Interstellar Border Guard

Not bad, but why did the painting style change so much? I originally felt like I was playing a big game of chess, but now I don't feel like this anymore.

All I can say is that it's better than another book that looks like a harem-like artificial intelligence and expanded combat power.

I saw 105 pictures. I personally think this book is worth ten points. There is nothing that makes me very angry. It is this novel. I think there is one thing that is not a mistake but may be a mistake. When I read the first few chapters, I resisted and did not quit because I wanted to see what our protagonist was going to do. If it was just to build a line of defense, there was actually nothing to read in this novel. But later, this novel also showed me a very grand and spectacular universe and some people and things about the protagonist. The author is quite good at portraying the protagonist, and the novel as a whole allowed me to read 100 pictures without any lag except for the first few pictures, which is rare. I suggest that the author, if possible, change the beginning to let readers know what you have to do besides repairing the house. The beginning is very boring unless the person reading the novel has never read science fiction. It is necessary. Well, you said that just repairing a line of defense is easy to persuade readers. In fact, the protagonist does not have to appear at the beginning of the novel, but you must let people know what you are going to write. You can't just build some lines of defense. There's really nothing to see in that thing. At the same time, repairing the house lines is one thing. Secondly, the author needs to write something fresh to give people some magical feelings. Otherwise, we may not be able to read the novel. Now I have seen the 105 pictures. The protagonist's broad future has not finally matched up with the title of the novel. This is quite similar. It is really rare to see this situation. Most of the time, I know what the protagonist is going to do just by reading the title. It will soon be verified in the river. However, I have not verified this novel until now, otherwise the defensive line at the beginning will not have much effect. There are some ancient novel titles that start with four characters. They are probably some hot-blooded titles or something. Well, there are all kinds of ancient titles. You can tell that they are very old at a glance. But some ancient titles also have some very interesting content hidden under them.

It was my first time writing a book and I had a lot of questions. The Luofan galaxy has been dawdling for a long time in the early stage, but I also want to take this opportunity to explain the background settings. If there is any problem, I will correct it later (=ＴェＴ=) The first thirty chapters are about Luo Fan. If you are not interested in these, you can quickly skip them. Anyway, you only need to know how many people there are, and it will not have much impact on the subsequent plot.

Good-looking (♥∀♥) very exciting [full] [love] [please give more] [please give more] [blowing kiss] [laugh] [laugh] [laugh] [love] [love] [love] Come on, author, work hard, author!

This one is much better than the others I have read. The setting of this book is relatively novel, but the content and style are a bit strange to read, and it feels like a mixture of different colors. Sometimes when I write double lines, I pick up the lines when I want to see something exciting, which makes people uncomfortable. Another thing is that the author should have a bigger imagination and not be too limited to the current level of technology (but not too big, some books look very brainless). Overall, it looks pretty good. There may be some points that I didn't explain clearly, so please forgive me. The above is just a personal opinion.

It seems pretty good, but I just don't understand why you don't grab someone's tongue and ask for information after the war breaks out.

Hahaha, five stars are here, support the author.

Very novel science fiction novel

This background feels like Xiling's. . I remember that there was a civilization that was also similar to crystals and fought against the abyss.

This book is good but a bit short. What is the background? Warhammer?

Hard science fiction, very exciting, I suggest the author make a sequel.

Stars plus Warhammer, the timeline is now in the Golden Age of Mankind.

It makes no difference whether the protagonist is an AI or a human

No, no, that's great

Apart from being a bit boring, the rest of it feels okay

The only regret is that this book may end here, and there is not much meaning in continuing it. After all, the alliance will lose...

It still looks pretty good so far.