Help! the Yandere Male Protagonists Are Looking for Your Official Match

Judge for yourself, hehe (ºº )

I haven't seen much, so let's talk about my feelings. (•‾̑⌣‾̑•)✧˖ In the first two chapters, the heroine has not yet traveled through the previous plot, which seemed a bit strange to me. After time travel, well, how should I put it, it seems to be written from the perspective of General Yu. I think since this is a female channel, it should be written mainly from the perspective of the heroine. Moreover, the inner drama of the general is described a bit too much. Although it looks very cute, a contrasting cute image, but maybe my reading habits are not particularly caring. I haven't watched the other male protagonists yet. But for the image of the general, he is tentatively described as a silly, shy and pitiful character in front of the heroine. He is criticized for being possessive and capable of leading troops. That kind of little mad dog that protects food (I don't know if this is my personal feeling |•'-'•)و✧) Then basically everyone fell in love at first sight when they saw the heroine, which felt a bit like a character breakdown. After all, the male protagonists have high positions, and it is unlikely that they will fall in love with one person all at once just because of their appearance... But if that's the setting, of course I didn't say that. Then there are quite a lot of long paragraphs. The author can try to divide the long paragraphs into small paragraphs, and it will be better if large paragraphs appear occasionally. Once I see the long paragraphs, my desire to read is not particularly strong. Of course, this may also be my personal reading habit. This is a small suggestion. I can't stand it for now, but I have high expectations for this article, so I decided to read it again later. It's a GB+female disguised as a boy+multi-male protagonist variety of settings. It's super explosive. I've thought about looking for this kind of novel before, but I haven't found it yet. Come on, great author! ! !

Is the author a novice? He writes very well.

It's beautiful, very powerful, and very well written. I hope it becomes popular.

Highly recommended, very beautiful [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]

It's very beautiful. Come on, work hard and update more. Don't stop updating [laughing] [adoration] [blowing kisses]

So pretty!

It's very beautiful, keep it up

It's beautiful, the story is novel, and the concept is good

The author's writing is really good, the only shortcoming is that there are too few [blowing kisses][blowing kisses]

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It's nice to watch, and I really like the image of the male protagonist in it.