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It's not a novel, there are no poisonous points at present, and the main characters are well portrayed. A typical infinite stream, what attracts me is the protagonist's prophet's time travel and the original owner's infinite retrieval. Come on, author, update quickly, otherwise I will take care of you tonight [laughing evilly]

As far as I have read so far, there are not many flaws. The plot of the whole novel is smooth, with ups and downs, and it seems to have more interesting articles. The story background is a bit like the perspective of the famous Korean comic omniscient reader, but except for the same background, the stories and tasks in it are very different. If you have friends who want to read the same novel, you can consider reading it. I think this book is quite good, and the author promises not to stop updating it. I hope you can support it.

Emm... How should I say it? Okay, it's really good. It's logical and rigorous enough. The author will correct mistakes. You can also take the author away (cross out). The author is very active. It will be a little bit (a little bit, a little bit...) Poisonous (it's really only a little bit, just bear with it and it will pass, and it will become better later), but you must keep reading, otherwise the masterpiece will be covered in dust.

Let's put aside the plot setting for now. The article is written from a first-person perspective, which has a very obvious disadvantage (Tomato readers are not used to it), but at the same time, the first-person perspective has a strong sense of substitution, allowing readers to put themselves into the story. I think it is appropriate to add some habits (verbal actions, etc.), Such as the habitual sentence of Qin Nuo's ghost: I remember when I had all nine eyes open (I played the horror game as a training game), which can make the article more interesting, so that it can represent that you have read this book. (This point of view is for reference only. I have never written any novels, but it is just my opinion as a reader)

This book is truly special, don't miss it! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] 🔸1: It is a book with the first person as the main subject. I don't need to tell you how valuable the first person is, right? Either it's a useless book, or it's not a top-notch book 🔹Two: As an old bookworm (I have forgotten how many years I have read novels, whether on Tomato or elsewhere), I value the author's writing style very much. Whether it is the description of the language between various characters or the description of the scene when they are stepping out, they are all very vivid and vivid (of course it is still very weak compared to those masterpieces, hope you can work harder) 🔸Three: Although this book currently has few chapters, you will definitely be deeply involved in it as soon as you read it. Note: "This is my first time to evaluate a book. The writing is really not good, but this is enough to prove my evaluation of it. By the way, the author's update speed is about the same as that of a donkey in the production team. My family is rushing!!!" [Sending heartfelt comments]

Very nice, let me tell you a few things: 1. It's a first-person perspective 2. There is CP but the current female protagonists are very good. They are not the kind of brainless love brains. They have logic and reasons for falling in love with the male protagonist. (Those who say they only like non-female protagonists should think about the reasons why they like non-female protagonists. Don't just quit indiscriminately when you see a book with a female protagonist. It is useless to follow the trend) 3. The writing is good, the author is active, manages people, and listens to opinions. 4. Like "Omniscient Reader's Perspective", but there is no need to pay too much attention to this. After all, this book is also very exciting, so don't miss it. 5. Come on author, I hope you can continue to update 6.(●´∀｀●)

It's a pretty good book. Why is the rating so low? [What] I think the first-person perspective is very good in this book, and it won't feel inconsistent. And the author is not slow in updating. He updates four times a day, which is better than many authors [Punch out]

The book is good, there are few reviews, the characterization is excellent, and the author is cute (ω< )★ From the beginning to the end, I didn't find anything particularly poisonous, but that's all after just a quick look! Յ(¯¯Յ) I hope the author will not be ignorant of what is good and what is bad, and it would be better if he could update 20,000 words every day [poke]

The meaning of books is not just science popularization. My purpose of reading is very simple, to relieve stress, for grades, to be curious about things, etc. I remember when I first read the book, I would carefully read every word, comment seriously, and remind myself of updates. Now, the whole life and interaction, discussion and criticism, to get back to the point, I consider myself an old bookworm. I like this book a lot (the reason for the short viewing time is that I don't often use tomatoes). It rarely uses the first person, and narrates the perspective of the protagonist from the reader's perspective, the numbness of life and the excitement of the novel. The author depicts each vivid character, such as the "protagonist" Xin Shiye, who has gone through countless reincarnations and ended the story. The "game" that annihilates human nature and becomes the "savior" has laid a lot of foreshadowing. The author's delicate writing style makes the article not boring, and has a certain degree of interest. The author is also very cute and likes to interact with readers. Every comment should be well read, and three chapters are updated every day (although it is not enough). I believe that as long as it is not unfinished, this will be a very good-looking novel (I kind of like the harem, you figure it out) [full] [full] [full] Of course, I can accept it even if there is no harem or no heroine. After all, I really like this book [] @ bitter sea traveler

It's really well written and the concept is very original. A conceptual structure that was rarely seen before, although some parts of the logic are not smooth enough. But he still can't hide his "unconventional" unique ideas. It's great to read this book.

I have only watched more than 50 of them so far, and I feel that there are too many quarreling scenes between the two heroines, which somewhat affects the viewing experience. In addition, I want to ask how the protagonist of the original book will deal with it later. Give it 4 stars first

Big cheers to the author, the writing is very good.

It's objective but overall it's okay, but this book still has some minor flaws. I'm currently at 3,300 pages in. For example, the pace at the beginning is too slow, and the description of human nature is not as delicate as the Korean book. The twist is too late, which makes it difficult to retain readers. The book has a section of 1+1+1 (famine plus battle wall plus undercover) that even basic players will not know based on the description. Then it is impossible to live except for people with special abilities. For example, generally speaking, when you are hungry, you will look for food. This is normal. In the end, the collectors Bai Lao and Xin, Bai Laoduo, not to mention, also contributed about 50%. According to the setting, there is a share, so it is best to be killed. But there is no share. It should be the author who has forgotten. I hope the author will do a better job and write a better book.

It seems pretty good so far, and the writing is top-notch. The omniscient reader is borrowed, but the plot is not repeated, although it is somewhat similar. It's just that it's a bit unreasonable for Chu Xiayao not to explain clearly. I hope the author will work hard

What does this book say? I like the style of the article very much, and the first-person perspective is very novel, and the plot is also very "interesting" [laughing]. In short, I like this novel very much and will keep reading it. Cheers, author (ง˙o˙)ว!

When reading the book, you may feel poisoned by Chu Xiayao's love for the protagonist and some of his overly trusting behavior that makes him look a bit mindless. But believe me, the author's writing skills are first-class. He will not make you feel poisonous. If you think about a certain wrong place carefully, it still makes sense, and there will be answers to all the wrong things in the past. This book has a great plot, a good setting, and unique characters. It can be said to be an excellent book. I read it in one sitting. Unfortunately, the Tomato rating system is too deceptive. But come on, author, I believe you can become popular. Come on!

It's beautiful, it's so beautiful, I can't get enough of it Author, please don't stop updating. Books like yours are really hard to find.

The style is unique, the author is active, the content is super rich and everyone understands it [smirking] [shy] [smirking] That's it for this time... If you behave well next time... It's not impossible to come again...

It's good, the subject matter is novel, but the first perspective was a bit discouraging at first, but after you get used to it, it looks better than the third perspective. It's a very wonderful book [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

The subject matter is novel, it's really good-looking, and it's very appetizing. I'll give you a reward of 15.66. Please keep posting more. It's not enough.

This book is quite good. When I first read the beginning, I thought it was imitating the perspective of an omniscient reader. However, it turned out that only the beginning was somewhat similar. Later, the author wrote his own story. It's good. I like it. I have a lot of imagination. Don't be a eunuch [love] [love] [love]

@ Bitter sea traveler First of all, let me explain to the readers on behalf of the author that this is a harem novel. If you want to read it or not, don't bother the author. If you want to cause trouble, don't think about it. Secondly, the bitter sea is very awesome. The writing is good [eating melon] and the plot is exciting. Of course, I am not the author's trust [snickering] [smirking]

It's not enough to finish it in one breath. The author's writing style is very good and the first-person perspective is still fascinating. The subject matter is also very novel in Tomato. The book has more than 100 chapters and has just started to be rated. Don't be discouraged by the ratings. The author, please do not get stuck in writing＼(`Δ')/

The writing is very good, but the details of the characters are not very impressive. The author can add more detailed descriptions such as clothes and facial expressions. The mystery of the characters is very good. I believe that good works will not be buried. This is my feeling after reading thousands of books for 3,000 hours. You are the second novelist to give me five stars. I believe you will be better. Come on! [Like][Like][Like]

I haven't seen a book of this type and feeling on Tomato for a long time. As for the writing style... It reminds me of the feeling of reading novels in the past (by the way, Xiao Wuri is not tired). There are really few books of this type. For the next book, why not try "Fatal Impulse" and "Horror Classroom" (probably the name). I quite like reading these two books.

[Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss] It looks good, there are some places similar to "The Omniscient Reader's Perspective", but not many, it's very boring.

I haven't seen a book like this for a long time. My dear author, keep up the good work, I will keep reading [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

The book is indeed very exciting, but let me complain. The person named Tianle in Chapter 110 was my name, but he died. When I saw that, my heart was shocked (complex). . . Hey, he didn't die, that's okay!

Although the author's writing is good and the plot setting is good, there is nothing poisonous about it, but when I saw Wu Ri Wu Wu and Chu XX, I really couldn't help it. I'm sorry, author, I'm going to take the first step! (I really can't stand this kind of plot, but I will support the author's other book) [Almost crying] [Crying]

It's very well written, it's the first time I've seen this type of writing. I should probably keep pursuing it. I hope the author will not stop updating, I will keep reading!