The Game Granted Me Immortality, So I Cultivate Alone

Generally speaking, it is good, but there are some poisonous points, especially when the relationship between Song and Qin was drawn up. I didn't feel the poisonous points, but after reading it, and thinking about it, I feel really... I can't explain it. It's a bit regretful. I feel the poisonous points, and coupled with the discussions of some book friends in the comment area, It directly made me feel the poisonous point exploded. I wouldn't feel this way if I didn't pay attention to the poisonous point. As a result, I felt a little depressed after watching it (personally). In the end, I felt aggrieved. I felt that the protagonist was really aggrieved. In other words, the author created a situation where the male and female protagonists would always be good, which led to it. This poisonous point, after all, the author has never written this kind of plot in the previous article, just like some Ba Zong articles (some reverse Ba Zong articles, for some reasons, the timeline directly fast-forwards), but it is different, it is like watching a new story, that is... Continuing the previous relationship, just like now The plot is the same. For me, it is quite novel. After all, I have never seen anything similar. It is a bit cliche, but very novel. In other words, the early stage was very smooth. Because it was too smooth, it led to this gap and gave me a "poisonous" feeling. Really, the emotional line is originally slow. , I just want to start over from scratch, I really want to punch the author to death, and there is a time limit for the male protagonist to leave the novice village. It looks unique, but it really hinders the development of the plot. This reset is purely unnecessary. Most readers who are attracted by the title of the book really want to read it. It's a plot, about chasing a wife, chasing a husband, and showing affection. Although it exists, it doesn't make much progress in the plot, or the plot develops too slowly, and there is not much, due to restrictions. Therefore, it is recommended that the author hurry up and let the players come, and the protagonist leaves the novice village, because the protagonist is in This world is really too frustrating. This "poisonous point" is still within my acceptable range. I won't give up for the time being. I just hope that the male protagonist will not be restricted, and then the plot will develop quickly and there will be some substantial progress. Oh no, there is indeed it, but this is really very different from what I want to see. Hey, it's a pity that it's not a traditional online game. Of course, what I'm talking about is that there are no resets and no restrictions. I think the plot may be more exciting. In an article that is actually about cultivating immortals, this is really unnecessary. Because of these restrictions, the male protagonist is really too mediocre! ! ! It would be better if the author could see it. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. Personal subjective opinions account for the majority. I don't like it or criticize it. Thank you for reading this. I gave up. I should have read the book review first. It was the book review that made me regain my mind and let me know that this is a completely bad article. The previous article was better. If the author does not change, sooner or later this book will be wasted.

The writing is very good, but it feels a bit lacking. It feels a little delayed, but it is just right. So you are good at writing, but if you are good at writing, you should write more. Isn't this enough to read?

Feel sorry! Feel sorry! The author is ready to finish! [Ask for attention][Ask for attention][Ask for attention][Ask for attention][Ask for attention] I really didn't have any ideas yesterday. Remember to pay attention to the author's new book. Thank you very much! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] Give it a five-star rating yourself! It seems that the author of the latest chapter is a female author, who writes female videos in a way that she hides things over and over again and no one talks. You can slip away, because the main character's idea of ​​returning to another world is to disown his daughter and fear that her daughter will not be able to accept the fact that he is an NPC. Is this what normal people think? Only ex authors who write female videos have this kind of idea, hurry up

This book is really good. I feel like not many people have read it. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is quite interesting.

First of all, the setting at the beginning of this book is pretty good, which is part of the attraction, but that's where the advantages end. The main reason why most of the short reviews are good reviews is that most people just glance at it and don't study it in detail. If you have read this long review of mine, it would be an honor for me. First, let's talk about the first poisonous point: when Qin came back before the enemy army was about to sweep Qiu Yu Village, she saw the protagonist and felt that the protagonist was infatuated. I personally don't think Qin is worthy of being a heroine. Therefore, Qin is basically used instead in the following text. First of all, the protagonist and Qin have only been together for two days. I can't say whether they have feelings for each other. I've never had any contact with Taoists, so I think it's novel.

I really like this type. The author will update soon [Adore][Adore][Adore] Don't give one star, give it two stars [angry]

Is there a possibility that after so many years, the little girl fell in love with the male protagonist? After so many years, the male protagonist also gave up the slightest love in his heart and got together with the little girl. However, the demon king found out that he also liked the male protagonist but was too late. He found that he had led a wolf into the house and ruined his own happiness. Then he slowly turned into a arrogant person who wanted to take it back. On the way to retake it, he was constantly attacked and turned into a yandere and obsessive. Afterwards, a lot of shit happened. Either the amnesia caused the two women to fight, or something happened and the male protagonist died and the two resented each other. The little girl became the leader of the righteous path and opposed the demon king. Or the South Star restarted and started the pulling flow, and may also start the cheating and reincarnation flow.

I can't say it looks good, I can only say it looks amazing. Although it is not a cool article, the cleanliness is very bland, but the writing style of Sitting inexplicably made me very interested in reading it, it is very interesting. It's just that the new book is a bit shorter, but it's already on the recommendation list. I believe it will get more people soon.

This is a new book, and those who like to follow the chapters should check it out, because it is indeed a high-quality book, and the writing is good. The main thing is that the plot is light and full, a little procrastinating, but it does not affect the viewing experience. It is just right. The character of the protagonist is very stable, not exaggerated, which is rare. The emotional scenes are described delicately, and the emotional lines are overly clever and bold. The male protagonist is a "mortal" with a worldly heart, while the female protagonist is "supermundane" but has a worldly heart. It seems contradictory, but it is refined. I hope the author will finish it well. It will be a masterpiece!

I thought about it for a while, could the protagonist let people expand the village? A few years later, the protagonist stood on top of the world and shouted: From now on, this world will be called Fengyu Village. [Eat melon] Wrong writing, Qiuyu Village (manual dog head. Jpg)