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1. There are some places where the sentences are not fluent, but it is not a big problem. It will be fine if you write more. 2 I think the author's writing style is more relaxed. It's okay to make jokes, but don't make bad jokes. Some of them are really too much. 3. The protagonist has some B-levels and is decisive in dealing with enemies. However, this plot is a bit cliche. 4 So far, the reincarnation identity of the protagonist is of little use. I hope that he will be revealed as a saint soon. I think the future is promising

It's still ok. Come on, come on, add a bookshelf.

How should I put it? The reason I didn't want to give it such a high rating was because I didn't promise the author to read Chapter 33. The first part was pretty good but the second part was a bit unbearable. However, there is still a lot of room for improvement. Come on, author.

I feel like it's well written

That's not bad. Isn't your book recommended by so few people?

There is room for improvement, come on

Not bad, I still need to work harder on my writing.

I have listened to eleven chapters and want to finish it. The idea is good, and the writing is better than mine. Come on.

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