HP: When She Is the Devil, She Is the Professional

Although she is a devil, Dora is very gentle. . . Speaking of which, the name Dora was a bit confusing to me at first. After all, Dora loves adventure and always has a monkey by her side [Thinking] Anyway, the author, please continue writing! There need to be more such heart-warming stories.

I read it overnight, Goode, there is nothing too exaggerated, the plot is more about the protagonist and Harry, finally it is not, it is Draco and the protagonist, and then what happens, quarrel, you chase me, you coax me, I coax you

It's beautiful and innovative. The heroine actually became a partner with the Horcrux in the diary. The heroine is really strong. Regulus is actually alive. Harry is so cute and smart in this book and his acting skills are also very good, hahahahaha, and! Cedric is finally the champion of the Triwizard Tournament. He finally has his own glory (although he is one of the three champions). The heroine is so awesome. She directly put her name in front of everyone when Harry was announced as a warrior. The reactions of others were so funny.

What a fairy book this is! What a great fairy! ! So pretty! ! ! I love Da Da! Work hard to update! Mwah! Don't miss it if you pass by, you'll earn it if you see it! If you don't watch it, you'll be at a loss! Everyone rush! !! Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, this book is so good! ! Beautiful as a fairy, looks like a fairy, a fairy descends to earth, has a flower-like face and a moon-like appearance, a flower-like face and a moon-like appearance, jade is clean and ice-clear, the ice and snow are smart, bright and moving, the moon is shy of the flower, a beauty in the world, a flawless white jade, unparalleled beauty, charming, charming, beautiful. The beauty of the country, the beauty of the country, the beauty of the country, the purples and reds, the stunning beauty, the beauties of the 28th century, the beauty of the crowd, the stunning beauty, the lotus in the water, the confidante, the beauty in pink, the little jade, the bird is in love, the peerless beauty, the beauty is delicious, the beauty is beautiful, the warm and fragrant jade Moth eyebrows and white teeth, curved eyebrows and plump cheeks, red lips and white teeth, apricot face and peach cheeks, natural jade, rich and beautiful appearance, natural beauty, celestial beauty, fine skin and tender skin, fragrant and refined, orchid-like heart, bright eyes and white teeth, Qihua Yaocao, cricket-headed moth eyebrows, icy skin and jade bones, celestial jade color Stunning beauty, gorgeous shadows in the willow sky, rich peaches and plums, warm fragrant jade, gorgeous beauty, peerless beauty, graceful elegance, beautiful flowers, beautiful flowers, willow flowers, willow flowers, weak flowers, willow waist flower state, graceful lady, Zuo family's sweet girl, I still feel pity for the graceful eyebrows, distant mountain hibiscus, Zhangtai willows, the attractive author is greatly appreciated

It's true that everyone is OOC [laughing] but it's so good. I almost forgot about the plot of the original book. It's just that after Scorpius appeared later, I suddenly felt that the seniority difference was a bit unbearable. Harry is the uncle and Hermione is the sister. They were forced to demote the seniority. Xiaolong didn't have much plot in the book, but it was very warm to watch. Putting aside all the pressure in the original book, he was really gentle, and he was also very cute when he quarreled with Scarhead. 5⭐ Recommend, it is still a short story

The rating is a bit low, at least 9 points or above. You can read it with ease. It's very interesting. But a friendly reminder, what do you say about this book? Don't read it as the original work. If you just want to be the same as the original work, then there is really no need to read it. And I feel that although the characters are OOC, many people's personalities have become very cute. And the most important thing is that this is a cool book.

The angle is very interesting, it's the first time I read such an amazing fan (lol Even Lockhart's strengths were found and used effectively, and he was allowed to return the medal. I think this idea is brilliant [sending my heart]

I just realized that I haven't reviewed a book for a long time after reading it [laughing and crying] This book has OOC, but it is very interesting, the ending is happy, and it heals a lot of regrets. The author's writing is also online. The cp is Draco (Draco is a reborn, and Draco is the only reborn in the whole book). Dora is very strong, so there are no casualties. She also resurrected Regulus, and cooperated with Diary Tom to devour other Horcruxes. Before meeting Diary Tom, she killed the main soul in the first grade [laughing and crying]

The protagonist has a good relationship with all the characters. CP is Draco, but there are not many emotional lines, just a little bit The protagonist is Slytherin, he is not aggrieved, he is relaxed, he is not abusive, and he can pass the time. If you like it, you can watch it.

This book is very good! Time travel, different worlds, fan fiction, cool writing, cp, happy ending, family, friendship and love. Some of the settings are novel, the plot is coherent, and the characters have distinctive characteristics. The heroine is kind and gentle, smart, calm and decisive, wise and courageous, powerful, and good at seeing the essence through appearances. Great, keep up the good work^O^~

Wherever there is good writing, there is me [cool]

Like it, like it, like it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! [Cry]

Although the character is a bit ooc, I am quite satisfied with the development of the story. Here, Harry has a new family and does not have to force his growth. There will be people who will protect him. Tom is no longer paranoid and has new goals and can make up for his original regrets little by little. Albus can calm down and truly face Gellert and Severus without having to bear everything on himself. Sis no longer has to sacrifice everything for the word "alway" and can be himself, Sirius and Regulus are not hostile to each other, the Weasley twins have realized their dreams, this war is not a life-and-death battle, no one has sacrificed, the magical world is getting better little by little under the guidance of the heroine, and finally no one is trapped in the past, everyone is getting better moving forward

It's very good, the writing is very warm, and the spots on the corpse have faded. The heroine is very strong, but not Mary Sue at all. The story direction is quite interesting, CP Draco, the emotional line is very plain but very delicious, the two are childhood sweethearts, Draco is reborn. It should be noted that this Harry is more white than black, and the diary is more OOC, but it is quite cute, and occasionally a little childish and instigated. The main soul disappeared in the first grade, the crown replaced the subsequent plot, and the whole story ended in the fourth grade. To be honest, it was a bit sudden, but not abrupt. There is no knife in the whole text, the taste is light but very happy. OK

Cp: Draco Malfoy I have read the whole book. It may be ooc in some places, but as a new book, it is quite interesting. I did everything I wanted to do, everything I should do, everything I could do. No one has any regrets. Everyone survived. They all lived a stable life from then on. Very complete.

It was quite complete. None of the people who were supposed to leave stayed, and they looked forward and moved forward. (However, our Demon King Dora is a bit stupid by nature, so there is no sweet love interaction in the text, but it still happened naturally)

I think this one should get a score of nine or above. Apart from the awkward name of the heroine, aside from the heroine's name, it's really a good read for a Tomato HP fan novel.

Making dumplings, but to be honest, I don't understand the meaning of Draco's rebirth. After all, here he almost doesn't know anything about it. . . (Even without Draco, the heroine should have easily guessed the identity of the fake Moody, because she noticed little Barty's habitual movements, and Myrtle also pointed out that someone was making polyjuice potion)

Really, the score shouldn't be so low, it should be 8.8 Or higher. I like to read reviews first when reading a book. I saw one comment saying that it had little to do with the original work. I didn't want to read it at that time, but there was nothing else, so I just made do with it. Fortunately, I continued to read it, and it was very enjoyable. It can be said to be comfortable. The heroine has a saying that just corresponds to my behavior. I need to be discerning. If I like it, I also want to watch the extras. Please [please update]

It is logical, the writing is clear, the voice is fluent, and the plot is reasonable. The protagonist Dora has a sense of responsibility and can guide other confused friends. It can be said that she influenced and changed many people in a silent way, allowing them to have a better ending. It is recommended to add more detailed descriptions such as scenery descriptions and portrait descriptions. This can increase the lyricism and literary quality of the article. It is recommended to add more pen and ink to the part that combines magic and technology to add personal color and make the article unique.

This is a very refreshing book to read. I think it is a refreshing book. It is very interesting and worth reading. It's just that it went so smoothly, and I always feel like it lacks a bit of adventure experience. (Of course I know that she is a powerful demon king, but it could be a little more exciting to make the character more fleshed out [laughing]) But it feels really cool that Dora has become the eldest sister of the whole school. I give you a thumbs up [send my heart]. Finally, I am a bit confused. The article says that Dora was summoned by Lily. Is that the summoned soul? Or is the body + soul gone? And Dora explained to everyone: What does it mean that my blood is Lily's? Why should blood be given instead of soul? So can we say that Dora is Harry's mother in another sense [what] [laughing] The author is asking for answers [shy]

It's very gentle and joyful, and it fills up almost all our sorrows. I really like to finish the story. I really hope that when everything is over, they will gather together and toast to celebrate. To our victory of death and defeat.

It's very good to read. It's very good to read. The whole book is mainly light-hearted and cheerful. There is no plot that abuses the protagonist. It's just a happy ending. There is a line at the end that I really like: "It's nothing. I just say that fortunately you are a person who keeps looking forward. Only then can you lead our group of people who always remember the past to move forward. Isn't this the charm of group portraits [Sending Hearts]

It's really beautiful, don't miss it just because of the name

I love it, I hope I can write a novel about CP Draco

Hurry up and recommend the book, you and I will get a rating tomorrow

It looks good, it looks good, it's a pity. Tom survived and redeemed his childhood self, Severus, Dumbledore, Sirius and Cedric were all alive, Regulus was also alive, Walburga looked away, the Malfoy family was glorious forever, Draco was good, Harry became a Quidditch player and was not trapped by his savior identity, Pansy and Blaise were together, and Dumbledore also went to see Grindelwald. The ending is wonderful. 2024.08.29 21:50

Dare you laugh? I dare not laugh, because my English name is Dora [smile]

The plot is quite interesting~ The love line is not very obvious, it is a quietly infiltrating feeling. I love the family line very much. Harry and Dora are really in love! ! Although Dora is a demon king, she is kind, gentle, very patient, and has strong power to protect her family. She loves peace and strategizes to avoid casualties caused by wars. There are not many casualties in the war, and it satisfies my regrets about the original work~

It's so good. I stayed up late to watch it. It's so good.