War Dance Twins

Not bad, I hope it won't be a eunuch!

The novel is very well written, and it feels like reading a Japanese novel.

It's very comfortable to read. I haven't seen a book with this kind of subject matter and writing that suits my taste in Tomato for a long time. The emotional interaction between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is also great. (When will it hit the base [sneaky laugh], don't be a eunuch). His character is calm, decisive, and not brainless. It really fits my image of the male protagonist in the novel. The popularity of the book is not very high now, and I can write slower and give priority to quality. The world view, level of technology, strength of enemies and friends, and level of logic are all well designed. Seeing the protagonist's step-by-step growth really makes me feel that this book is worth reading!

This book gives me a feeling like the previous book Valkyrie. It is different from most system novels and immortality novels on the market. This kind of novel has its own unique world view and setting, similar to another world. You need to spend time and patiently digest these contents to feel the subtlety of this book. In addition, the author's description of tactics is also good. It gives me a feeling of playing a tower defense game (such as Arknights), and I can truly feel the protagonist's talent in tactical layout. Readers who have played chess or tower defense games may be more able to understand this. In addition, the ideological spirit promoted by this book is also worthy of praise, which is the theme of peace and development in today's era. I think this is also a plus point. Now that I see it, I think this book is very good in all aspects. It is well detailed and can be reflected in global competitions. It describes the battles and focuses on the writing of teams that will be contacted in the future. Finally, I would like to say that this book is a harem novel, relatively slow to read. If you like to read fast-paced and refreshing novels, you can just go out and turn left after reading ten lines. If you look at the comment area, you will know who gave the negative reviews. As a loyal fan of a book, I don't want to blindly rate this book due to subjective assumptions, which leads to the low rating of this book. I put it here and you can get out if you can't bear it. Don't criticize me here. In addition, let me tell the author and give it five stars first. There are many typos, but the author corrects them very quickly every time. I gave feedback on about 6 or 7 of them, and the author responded and corrected them all. I hope that the content and writing style of the author's technology and tactics will get better and better in the future.

It's very interesting. Wu Jie has his own thinking and will, and the emotions between the characters are also very delicate. I hope the author can work hard and maintain his level. I'm looking forward to the development of this book.

I feel like Azur Lane, Girls' Frontline, Tank Warrior, and Ashes Front are all involved. I'm curious, did the author write this novel based on a game or a movie, or his own imagination?

The author is really great. Although there are a lot of foreshadowings in the front, it may seem confusing, but you must be patient and read it. After reading it, you will find that this book is actually very exciting [Note][Note]

It does have the flavor of a light novel, which is a big reason why I like it. [Send heart][Send heart] Support support [send heart][send heart]

It's obviously very good-looking, but why is the rating so low? Are they all trying to protect themselves from low ratings 😂 Author, you still have time to reply to comments. None of the donkeys in the production team have such a rest like you [angry]

Why is this book rated so low? Don't ask, just ask because you read the review in less than 30 minutes

Emmm, okay! It's so damn good, I didn't expect to see such a book on Tomato. 1. The main plot is coherent, but sometimes a bit delayed, but the author updates it quickly enough. 2. The main characters are fleshed out, and most of the other characters are also thoughtfully created (you just feel that many people are very similar?) 3. The world view is also quite interesting (maybe there will be a Great Expedition later?) 4. The emotional line... I feel that the performance is a little high and low, but overall it is not bad. The above is my personal opinion.

The genre and subject matter are very novel, I hope I can keep writing. Can the author please post all the pictures of Zhan Wu Ji with their names in the comment area? Thank you.

Don't be discouraged, have hope in life There's a cat here. If you're in a bad mood, you can pet it. /L, (ﾟ､. 7 L ~ヽ じしf_, )ノ

I have read the latest chapter in less than three days. Let me talk about the biggest difference from the author's other "Vampire". First of all, foreshadowing. The author uses a lot of foreshadowing techniques in the article, and some of them are very hidden, such as the part where Shengyue and Alice are sent to recover specimens, etc. Next, the description of the battle is very vivid and vivid, especially the description of the powerlessness and despair of the ship girl when facing the dead girl, but at the same time, it can not fall behind the description of the war process. Secondly, the emotional lines of the harem written by the author are very average, but they do not make people feel that they are few and far between. This is an advantage compared to "Vampire". Although the emotional lines in "Vampire" are not "dollar hegemony", it can also be called "one super, many powerful". The main emotional lines are all in Tia. There are big and small problems in the emotional lines of other characters, and this book has achieved a good balance [Blowing Kiss]. Also, I saw that the author said that he planned to write a thousand chapters, and I am looking forward to it. Come on, but the counterattack between India and Sri Lanka seems to be coming to an end. Will there be a third-party civilization in the future, and then joint operations? [Thinking] [What]? In short, although this book also has shortcomings, the flaws outweigh its advantages and it is definitely worth reading [like]. In addition, the author worked hard. After working as a social worker, he still had to type the words of two books.

In fact, the writing is okay and the update speed is relatively fast. I haven't seen any bad points so far. Keep up the good work.

The logic is clear, and I personally feel it is the best book I have ever read.

After reading it, it reminded me of a book I had read before, "My World War II Will Not Be So Cute". The setting of the War Dancer is somewhat similar to that of the Goddess in it. In short, the world view is not bad, but there are fewer war scenes and too many daily scenes, which makes people unable to intuitively feel the urgency of the end of the world. Keep up the good work.

I think this book is okay, but the popularity is not so good [Thinking]

I found that many of the poor reviews were for reading less than 30 minutes. Anyway, I found it quite comfortable.

It feels pretty good. I just played a game and wrote a lot of chapters (see the table of contents title), just like Douluo Dalu.

This is the first time I have actively seen organic girl elements in a Chinese novel. This is also the second novel I have read by this author. It is true that the author's quality is above average among the many books I have read. As for why I gave it four stars, it is because the ending is too sloppy. However, readers all know the specific reason. I will not go into details because this is what every novel will encounter. Situation, I express my understanding, and the finale also successfully explained all the harems, but I think the author may have forgotten one harem, which is Qingqiu Yu's sister, Qingqiu Lian. This person should also be the early heroine, and it stands to reason that she is also a powerful researcher. I think the author has forgotten this heroine. , After all, there are still many descriptions of the heroine, and then there is Qianye's fertility situation. It is clearly mentioned many times in one article, but this foreshadowing is not made up. Normally speaking, the male protagonist already has an infinite lifespan, and his harem should also continue to become gods in the later period. There should be at least 400 more Chapter descriptions, as well as the male protagonist's sister, were very early foreshadowings. I thought there would be a resurrection scene, but these things were too low in popularity and the author did not write them out. If the author can still remember this novel, he can add a few extra chapters in the later period to fill in the gaps in the main plot. The author's writing style and knowledge reserve are still very high, but in the two novels I read, almost none of them had a perfect ending, and both had incomplete stories. But I also understand the author, and I hope he will continue to work hard.

The book is clearly organized, the story is very fascinating, and the plot is wonderful. Worth a look.

The flaws are not hidden, it is beautiful, this kind of light novel-like emotion is very good, brisk and delicate. The overall feeling is like talking and joking with friends every day, calm and comfortable. Machine girls, ship girls, valkyries, and commanders are indeed an easy-to-like theme. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

This book gets better and better the more I read it, but the popularity is too low and there are some people who don't know what a slow read is, so they click in and read it for less than 30 minutes and give low stars, which leads to the low rating. In short, the author should update it quickly. You don't want book friends who have come from the second book to see that you have discontinued the first book and just stop reading it [sneaky laugh]

Very good but too short

This book is very nice

I want to see Sese [laughing evilly]

The writing is also good, and the daily updates are diligent. Please give it a five-star rating first.

People with complex game components find it very comfortable [laughing]

Finished with flowers, thank you for accompanying me. This book is wonderfully written, each character has its own unique and vivid personality, and the descriptions are very good, which made me remember and even like these characters. Although it is a bit regretful, I will still give my praise [love] [love] [love] to the characters in it.