
General Zhao Who Took Refuge with the First Emperor
投靠始皇的赵国将军
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 323k Words
- Genre
- Historical
- Subgenre
- Historical & Ancient
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
1Reads
5.8Score
214Chapters
33.5kReads · all time

投靠始皇的赵国将军
The protagonist written by the author is a bit 2 There is too much written about the protagonist's psychological activities, and there are also many modern things written on top, which is too watery.
Why does it have such a big sauce flavor? Damn it?
The writing is as serious and upright as that.
Garbage, identification completed
The protagonist has too much inner drama and half of the chapter is complete nonsense.
Water, less updates, less words, more explanations, more nonsense, more thoughtful descriptions of battles, only surprise soldiers? Nothing else? Are there any special arms?
All I can say is that the author's ideas are so wild and unconstrained. Coming to Qin with Western ideas, I don't know what you want to write?
Good-looking, come on
A lot of "and" and "and"
(「・ω・)「Hey, there are a lot of psychological dramas in the front, and there are obvious flaws. The writing is not very good, and the plot is pretty much the same.
Generally. There's so much inner monologue. I feel like you are just writing a few more words. It can be there, but too much will make it feel average.
What the hell are you writing? I'm giving you two stars because I'm afraid you'll be proud.
The story is pretty good. The writing is not good. Then. But words like this are used too much.
Too many words
You talk too much
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One chapter a day pays off the word count,