Comprehensive Comic: I Am a Military Advisor in a Love Story

Nice. It's more in line with my taste, but I still don't like Cheng. I hope to transition to the next plot quickly.

Hehe, the first paragraph is finally coming to an end [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh] (The first paragraph is Brother Cheng. Although the characters are a bit explosive and the pig teammates are a bit scary, but a strategist is a strategist after all) Xiaodu persuaded him to quit at the beginning, but this was not the fault of the author or the protagonist, it was simply the lightning strike at the opening and Brother Cheng's "charm". Of course, people who don't know much about the original work can also read the comment section. I just read the comment section to understand... Well, Brother Cheng's father is really born! There is nothing wrong with the author's plot arrangement and the protagonist's reaction. Because it is a comprehensive comic, the protagonist can come into contact with more than just the people in Brother Cheng's world, and he doesn't have to worry about watching the epiglottis to help Brother Cheng all the time. There are still daily lines for the protagonist. Overall (so far) it's relatively relaxed, and there's also the jealousy towards Brother Cheng when the "pig teammates" appear! (Worship the military advisor and despise Brother Cheng) At present, it seems that it is a single heroine. Of course, monogamy is also good (one husband, one wife [smile] [smile]). After all, who can resist the charm of the great teacher's personality? Judging from the author's intention and the protagonist's performance, there will be a single female protagonist in the future... Well, but the protagonist's charm is not bad. I wonder if there will be more "lost dogs" in the future (the first "lost dog" has already appeared, everyone, come and watch!) Day, forgot. Author ~ You know [you taste carefully] [you taste carefully]

Not bad, not bad. I love this kind of strategist so much. It feels so good to have a harem to make up for my regrets without thinking. I look forward to the Hikigaya chapter. Redeem hiki for me

The writing is good, and it even makes me feel that most of the characters are acceptable to me. I don't hate even characters like Brother Cheng. Of all the characters that have appeared so far, I only hate a certain lady with white hair and red eyes. In terms of dislike, I think this character is the MVP among all the characters.

Super, super, super good-looking. By the way, I want to challenge the limits of men. Every like is converted into 5 push-ups [laughing] @

The male protagonist's character is really likable Moreover, the author used his delicate writing style to make the image of Tokka-chan, who did not appear too much in the original work, more vivid. The most important thing is that the male protagonist has self-judgment and decisiveness, and is not indecisive in relationships. If you like it, you just like it. If you don't like it, you can make it clear. This book is really a breath of fresh air in the two-dimensional series.

Although I don't like Brother Cheng, the plot is very interesting. It may be a bit foreshadowing in the early stage, but the momentum will pick up later. The main characters still have distinct personalities.

Really, it's rare to see Cue Cheng write such a good book. The emotional line of the protagonist is also very well written. The heroine Shihua can make up for a regret.

A rare comprehensive comic novel with a single female protagonist, very good. And the most important thing is that sugar is a little more troublesome. We have low blood sugar and like to eat sugar [Like][Like][Like]

Although I only read the first part and put it on the bookshelf to gather dust, this book is really good. I read it a long time ago and now that I think about it... I can only say that the protagonist is really unique and each character is very vivid, which allowed me to see the real world of comics! [Love]

To be honest, the protagonist of this book is so palatable. For a comprehensive comic, I agree! [Salute] By the way - the protagonist and Toka are really close to each other [full] So when did the great teacher get together with the protagonist [Dog Head]🐶 I hope the author can add pictures to the characters, otherwise it will be difficult for people like me who have never seen the original work to imagine it, please 🙏🏻

It's great, the subject matter is something I've wanted to read for a long time. The characters are also well presented, and the writing style is very natural, with foreshadowing and foreshadowing. If it were clearer, more readers would discover it, and it would be more exciting. This is not a reminder from the author, of course, it is just a suggestion. Overall, I highly recommend watching it [Like]

The novels you write are awesome. The plot is coherent and compact, the characters are very distinct, and the theme is also very prominent. The narrative of the full text is concentrated and unbranched, the language is simple and smooth, and the feelings are sincere and touching. I wish you good health, smooth work, and write well~

It's just that I'm ignorant. This book is the only book that I like the most during the half-year book drought. It's really awesome. After seeing the latest chapter, I still want to come back and say one more thing. The writing is so awesome and it is really beautiful. I especially like the feeling of the protagonist crushing the opponent's military advisor, and the protagonist and Shihuatian are outrageous. But will the protagonist and the great teacher be together? (Japan implements monogamy, the wife is Toka, the husband is a great teacher, and the married person is the protagonist [laughter]

The book is very good! Very sweet! There is no other comprehensive manga where the male protagonist has an affair with several women [sends my heart] and the plot is very well integrated👍 It has been updated to chapter 233 and I have read it. It is almost harmless, but the part about Yukinoshita Haruno in the back really makes me feel uncomfortable [smiles] Although Knowing that her character is like that [aggrieved], it would be great if the protagonist just asks her to beat her up (even though I know it's impossible). Or the protagonist threatens her with the things she did to the media (Protagonist: Yukinoshita Harano, you don't want it either... Cough... Cough...) Also, if the author sees it, can he arrange a plot for the comic exhibition so that the protagonist can cosplay Sasuke [Send Heart] It would be super cool if he could talk to the crow! Join if you can: Dressing dolls fall in love! Let the protagonist help Gojo Shina chase Kitagawa Umume [laughs] By the way, cosplay can also write the plot! Kill multiple birds with one stone! [Crazy]

It's really good-looking, the world is well integrated, and the plot is not too abrupt, giving people a natural feeling. The overall framework of this book is about 1.6 Million words, plus some ordinary side tasks, and it is more watery, and it can be written about 2.2 Million words. This length is just right, not too short, leaving people unfinished, and not too long, making people feel boring. You can know that the author has carefully thought about it. The author makes some small suggestions, which are my personal understanding. The main plot can be slowed down a little, and some movie overheads can be interspersed in the middle, such as "I Want to Eat Your Pancreas". It mainly writes about the male and female protagonists watching their emotions, so that their own emotions can be improved, making the plot more compact and not too rushed, and because it is so good-looking, I really can't bear to let it end too early [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] I hope the author's writing style will be smooth and smooth, and he will write more every day! ! ! A little more! ! ! A little more! ! !

I won't talk about the plot. Just the gathering of these people is already very exciting, and the male protagonist is no less than the four tyrants on campus. In short, I just want to comment, I would like to call you the fifth tyrant on campus. The first-class Cowherd.

This book gave me the feeling of watching a new romance show. Some of the author's original plots are also great, and the writing style is particularly in line with my taste. Compared with Tomato's famous sugar book, the love in this book is less realistic, but more fantasy. This is one of the reasons why I like to read it. The delicate description of emotions between adults makes me uncomfortable reading it. The sugar content is also just right, without industrial saccharin, and the main plot begins to have a bit of a campus fantasy feel. The author seems to want to play a big game. Good-looking, but not enough

It's so awesome. After reading dozens of chapters, I can tell that the author's writing style is very awesome. And there is no lack of details at all, it really has a good sense of immersion, and it is not toxic at all. It's simply a masterpiece!

The author wrote it well. I originally read it after seeing Tohka, but ended up falling in love with Setsuna Kiyura. Although her behavior was very excessive, her thoughts were quite distressing. And how can I put it, Tohka is currently relatively peripheral and not in the main plot. She only exists to make love, while Setsuna plays a role in the main plot, so she seems more charming. I really think the author writes well, I quite like Toka, but this has the buff of animation, and Setsuna is really because of the author's good portrayal (I have never played the game, nor watched the animation), so I like it very much (at least I do), and the battle between the two military divisions is super interesting. I really want to see the defense broken in the last moment, and then the Shura field. Really, I don't mind the author's stock trading at all [thinking], just write an if at the end

It is a very good book, the best among all the comics I have ever read. Whether it is the rendering of the environment or the description of the characters' emotions, it has the flavor of a Japanese comic. He is said to be a strategist, but in fact he is fulfilling our dreams in the name of a strategist and gathering those regrets into a truly happy ending. If possible, I hope to see the story of Otonashi Yuzuru in Angel's Heartbeat meeting the protagonist and Tachibana Kanade in the real world before his death, or to change the imperfect ending with Clannad Tomoe Okazaki and Nagisa Furukawa. I hope the author can adopt it [blowing kiss]

A very novel setting. It feels good to see this for the first time. The male protagonist is not a stallion, which makes me feel very happy [Like] The main plot is the same as the title of the book, helping characters in other anime fall in love The hidden line is the emotional line between the male protagonist and the little bird Yu Shihua (Author, if you don't do a single female protagonist, I will kill you) The plot is very interesting and not monotonous (it's just that the appearance of the crow makes it feel a bit... Unexplainable) All in all, I highly recommend reading it (I hope it won't destroy the characters in the original work too much) [Chigua] The character descriptions are also quite distinctive (I feel like if you speak in a pornographic tone, you will become popular faster) [Chigua] Well, the characters in the front are still very distinct and the expressions are very clear. They are not much different from the original work. The plot is also advanced along with the original work. It's not bad. The most important point is that the system appears less, which is a correct decision. Well, and the props given by the system do not seriously exceed this world view, extra points. You can read the summary and recommend it [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [love] [please ask for more updates] [please ask for more updates]

I have been reading novels for four years. This is one of the few novels that focuses on daily love that I have read. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

This book kept me going for two hours. I have to say that the author's idea is indeed very interesting. In terms of the article, it is overly smooth and the language is smooth. It is a novel worth reading. It is just a little short. It would be bad if the author was shorter, right? [Please update]

It can be said that he really read the original work before writing it. The author is very careful in shaping the characters, and even those who have not read the original work can understand it. (I hope there is only one male protagonist, Shihua. Give me a Shihua who gets married inexplicably and one I know about)

When the story finally comes to an end There are all kinds of feelings in my heart Except for the moonlight, I will accompany you all the way There are also those who were so moved that they shed tears The scars and helplessness of the past All turned into dust behind Regain the attitude of the first encounter into the sea of time When I look back, my old friend is no longer there Suddenly I realize that the past cannot be pursued Who lit the fire to dispel the haze The sword left behind intersects with hope. Stepping through this parting platform Going to a future with no end date Leave a blank space for the chapter of reunion Go to Beyond the Galaxy Even though it's hard to leave, I still say goodbye The story exists because of you and me it will last because of love as you expect

I really love the single heroine Toka. Although it is a mixture of many animes, the author has handled it very well, but there are several styles of painting that are difficult to imagine together. Come on, two updates a day is really too little.

Except for a few places where it looked a bit frustrating, the rest was okay, pretty good. Especially the sweet love with Shihua, it's hard not to poke a needle [laughter] Okay, okay, let's write it this way. The first scene with Kiyura Setsuna is disgusting, and the second scene with Haruno is disgusting. This book has nothing but Toka. Okay, it's a free book, right? We can't do anything about it. The worst thing is, I'll delete it and stop reading it. I'll give it two stars.

From my point of view, it is a good romantic comedy novel, interspersed with various interesting plots, from Brother Cheng at the beginning (for me, this part is not very good, mainly because I don't like this anime, the plot is well handled, I simply don't like the characters, referring to Brother Cheng) to Xiaoniaoyu, the big teacher, and the master's characterization are all good, and the interaction with Xiaoniayou is also very good. It may be due to the later review that it crashed a bit and ended in a hurry. Overall, it is a good daily novel.

The rating of this novel should not be 8.4. The transition sentences in each chapter are very good, and the characteristics of all characters are fully understood. Regarding Ito Makoto's love expression, the anime plot has already explained everything, otherwise he would not have been stabbed.