The Best Passerby in the World of Cultivating Immortals

Looks good! I feel like the passerby looks like a paper person, hahaha, and then I get together with the handsome senior brother hahaha [laughing and crying], but when I think about the subsequent plot, I am still a little bit confused [almost crying] It feels like they are not dead but they have gone their separate ways. Why!

I've finished reading it, it's very interesting, the language is concise and the writing is beautiful The image is also very well created, and the name obtained is also very impressive. However, I actually stood against the CP, I actually stood against the CP

It's good to read, but a bit sloppy. I have to say that the author doesn't know why. I always feel inexplicable joy when reading this book you wrote. I want to laugh. Unexpectedly, I also feel this way when reading other books. Author, it must be very funny if you write funny articles, but your writing style is not very skilled. If it were better, many people would probably like it.

This book is quite good, but to be honest, it is not perfect. Of course, I am not saying that this book is not good. I really like this book and the protagonist. This book is not simply about love, nor is it a mindless novel. It has raised the bar among cultivation novels. Everyone's image was successfully established. The character of the protagonist is a bit charming, but there are few people who don't like the protagonist who is sunny and cheerful, has a heart for his fellow students, repays kindness, and never forgets his original intention... (All the advantages of the protagonist are omitted here). I won't say anything about the protagonist and Chu Jue, because I'm really at a loss for words. They will all be fine in the future. Some of the endings of other people in the book are satisfying, and some have some regrets, but if everything is perfect, it would be unreal. Like this, it makes me feel that they are all living people, not cold words in novels. Just like the protagonist said at the end of the novel, his story is not over yet. The author's writing style is still a bit green, but the characters, plot ideas, and the ending of the novel are all very good. I believe the author will write a more perfect article. (The above is just my personal opinion)

I want to kill everyone [shocked][shocked][shocked] I actually stood on the wrong side. My CPU burned out when I saw the wedding part, but the author wrote it very well [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Nice! ! ! However, it's hard to find an article that satisfies my appetite! As a result, I stood on the wrong side! ! ! Why? I clearly remember that Feng Yang is shorter than Chu Jue! ! ! Why? Why? Why? [Cry][cry][cry]

I found it from a post, and I really think it's good. Although the writing style is young, you can still see the hard work that Da Da has put in. The character of the protagonist is very vivid, and the characters of all sizes are also very vividly described. The content of the article is detailed and appropriate, with clear priorities and highlights. It attracts readers' interest in reading, but there is still room for improvement. I hope Da Da continues to work hard! [Laughing][laughing]

It's good to watch, but the pace is so fast. I want to see the sweet couple, and I want to see Xu Yuzong become bigger and stronger. It's terrible. It can't be just because it's called a moment, and life is also a moment. Although the ending is he, there are still many people and many things that are not satisfactory. ˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅

The writing is a bit green, and the ending doesn't feel very satisfying, but the overall content is pretty good. I'm looking forward to seeing the author's growth. [Send heart][Send heart]

The plot is also quite attractive to me, both the finale and the character extras are fine.

The first-person writing style always seems to have a sense of sadness, but overall it's good, so good.

I find that female video authors seem to have more imagination, so don't break the fourth wall casually!

It's okay, but this may be the first time I've seen this kind of first-person perspective. It's quite strange, but there are still some places that look a bit weird (I don't know how to put it, it's a bit twisted! Maybe I haven't seen this form before) Another thing is that I never expected that I would actually stand on the wrong side [covering my face], which makes me a little sad💔

The structure and logic are very good, the writing is average, the story is told in the first person, the process is not very rich, the pace is fast, and there is a lot of room for development. Good luck, author.

I originally wanted to give it five stars, but I found that I was on the wrong side, so I gave it four stars. Forget it, I'll give you five stars.

It's beautiful, but I don't understand why there are so few people. This book is a bit funny and sad. I actually cried and laughed at the end of it, and the ending is really satisfying. I just found this book today. I glanced at it from the beginning and read the follow-up in one breath. There are a lot of typos but it's not a big deal. Also, I really, really like Qi Hexu [almost crying]

It's very interesting, but after watching it, I felt that I became sentimental. It's a pity and I don't know why. Anyway, five stars is right.

Good-looking, good-looking, really good-looking! ! !

It's very beautiful, but I actually stood on the wrong side. 💔

I don't speak well, so I won't comment. How can I put it this way? Generally speaking, I give five stars to 99% of the books, and the remaining ones are not given five stars. You can guess the reason [punch out] [punch out] [punch out] [punch out] [punch out]

It was so good, and even though it ended quickly, it still had a good ending. Support the author greatly [send heart][send heart][send heart]

It's pretty cool, I didn't expect that I would actually be standing on the wrong side. The pace is quite fast. The content is quite interesting, but the ending is rather hasty. . . But it does look good.

It's nice to look at, but the reverse is a bit big at the back. Actually standing in the wrong direction. Author, you are not a human being [cover face]

Woohoo, I really like this kind of narrative writing. Woohoo, I really like it🥳🥳

Beautiful, that's all I can say

It's a good article, but I was a little dizzy when I read it.

I came here from the post. The writing is pretty good and the extras are pretty good. Overall, it's worth checking out.

Good-looking, the type I like\(//∇//)\

There are too many inner dramas and I haven't watched much.

It looks really good! ! Too appetizing