After Traveling Across the Stars, I Became the Boss's Favorite

I think it's pretty good. The whole article is lighthearted and sweet. They get along harmoniously and dote on the heroine very much. Although it may be a bit mindless. But overall it's quite good, a bit like a refreshing novel from the heroine's perspective. But there are still some shortcomings, and it is a bit illogical. For example, the protagonist has lived in the apocalypse for more than ten years, but he turns out to be so childish and too naive and romantic. Not to mention anything else, a woman in her 30s will not be so childish and careful, not to mention that she has lived in the apocalypse for 19 years. Her heart should have been hardened long ago. , Instead of being like a truly ignorant child who picked up the male protagonist who might be in danger without considering the consequences. There was no sense of vigilance in the apocalypse. Although I knew they had traveled to the interstellar world, the male protagonist had blood on his body at the time, and the system also reminded me that I still had to pick him up even if it brought a crisis. I felt a little willful. Moreover, the male protagonist's feelings for the female protagonist are also a bit reluctant. I just fell in love with it out of nowhere. Without any process, I can't tell why I fell in love with it. Of course, if someone wants to do this, we can't judge too much. So I hope the author can add to the plot, for example, explain why the heroine has a childlike character. Please explain why the hero fell in love with the heroine? Even if there is no specific reason, give it a general description

All I can say is that this is a super cool article. But I suggest that the author should not write about other people's love affairs in the main story, but in the side chapters. I hope the author can see how this comment can be improved It should be written on the sidelines

It's good to watch. I used to have to read this kind of story about the main character when he was a child. I didn't want to watch it again when he was a child. The author directly said "ten years later" and it made me feel instantly comfortable after watching it. It's just that it's so short. Come on and update it.

It's very good-looking, a group favorite, not abusive, and the heroine is not wronged. The disadvantage is that every time the author reaches the climax, he has to add some supporting characters in the middle, which seems to affect the mood. Every time I see the supporting characters, I want to skip it, but I am afraid of affecting the subsequent plot. In fact, the supporting characters can be mentioned in a few strokes. There is no need to describe it in such detail, which is a bit overwhelming. The details that the author wants to write can be added to the final extra chapter.

There are many more authors I think it looks great! [Smile]

Good-looking, sweet love story, group favorite. Everything else is pretty good, except that there are a bit too many CPs in the middle, but that's okay, they are all CPs from family members, and I really like it when I see it. Moreover, the author is very considerate. You can find pictures of each of the clothes described in the comment area. They are really beautiful. I don't know what other people think, but I think it deserves a five-star rating.

I like it so much! It's sweet, the pace is fast, and the CP is very good😍 (There are gay men in this article)

I'm really looking forward to the following [shy][shy]

I give you five stars, don't abuse the article [laughing] Please keep it simple.

Looks good, looking forward to the follow-up

The author writes in big words about Tongzi and the main system... Hehe [laughing][laughing][laughing]

I don't really like the heroine's character. Please find a CP novel about the heroine's system

The protagonists all dote on the heroine, and the heroine also loves them very much.

Really beautiful. Highly recommended.

I think it's pretty good. It's pretty good. The author would like to update it a lot (ง•̀_•́)ง

In fact, I wanted to give up the article when I first read it, but I insisted on reading it and thought it was okay. Fortunately, I didn't really give up. Overall, this book is not bad.

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Overall it's okay, it looks pretty good.

This book is very beautiful, not bad! ! ! !

Looks good, looks pretty good

Very pretty, very sweet

The heroine is a little bit cute.

Come on! Keep writing Europe

Like this novel very much

I like it very much, nice

Very good, the content is very good

Big boost, author, keep up the hard work❛˓◞˂̵✧

It's very interesting. Good luck to the author. When will he publish a new book?

Very interesting, come on, come on, come on [Adore][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

It's very beautiful, the heroine and the hero are very sweet