Entertainment************

Lily still?

A rubbish book. After singing two rubbish songs, you can't finish 60 chapters. The world revolves around the protagonist? ? ? Still a white lotus. Look at the famous song "The Day Next Door". There are so many songs on the earth. What are you afraid of?

What a failure for that cyber violence incident. Why do you take out violence on others just because you have experienced violence? ? This kind of person cannot be let go. Don't say it's pitiful. You won't resist or ask for help when you're being bullied? Do you only backhand violently towards others? Violence against others online leads to the whole network being trolled. Especially violent people still have names and addresses. If violence really succeeds, it will be a dead end for violent people.

You can delete all chapters from 20 to 27. It's all nonsense. The protagonist has already participated in the show and still has to watch TV. It's too stupid for you to write this paragraph in seven chapters.

The rhythm is a little slow. It takes you 200 chapters to finish the draft, so you should speed up the game appropriately. Everything else is okay, just passing the mark. There is very little transformation entertainment, I hope you can keep writing, come on!

It's non-toxic, turned into literature and entertainment, and it's very well written.

Too watery, a little helpless

Can you tell me what song you chose?

Come on, keep an eye on your appointment!

Come on, author!

Okay👀ah [smile]

How should I put it? There are repetitions. No wonder I feel like I have seen it before. You said the contestants should sing the previous songs. Can the rest of the content not be the same as before?