immortals will really compete for hegemony in the universe!

It's worth watching, I read more than 400 chapters in two days. The writing is good and the writing is witty and humorous. The protagonist is decisive in killing, brave and resourceful. During the Qi refining period, he has a more playful sense of joy. After establishing the foundation, he becomes mature but less interesting. As for the heroine, I very much agree with the author's concept. A Taoist companion does not necessarily have to find a noble girl from a noble family. In the early stage, she is not recognized because she is not strong enough. In the later stage, it is a cliched plot that only ends with a fight. It is enough to have someone who will always be waiting for you in the sect when you travel.

It is really a breath of fresh air in the novels about cultivating immortals. Now I just think about cultivating immortals, encounters, opportunities, killing people and grabbing treasures, etc. The author does not follow traditional routines, but depicts the protagonist's daily life. The author's character description is so good. Although it is not a perfect character, this is the expression of human character. Great talent, this book really shouldn't be read by so few people [Like] [Like]

I finished reading it seriously without skipping a beat. I really like this kind of emotionally delicate work. The particularly touching plot was the part where Yang Sen and Princess Yu went to the mortal world to refine their hearts. In the end, Princess Rain grew old and her son grew old. I was really moved to tears.

First of all, I have to say that I personally cannot give 5 stars to this book, but this is Tomato. This book is already very good, and I personally recommend reading it. As far as the quality of this book is concerned, the author himself has a clear understanding of it, so I won't say much. From a reader's perspective, I really feel the author's writing attitude and efforts, so I would like to say thank you! This is a well-told and fascinating story. From my point of view, the words themselves have no meaning, they are just symbols. What gives the words meaning is the person who uses it. Some people are good at using words and arranging them. This is called style and writing skills. Furthermore, giving these permutations and combinations a unique personal color makes the text more meaningful and infectious, which is a unique writing personality. In fact, the root of the novel is not the words, but how to tell a story well so that people have the desire to continue reading or listening. This is the really difficult thing. Because the stories in this world are so similar that there aren't many new ones anymore, so how to tell the stories that are so similar and compelling is really difficult. Thanks again to the author!

It's quite interesting, but the character of the protagonist looks a bit uncomfortable. I look forward to seeing him grow step by step and become a powerful Nascent Soul. But don't go too fast. It's almost a cool book. Leisure is the essence of this book. Since it is leisure, there will be no war or anything in the end, just a small fight.

The plot is reasonable and clever. The author is a person with a positive outlook on life and values. The story has ups and downs and is very down-to-earth, but not lacking in humor. I only commented after reading it because I don't know how to praise the author because I don't have enough words. Finally, I sent a gift to express my feelings.

It's very difficult, not mindless, the author put his heart into it! Come on!

It's very interesting. I'm following it now. Come on, author!

The writing is indeed very beautiful, there are no weird Taoism or anything like that, the rhythm is also very good, and I felt very relaxed while reading it. I finished reading it all at once when I had nothing to do.

It has a slow pace, a bit of flavour, and a sense of reality. It is different from most fairy tales about fighting and killing. Although there are some flaws, such as unreasonable data, the flaws cannot be concealed. Keep working hard.

Very well written! This is my fourth favorite fantasy novel after "Humanity Supreme" and "Emperor" by Zizhu, and "Peerless Martial God" by Jing Wuhen! The writing is delicate in describing emotions, the scenery is beautifully and concretely described, the language is humorous (it could be a little bolder), it is an in-depth exploration of the human heart and human nature, and it faces the choice between love and selfish desires in the face of a shocking opportunity... It is worth reading. There are also some flaws, and it is also because the villain and the descendant of a big family are too domineering, ignorant and fearless, which contrasts with the protagonist. I recommend this book to all my Taoist friends! I hope it can be optimized in future masterpieces. Come on, look forward to you! !

I really like this type of book. The protagonist has a low-key personality and is not a virgin. He fights when he should and is friends without being selfish. Although many details are not handled well, the flaws do not hide the flaws and do not hinder it. It is a good book. I hope the author will be more delicate in the details in the next book.

The protagonist's temperament is very suitable to my taste. He is sunny and kind, but decisive and straightforward in doing things. Not evil, not holy. There are no endless killings or endless plots in the book. I read many novels but gave up halfway, but this is the only one I read in one sitting. Cultivation is not about fighting and killing, it is about worldliness, love👩‍❤️‍👨, friendship, and family affection, only then can the Taoist heart be perfected, and only then can the Tao be achieved.

This article is the best one in Tomato. The author's writing skills are good and the fighting process is thrilling. The first chapters may be boring to those who are impatient, but the later chapters are exciting and interesting. If the level is maintained at this level, it should be the best novel about cultivating immortals in recent years.

It is rich in emotion, clear in structure, and logically smooth. As a bookworm of thirty years, this is a rare book. I can't believe it when the author says it is his first time writing a book. I look forward to the follow-up works.

After reading "Qingmeng Xianyuan", I feel like I am in a fantasy world. The characters are vivid, the emotions are delicate, and the bravery and persistence of the protagonists are moving. It makes us understand that we need to move forward bravely to pursue our dreams, and also reminds us to cherish the people around us. This book is a spiritual journey and an evocative one.

It was the first time the author wrote a book, and it was really great to be able to write it to this level. I read it in one go for three days in a row, and I couldn't help but give it a five-star review. The overall idea of ​​this book is clear, the details are delicate and touching, and the language is humorous. After reading it, it also makes people think deeply. How do people live a real life? I am deeply inspired. There are some shortcomings in some parts of the content, but the flaws are outweighed. It is a relaxing and interesting novel about cultivating immortals that is worth reading. I wish the author will continue to work hard and write more exciting masterpieces about immortality.

The author is very attentive, the details are well described, and the writing style is also good. The content of the article is still relatively close to reality, unlike many articles about cultivating immortals, which are mindless killings, purely quick-tongued, and I will kill you if I don't like it. They have no sense of the world and just do whatever they want. I can only say that those authors themselves are losers in real life. The protagonist of this book is flesh and blood, his actions are logical, his progress is logical, and he has a normal attitude toward his relatives, classmates, friends, and enemies. Overall, this is the most normal article about cultivating immortality that I have seen, bar none. The score of 8.8 Is indeed not in line with the actual level of the article, and 9.5 Is about the same.

It's plain and bland, but has some flaws. It's very suitable for older readers. Before entering the sect, there was a feeling that Taoism was natural, but after entering the sect, it was inexplicable. It is not recommended to read the later part

The storyline is good and engaging enough. There are very few typos. The author is very serious.