Journey to the Star Sea: My Interstellar Empire

The plot gradually gets on track and is fascinating. I hope the author can make more improvements to optimize the rhythm of the plot, the accuracy of the language and text, and the details of the article. Explain in detail many details and the setting of the overall world view. The author must be able to put himself in someone else's shoes, analyze and reflect on the words he has written from the reader's perspective, and craft them carefully. In short, new authors, although they have shortcomings, are worthy of encouragement and good news for you.

The theme is novel and the content development is reasonable, but the development of the protagonist is relatively slow under the background of the starry sky, and the development speed can be accelerated appropriately. However, it is worth mentioning that the author has a very vivid expressive ability in describing characters, but is slightly insufficient in describing the environment, leaving people with too limited imagination. Now this problem can be solved by using pictures [Learned] [Learned] [Learned] [Learned] There are too few, so the author hastily coded the words. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

So far it looks pretty good

The subject matter is novel and the schedule is a bit crowded.

Very good, can be raised, I hope I don't want to be a eunuch anymore

It's pretty cool. Why don't we get a wave cannon technology?

So far, this book is very good-looking. I love watching battleships battle. Come on, author, go for it! !

Super pretty! ! Come on, Xiling-chan!

This book is the science fiction genre I have read that best meets my requirements.

Not bad. It made me feel comfortable when I first read it. The setting is also good. It's not as brainless as other novels.

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

A good novel

A good book must receive five-star praise [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

The author should update it quickly. Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this [crazy]

Not bad, cheers for the author

EVE, stars... . . Are these games fun? Can anyone tell me?

Very much in line with my preferences

A very good book [like][like]

Highly recommended [Like] [Like] [Like] Very beautiful [Admiration] [Admiration] [Admiration]

It's beautiful, come on, come on, come on!

It feels acceptable

Very interesting, good luck to the author

Super beautiful, super exciting

A very good book

This book is pretty good

Very good. I'm at a loss for words.

Let me ask, are the crews of the warships built in the star port filled with the population of 50,000 immigrants? Or does it mean that the system directly configures it?

It's a very good book. It can be seen that the author plays a lot of interstellar war games. The protagonist in the author's writing also develops quite quickly. Come on, author!

It's pretty average in Tomato