The Game Gives Me Immortality, and I Practice Alone

Generally speaking, it is good, but there are some poisonous points, especially when the relationship between Song and Qin was drawn up. I didn't feel the poisonous points, but after reading it, and thinking about it, I feel really... I can't explain it. It's a bit regretful. I feel the poisonous points, and coupled with the discussions of some book friends in the comment area, It directly made me feel the poisonous point exploded. I wouldn't feel this way if I didn't pay attention to the poisonous point. As a result, I felt a little depressed after watching it (personally). In the end, I felt aggrieved. I felt that the protagonist was really aggrieved. In other words, the author created a situation where the male and female protagonists would always be good, which led to it. This poisonous point, after all, the author has never written this kind of plot in the previous article, just like some Ba Zong articles (some reverse Ba Zong articles, for some reasons, the timeline directly fast-forwards), but it is different, it is like watching a new story, that is... Continuing the previous relationship, just like now The plot is the same. For me, it is quite novel. After all, I have never seen anything similar. It is a bit cliche, but very novel. In other words, the early stage was very smooth. Because it was too smooth, it led to this gap and gave me a "poisonous" feeling. Really, the emotional line is originally slow. , I just want to start over from scratch, I really want to punch the author to death, and there is a time limit for the male protagonist to leave the novice village. It looks unique, but it really hinders the development of the plot. This reset is purely unnecessary. Most readers who are attracted by the title of the book really want to read it. It's a plot, about chasing a wife, chasing a husband, and showing affection. Although it exists, it doesn't make much progress in the plot, or the plot develops too slowly, and there is not much, due to restrictions. Therefore, it is recommended that the author hurry up and let the players come, and the protagonist leaves the novice village, because the protagonist is in This world is really too frustrating. This "poisonous point" is still within my acceptable range. I won't give up for the time being. I just hope that the male protagonist will not be restricted, and then the plot will develop quickly and there will be some substantial progress. Oh no, there is indeed it, but this is really very different from what I want to see. Hey, it's a pity that it's not a traditional online game. Of course, what I'm talking about is that there are no resets and no restrictions. I think the plot may be more exciting. In an article that is actually about cultivating immortals, this is really unnecessary. Because of these restrictions, the male protagonist is really too mediocre! ! ! It would be better if the author could see it. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. Personal subjective opinions account for the majority. I don't like it or criticize it. Thank you for reading this. I gave up. I should have read the book review first. It was the book review that made me regain my mind and let me know that this is a completely bad article. The previous article was better. If the author does not change, sooner or later this book will be wasted.

The writing is very good, but it feels a bit lacking. It feels a little delayed, but it is just right. So you are good at writing, but if you are good at writing, you should write more. Isn't this enough to read?

Feel sorry! Feel sorry! The author is ready to finish! [Ask for attention][Ask for attention][Ask for attention][Ask for attention][Ask for attention] I really didn't have any ideas yesterday. Remember to pay attention to the author's new book. Thank you very much! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] Give it a five-star rating yourself! It seems that the author of the latest chapter is a female author, who writes female videos in a way that she hides things over and over again and no one talks. You can slip away, because the main character's idea of ​​returning to another world is to disown his daughter and fear that her daughter will not be able to accept the fact that he is an NPC. Is this what normal people think? Only ex authors who write female videos have this kind of idea, hurry up

This book is really good. I feel like not many people have read it. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is quite interesting.

First of all, the setting at the beginning of this book is pretty good, which is part of the attraction, but that's where the advantages end. The main reason why most of the short reviews are good reviews is that most people just glance at it and don't study it in detail. If you have read this long review of mine, it would be an honor for me. First, let's talk about the first poisonous point: when Qin came back before the enemy army was about to sweep Qiu Yu Village, she saw the protagonist and felt that the protagonist was infatuated. I personally don't think Qin is worthy of being a heroine. Therefore, Qin is basically used instead in the following text. First of all, the protagonist and Qin have only been together for two days. I can't say whether they have feelings for each other. I've never had any contact with Taoists, so I think it's novel.

I really like this type. The author will update soon [Adore][Adore][Adore] Don't give one star, give it two stars [angry]

Is there a possibility that after so many years, the little girl fell in love with the male protagonist? After so many years, the male protagonist also gave up the slightest love in his heart and got together with the little girl. However, the demon king found out that he also liked the male protagonist but was too late. He found that he had led a wolf into the house and ruined his own happiness. Then he slowly turned into a arrogant person who wanted to take it back. On the way to retake it, he was constantly attacked and turned into a yandere and obsessive. Afterwards, a lot of shit happened. Either the amnesia caused the two women to fight, or something happened and the male protagonist died and the two resented each other. The little girl became the leader of the righteous path and opposed the demon king. Or the South Star restarted and started the pulling flow, and may also start the cheating and reincarnation flow.

I can't say it looks good, I can only say it looks amazing. Although it is not a cool article, the cleanliness is very bland, but the writing style of Sitting inexplicably made me very interested in reading it, it is very interesting. It's just that the new book is a bit shorter, but it's already on the recommendation list. I believe it will get more people soon.

I thought about it for a while, could the protagonist let people expand the village? A few years later, the protagonist stood on top of the world and shouted: From now on, this world will be called Fengyu Village. [Eat melon] Wrong writing, Qiuyu Village (manual dog head. Jpg)

This is a new book, and those who like to follow the chapters should check it out, because it is indeed a high-quality book, and the writing is good. The main thing is that the plot is light and full, a little procrastinating, but it does not affect the viewing experience. It is just right. The character of the protagonist is very stable, not exaggerated, which is rare. The emotional scenes are described delicately, and the emotional lines are overly clever and bold. The male protagonist is a "mortal" with a worldly heart, while the female protagonist is "supermundane" but has a worldly heart. It seems contradictory, but it is refined. I hope the author will finish it well. It will be a masterpiece!

I didn't expect to find a slow-burning book on Tomato [laughing] But it's too bad that no one has read it. It's almost 100,000 words long, and recommendations for newcomers should be coming soon.

It should be a single female protagonist. I originally wanted to read a harem story, which is similar to an online game story. Currently, the male protagonist and the female demon have given birth to a child. The female demon has to choose between strength and the male protagonist. I look forward to the chase and burial of her husband later.

I'm just not satisfied with the updates, the writing is great, each character is very clear, and the plot is light and not cluttered. When the plot advances and the protagonist re-enters the game, I will give it a five-star review! If you are new, don't read this. If you look at the latest reviews, you will see that they are all low scores and negative reviews. It is recommended to change the book. This book opened up and then went down, and everything was watery in the later period. The current rating of this book is 8.2. It is not unreasonable. Many readers are dissatisfied. There are many major poisonous points in the later period, and the routines are repeated. The author may not read the comments, so he turns a deaf ear to the readers' opinions. Kavinka's special ink stains are getting worse day by day, and the ones that are less and less watery cannot be solved quickly. If you can solve it quickly, you have to find an excuse to keep typing. If you are not new, please read it. Supplement: The plot is already very obvious and can be guessed, and at the same time, the plot is obviously boring to the naked eye. I no longer have the desire to continue reading. I even guessed that the plot is similar, and it seems that the protagonist has been weakened.

A very good setting and very careful description, but a reminder to my friends: there will definitely be some people who feel that the male protagonist is aggrieved, that's for sure. That's how I feel, but this is a matter of personal preference. It's good not to delay the author's description and settings. The female protagonist has been lying to the male protagonist. The male protagonist is like a capybara and has no temper. However, there are always people who are not as good as the male protagonist and always look down on the male protagonist. The male protagonist does not know it and probably doesn't care if he knows it. This is probably a lightning point for many people. Therefore, good-tempered readers sincerely recommend this book. For friends with limited tolerance, I suggest you give it a try. If it doesn't work, forget it.

This book is very good. Although the protagonist cannot leave the Novice Village, he does not give up. This shows that he has perseverance and perseverance. It expresses the author's dissatisfaction with today's society and severely criticizes this behavior. (Five yuan a piece) (BUSHI)

It is recommended to read more. After all, people who clicked on this novel are just looking at the male protagonist and the female protagonist. But according to the current situation, it may take one or two hundred chapters before you can read it (I think). After all, the female protagonist has no interest in the male protagonist now. If she does, she thinks that the male protagonist is an ant who can talk, so there is a long way to go. I will raise it for a while. I didn't read the reviews they gave me, and they all said that this book was rubbish. I have to say, it was really true. I thought it was a sweet article, but I tuned it to more than 250 words and saw one sentence. Now it has become my weakness, so I want to retreat. . . 6

Read the latest 56 chapters and leave a comment to support the author. My personal feeling after reading it is that it is a rare fine novel in Tomato. The writing is average, the story is average, and the characterization is average. So why is it said to be sophisticated? After reading it personally, although the protagonist is a Gou Liu, he is decisive in killing, and his wit and play are not vicious. This is already rare. It is not a system flow or a rebirth flow, and there are even 56 chapters. It is still developing, but it will not be boring. The story is progressing steadily. As long as the author has a good outline and does not jump in the later stages, it can become a readable high-quality novel. The disadvantage is that there are few updates. I understand that unless you are an old author, it will be difficult to write. But what I am afraid of is that everyone will put it on the bookshelf and keep it. In the end, there will be no more books. I have a lot of discontinued books on my shelf, and they are no longer available. I hope the author can update more while maintaining his status. Of course, life is helpless and I hope he can finish it while maintaining his status [Salute][Salute][Salute] At the end of the reading, I got into trouble with the cultivation of the second daughter in the next continent, etc., And then I fell apart. I was detached too much, and the description of feelings and family was not good, so I stopped reading later. It was originally raised, but it turned out to be getting worse and worse, so it was abandoned.

It looks like it has a single heroine! I've read too many harem stories, and the single female protagonist is yyds

Overall not bad. There are no clues in the whole process, but the heroine is a bit difficult to conquer (the heroine is a top boss after all, and her temperament does not change so quickly). There are three worlds, the real world (Hong Yu), the game world (), and the upper world (). The main plots are all in the game world. . I still hope that their family will be reunited in the end, and they can break the barriers of the world, and the family can travel through the three realms [laughing and crying] Of course, it may take a long time, and I don't know what will be written in the future. I hope it will be successful, don't be too impatient [almost crying] After all, it is really not easy to read a book that interests me. The first 200 chapters felt quite fast, but the pace felt slower after reading it, especially the chapters where the male protagonist returned to reality. I found it more boringớ ₃ờ. Maybe it's because I prefer to watch the life of the male protagonist and his daughters [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] Of course, I used to read daddy stories when I was in the game [laughing] and I still like family relationships. Now there are more than 400 chapters, and we continue to look forward to the follow-up development... I came to follow up on the review. I didn't finish it at the time, so the review was high. Now I'm following up on the latest chapter 507. Summary: Water! Drive high and go low! The book was well received in the early stage. I thought the subject matter was good and interesting. However, after the 200th chapter, the book became more and more confusing, which was not in line with my psychological expectations, so it was very difficult to follow up. Fortunately, there is a provincial hero [Adoration] The original title of the book is What Wife Is a Devil? That's what I came here for. I wanted to see how the male and female protagonists would get together in the end. As a result, they have three children. TM Their family of five is still living apart, and they live in two worlds. Two of the daughters don't know they have a mother. It's very poisonous. . . . . .

I'm running out of books, so I just clicked in and took a look. I think it's okay so far, but it's a bit short. [Thinking] If you guys don't have any books to read, I'd recommend "Super Mechanic", which is also an online game book. It's similar to this one and it's about entering the game world early. If you have any good books, please recommend them. I'm bored to death.

Very good, good luck to the author! I hope to become more and more manly, and not to be a real man for three seconds

I like this better. The protagonist doesn't need to fight with people every day, and feels more like an outsider. A lot of novels these days are so bad that the protagonists want to take a bite out of everyone they meet. No harem, such a daughter, how can there be so much fighting and killing in cultivating immortals, it is all about human nature, the author should work hard to update [Like]

Brother, please give me one more episode. I'm dying. Please, brother. I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I feel like I'm shaking all over. I can't breathe. Please, brother, just give me one more episode. Just one more episode. I'll never touch it again. Please, brother, really, just one episode. I swear I'll never touch this thing again. I really can't bear it anymore. I'm tossing and turning now. No, brother, I beg you, just one more episode (screaming) (twisting) (creeping darkly) (crawling) (twisting) (squirming darkly) (rolling) (crawling violently) (twisting) (tilting head) (sitting still) (slowly retreating) (smashing things hard) (gnawing) (dark juicing crazy) (crawling) (crawling) (quickly bending) (twisting and folding) (turn back to the original point) Yelling) (crawling again) (pacing) (turning back slowly) (laughing softly) (crazy and attacking indiscriminately) (exploding) (eviscerating the abdomen) (laughing loudly) (lasting) (shortly calm) (snarling) (squirming) eerie growl) (crawling) (split) (walking ashore) (twisting) (convulsing) (squirming) (twisted walking) (attacking indiscriminately) (barking) (crawling) Take off) (pick up the broken arm) (tilt head) (sit still) (slowly retreat) (smash things hard) (gnaw) (dark juice-squeezing madness) (crawl) (crawl) (quickly bend) (twist and fold) (change back to original and scream) (crawl again) (pace) (slowly look back) (crazy and attack regardless of target) (explode) (high-pitched laughter) (lasting) (briefly calm) What the hell

How do I feel about the popularity of game world novels recently? I feel like a lot of the new releases recently are like this, but I'm tired of the other ones [awkward laugh][awkward laugh] This one is okay, there's nothing big about it so far.

The author is updating quickly. I feel that I can finish the game chapter in about seven or eight hundred. The description is okay, but it does not describe reality. It is more like an online game time travel article. I feel that the reality and game timeline can be described in the early part. However, in the later stage, due to influence, it overlaps with the real timeline. After all, I am a new author and he is already very good.

This book is okay, but the rating is not too high. I hope the author will continue to work hard. This book is the best one I have read in online games. I hope the author will update more [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

Come on, it's time to update. @Buymeat and feed egg yolk, little author.

In fact, I think the beauty emperor of the upper world is quite good. She, Qin Xuanxi, doesn't care about Song Ye and her children. She is selfish and only wants to reach the peak of power. Then why should Song Ye wait so hard? Isn't it a good idea to break up and go their separate ways? It's really too slow. The plot has not yet finished the previous step and another line has been branched out. What's the name of the book? How many chapters has the heroine not appeared in?

It's good-looking and has no routines. A high-tech entity travels to the game world to cultivate immortality. The protagonist is decisive in doing things. The story line with the heroine is also quite sweet, slightly sweet but not greasy. The main story line is too long, and the author, Ka Wen Ka, has a lot of tricks up his sleeve. More everyday and relaxed. When I saw the reminder button, I still felt that this was a pretty well-written novel. To say that the protagonist's presence in this book may be a bit low, the novel describes many characters, and it feels like a group portrait novel, and it can return to Song Ye's perspective at any time. Then it should be that Song Ye developed secretly and played with many major NPCs in the game. So far, the super popular BOSS is his wife, Empress Yi'an of the main city is his confidant, Song Yan, who is born with immortal body, is his younger sister, the only person Liu Qingyi (I forgot his identity seems to be very cool) trusts, the brother of the policeman (feels like he will be an important NPC who sends tasks to players in the future), the owner of the black tree, the Immortal Wine Master is the thug, and there are a bunch of legendary level thugs summoned from his backpack. . . . There are many more Coupled with his level 100+ invincible body, in short, if the game is put into public beta, Song Ye will basically have the final say in this world. I feel that it will be particularly exciting for players to enter the game.

It's okay if you don't go back. If you go back, it will be a 5-star installment. Traditional slow-burning articles, those who are not in a hurry can read it.