The Little Witch Kidnapped the Saint Again

When I first read it, I was very surprised. I thought this novel was very good. Why are so few people reading it? After watching it for a while, I found that the switching of perspectives between the two heroines is indeed novel, but it is too frequent. The story here is not finished before cutting to the other side, giving people a feeling of neither going up nor down. There is no need to change the perspective from one chapter to the next. It is very uncomfortable to watch such an abrupt end. But I have to say that it is indeed a good novel, but I don't know why so few people have read it.

Very good, very exciting. This is the first time I have seen the two heroines in Lily's novel. The growth plot lines of the two heroines are so clearly separated. I feel like this title is very novel. It allows people to better compare the growth experiences of the two heroines. It's just that the description of the battle feels a little loose. From the growth of the two heroines to meeting each other, and then slowly falling in love with each other, combined with the comparison of the growth experience of the little witch, I am really curious now. At the end, if Tiandao finds out that the little cabbage he has blessed and cultivated himself has been taken over by the person he tried every means to kill, what kind of plot will develop [laughing]

It's so beautiful. I finished it in one day. It's not enough at all. It's really, really good-looking. The two heroines are both powerful. They have status, status and appearance. The two heroines have very interesting personalities. It's really good-looking. The recommendation index is 99+ stars.

Now that I have read the previous part, let me talk about my impressions. Failure to do a good job in dividing the plot resulted in a serious separation of perceptions, and the character creation in the early stage was blunt or even not created at all. The worldview is complete but the method of explaining it is not very good. It is like a narration that talks a lot. The explanation is very clear but it is not suitable for novels. For improvement, you can refer to the worldview in Lord of Mysteries. Most of the worldview information comes from other people's mouths, the protagonist's reasoning, or letters and diaries. Narration-style explanations will greatly reduce the immersion. There are also advantages. The writing is concise and capable, which is my favorite style. In short, there are many problems in the first part, and the score of more than 8 points is expected. The motivation for reading comes from the expectation of the meeting between the two protagonists, and I hope that the subsequent story can cover up the shortcomings of the previous part.

The plot is very interesting and the content is very novel, but I don't know if it's because I've watched too many climax plots. After three-quarters of it, I still feel like I don't have the desire to continue watching. So I quit now. Come on, author [like][like]!

It's super good-looking, and I really admire the author's great conception. I came to read this book after reading "Senior Sister Who Went Through Books to Become a Villain, How the Heroine Turned Dark First". I liked both books very much. I hope the author can write more books. I can't get enough of it! ! ! ! ! ! ! From now on, the author is my goddess! ! ! ! ! !

I think it's very beautiful. Recommended recommended recommended! ! ! ! ! It's really super pretty [lick the screen][lick the screen]

It looks good and I like it. I hope it will continue to be sweet!

I came to read this book after reading Senior Sister. It can be considered an early book by the author. The writing is relatively young, and the dialogue and plot are a bit vague and inconsistent, but overall it is a good quality novel.

It's beautiful, and the two heroines are sober. It's not the kind of mindless cool article. You are very strong and you have made it this far through your own efforts. The characters in it are also very powerful, and the names are nice.

The Little Witch actually has high attack and low reception, which made me laugh to death😌It is also very beautiful. I think this novel with two heroines is the 8th best novel I have ever read😁The first one is of course our Liu Qingqing and Lin Lu.

It's ok, but you need a little patience in the beginning (I said there was no pressure after watching it all [cool]), but the progress picks up quickly later on, and it's a bit rough in the middle ([I almost cried] except for the elder sister who may have had a bit of a knife), but the rest is pretty good [heartfelt]

A very good article on Lily's cultivation of immortality! The rhythm control is very good, but the parallel narration of the two lines in the early stage is a bit difficult, and the detailed description of the plot is a bit lacking, but the rest can be said to be impeccable! There is almost no abuse, the fragrant, soft and sweet text is a piece of mouth! (≧∇≦) A common problem with fairy tales is that (personal feelings don't matter) the setting is too hard to remember, but it doesn't affect the viewing experience at all. (Doesn't affect watching girls post

The first five-star review of the Tomato novel, I can only say that it is well deserved. I have read it no less than seven times from beginning to end, but I don't know when the author will release a new book ( ´•̥̥̥ω•̥̥̥` )

The author's writing style is mature, the descriptions are natural and not pretentious, the plot is reasonable and interesting, and the characters, through some plots and stories, are vividly written on the page with just a few words, which is great.

I love reading this kind of novel. It's so cool. I finished it in half a day. I hope you'll read more. I really like the relationship between the two of them. It's so beautiful. Why are so few people reading it? I don't know what I want to write about in my next book. Can you ask for a good novel about two heroines in the era? I've been looking for a long time and only a few books are written in a relatively obscure way. I'm not happy with this. I hope there will be one similar to this one.

I really like the author's writing style, but I was too rushed at the end. Maybe because the results were not good, I wanted to end it quickly. At least there was no eunuch, and I can see that the author had many ideas but couldn't write them, such as the two plots of the town and amnesia. It's a pity.

It's true that it's plain and simple. There are few fairy tales that feel comfortable to read. There's no abuse, no misunderstandings, and the bloody plot of modern romance in the world of cultivating immortals. It would be nice if there were dozens more chapters after Ascension. Later, the heroine becomes a god in one step. The big boss is solved too quickly, and she looks like she's in a hurry to finish. [Pouts]

It's been a long time since I've seen an article that suits my taste so well. It's a fairy tale. I love it so much. I'm a picky person who insists on reading so few articles of this type. [Crying] It satisfies my cunning self. [Crying] Don't finish it. Let's do some extras.

The author's writing is very good, and the intention and path of cultivating immortality are also very beautiful, which makes our eyes bright. The love between the two heroines is also very sweet. Although it is a bit tricky, it is nothing to be afraid of. The heroine is a child born from her two mothers who used the power of reincarnation. Although the other heroine was restricted by the way of heaven, in the end, the heroine became the new way of heaven and this restriction was released. The two became immortals together, became a Taoist couple, and stayed together forever.

It's pretty good, and the ending, especially the descriptions of most of the customs in the Fuyuan world are mostly reasonable and humorous, more in line with my personal imagination of the worldview of the cultivation world. However, there was a period of time in the later period when Chuchu's presence was indeed much lower. I look forward to the stories and characters in the next work. Good luck, author.

It's very interesting. I watched it for 4 days in a row and finally finished it! The character design is awesome! Highly recommended! ! ! A very interesting fantasy fairy tale! Fu: The electric light dancing on your fingertips is my eternal faith in this life. Chu: "Okay, no matter what the future holds, let's go together." Finally, the ending is a bit rushed. I could write more or make a sequel.

It's really beautiful! The two protagonists are very smart, the heroine is very refreshing in her behavior, and she really likes group portraits. Although there are many supporting characters, I can't always remember them, but the characters are all cute, and the evaluation can be higher!

It's very pretty. If you don't look at it, it's your loss [laughing]

The biggest advantage of this book is that it ends in HE, but the biggest disadvantage is that there are no extras! No extras! I want to watch sweet extras! !

Not much to say, I finished reading it in two days. It is the first book written by the author. I think it is very good. It has color and taste. You can eat it with confidence.

Personally, I feel that there is a little little interaction between the two heroines, but the plot is the type I like.

It's super beautiful, five-star review, Fu Moyang and Chu Yan Xuanyin are very sweet, and the two mothers are also super strong [rolls eyes]

Not bad. I feel like the author's writing style doesn't support the writing of that kind of long story. The plot is very fast in the later stages, but the most important thing is that the logic is relatively complete. There is nothing very 2-point. The third book has two female protagonists who are rewarded. I strongly support reading it [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]

It's very interesting. I just want to say: The author will update soon! ! ! ! !