Model Month*************

Let me make an objective evaluation. I am also an old bookworm of Xingyue. I have been reading Xingyue's fanfics for more than two years. The author of this book can tell that his writing skills are not good. His emotional expressions are cliched and dull. The plot is pushed too fast. After a few chapters, it ends at a singular point. Although there is indeed nothing to say about the Hundred Years War, it is also pushed too fast! It can be seen that the author is a pure newcomer with a lot of room for improvement. I hope the author can correct the shortcomings I mentioned and give him a four-star encouragement [sending heart][sending heart][sending heart][sending heart]

I feel like it's gone. Let's visit the grave in advance.

Big cheers for the author, although the number of people is small now, there will be more in the future.

Actually, I feel that the author's writing style can be borrowed from King Knight's "Cute Girl Guardian", with more interactions. I feel that the story line is too straightforward and meaningless. I just feel that the daily aspects of this kind of writing will make me feel more involved.

FGO is so cool and beautiful, but I still want to threaten the author to update it soon! [Top post][Please update]

Yo West, the author is great, the writing is great, the writing is great, and the reward includes eleven cigarettes in a row [smile][smile][smile] Damn it, no matter how good the book is, no one reads it [angry][angry][angry]

I don't know who is so fast. I am still second. It can't be the author. [What]

Come on, author! Great writing.

My sister-in-law is so pitiful (sad)

It looks fine. Could it be that it was cut?

Yeah, that's good. Come on.

Hmm... Good! ! Support it

Not bad, just a little bit less

Hey, I still can't get used to knives.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

The author's portrayal of the characters is very good, but the pace of the plot is a bit fast. It would be better if adjusted appropriately.

I don't understand some of the combat powers, especially Tamamo Mae. Even though she is Daji, Daji is not that fierce.

There is a lot of room for improvement, come on! The plot also feels like it has improved [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Why is it so good that no one sees it? Is it because tomatoes are not popular?