诸天：从迎娶邀月宫主开始

It's very well written, chopping melons and vegetables all the way, invincible, and very touching. His personality is not pedantic, he is not addicted to drugs, and he is not a mother-in-law or a mother-in-law. Worth a look.

Bad news: Stitches, many characters in it are copied from other martial arts novels Good news: everything is stitched together, the plot advances reasonably, the appearance of other characters will not be too sudden, and the plot flows smoothly The only drawback is that the author can't update ten times a day [smile]

The book is a good book, at least it is the best mixed martial arts novel I have ever read. Don't rush to write too many martial arts characters and novel plots. Follow the path of the protagonist step by step in the book, so that you can write for a long time. Too many martial arts novels are mixed, which is difficult to write and easy to confuse. It will also make people boring. You must have your own story line, and it is better to use martial arts novels to assist you.

She can be said to be one of the most lovable sisters in the world~even more lovable than the sister who specializes in writing cute articles~ Really, what are those sisters nowadays that make people's blood pressure soar and wish they could kill their sisters and become enlightened? They must be written by people who have sisters in reality~ Only people who don't have sisters can write truly lovely sisters~~

It is a rare martial arts novel that combines traditional and new styles. It is wonderfully written. Unlike most online novels nowadays, the main character fights monsters and upgrades, nor is he invincible at the beginning. The storyline is arranged reasonably and smoothly. Although the update is a bit slow, the writing is worth the wait.

It seems okay so far. As long as the fighting strength does not collapse later, it will be a good book. It seems to me to be quite good so far. There is no system, no brainless harem, the protagonist has a normal IQ, and it really takes off. I recommend it personally.

It's similar to a book I read before, but that book is about fighting through different martial arts realms one by one, and ascending to the next level when the realm is full. The protagonist also has a sister in the beginning, and later in the finale the two meet in the heavens. This book is also good. But has any book friend told me the name of that book? I want to read it again [Eating Melon]

Okay, okay, this book is really well written. I really like this type of book, and the writing is pretty good. The protagonist is a genius who feels comfortable, and doesn't want to feel wronged like a mortal. The most important thing is that I just now discovered that I have finished reading the author's previous book Zhutian and gave it a five-star review. No wonder this book is so touching. It turns out that I was fascinated by your boy in the previous book.

Why is the rating so low? Both the plot and character creation have a strong foundation, and the writing is also excellent. It has the flavor of martial arts in the past. Although the game is reborn, it is not just a nine-point rating. If it does not collapse later, I will give it a five-star rating.

Yes, very interesting. But I still hope that he can advance that world and make it dimensionally high. Well, then all the people in the world who know, think, and care about will have the opportunity to grow further. It would be interesting to write such a story, and then promote this matter to the future. Discover other, higher-dimensional worlds to interact with. There are various characters in it. Exchange and collision, that kind of thinking is interesting.

Plot: Rich Characters in the book: vivid and vivid Protagonist: Steady and decisive in killing, domineering yet funny, funny and clever I started reading when I was bored in the evening. I read it all night long without even starting to read, and I didn't feel bored all night! Highly recommended

The content of this book is very good, the plot, the emotional line and so on. It was originally rated as five stars, but the one thing that is a bit hard to accept is that it is too short. One chapter is only 11 pages, and it is probably just over 1,000 words. It is too perfunctory. Author, you should just write one chapter a day, with 3,000 words. It is also a pleasure to read. It only takes 5 minutes to finish it in two or three days at a time.

I have been a bookworm for 15 years, and I have read a lot of interesting articles. At least the interesting articles in Tomato can make me read no more than 10 books to the end. The author of this book has great potential, and the overall view of the world is scalable. The plot until the end is not as good as other books. Same, the later period is weak and has many pitfalls. At least the combat power is very suitable and does not collapse. It quotes representative characters from other great works as a foreshadowing. The humorous plot made me stay up for countless 2 o'clock before falling asleep. This is the second time I have given it 5 stars this year. I am looking forward to the next book.

You can read it, the writing is lively and interesting, but the chapters are a bit short. The author should update it more. There are really very few books that Tomato can read now. The score is too watery, but as an old bookworm, I feel that the score of this book is true.

The book is good, but there are too many female characters. One or more, the author can give me an accurate answer.

Although it is short and weak [laughing and crying], the plot design is special enough! Five stars sent, keep up the good work!

I have read more than 300 chapters. Advantages: The various plots are fascinating and worth reading [exploration] Disadvantages: If you have become an immortal and have a single heroine, it would be easier to become a eunuch [laughter]

The characters are very clear and the plot is very compact. It is basically a very good mixed martial arts novel. I still come from "Wandering in the Sky". Good luck to the author [OK] [Like]

It's the best mixed martial arts I've ever seen. It's just boy's martial arts. When will I be able to eat meat... I was careless. I read the author's other books. It's not a harem. Run away!

I have read more than 500 chapters and come back to evaluate them. The first 500 chapters are definitely high-quality articles about mixed martial arts. 1 Swordsman: Helping Yue Buqun, helping Lin Pingzhi, Linghu Chong for nothing, beating Zuo Lengchan but not killing him directly, chasing Dongfang Bubai (not written as a female review), 2 Befriend Lu Xiaofeng and Hua Manlou, save Ye Gucheng, kill Gongsun Auntie and Lin Xianer in seconds (killing these two directly is a good comment), and simply take Li Xunhuan 3. Wei Xiaobao is not well described, and none of Xiaobao's wives are confiscated (not made into maids or anything). This is also a good review. 4 Single female protagonist invites Yue to make friends with Yan Nantian and save Jiang Feng (complex martial arts exercises) 5. Little Dragon Girl, Li Mochou became his disciple. He did not take Huang Rong, nor did he have any ambiguity with her (this is really good), and did not write about Yang Guo (it reduced the difficulty of writing [laughing]) 6. Simply teach Xiao Feng well, accept Murong Fu as his subordinate, ignore Duan Yu and Xu Zhu, and Duan Yu's wives don't want them (another good comment). I feel good about giving Zhong Ling a chance. 7 Shuangyong simply gave it a chance and didn't try its best to help the praise. Yuwen's family was completely wiped out. It wouldn't be a bad idea to confiscate Shi Feixuan and Wanwan. 8 Fengyun World gave Xiongba a chance and did not suppress Fengyun. Overall, it was okay. To sum up, the protagonist is very cool in the early stage, without any brainlessness, he kills very decisively, and the rhythm is very smooth. It is a very high-quality text in mixed martial arts. I give it five stars [like] [like]

It's okay, there's a certain logic to it, but it's a bit hard to suppress the protagonist's strength in the early stage, but it's pretty good later on. It just depends on how the author writes after that. Anyway, it's quite enjoyable to watch now. The protagonist's strength is almost overwhelming.

First of all, if you want to see the harem, you can go. Just ignore the protruding pig's feet. The heroine is Yao Yue, but she is an original with the name of Yao Yue. All the girls that appear, including the heroine, are just to whet your appetite. The early stage is good, and you can see that she has put her heart into it. In the middle stage, her combat power begins to collapse, and she starts to sew randomly. Later, it becomes pure AI.

A wonderful book written by Zongburi

So far, it seems reasonable and well-founded, and the characters have distinct personalities. Read and write about mixed martial arts, but break away from the stereotype and create something new. The writing is fluent and logical, and the writing is wonderful. It's just that the number of words is too few, not enough to read!

I rarely give 5 stars, you can check my review history! Basically all 2 stars! But what you wrote made me enjoy reading it! The plot foreshadowing and details made me unable to stop watching! This is very good! Come on, author!

It was well written and I enjoyed reading it. I also read another book by the author and liked it very much. Generally, I rate it after reading it, but if I have previous credibility, I will give it 5 stars first. I believe the author will not give me an excuse to change the score. Finally finished reading.

It's very beautiful, and I, who have been short of books recently, read it. But there are two things I'm more worried about: 1. Will the issue of combat power level collapse later? 2. Also, this is a mixed martial arts show after all. How to deal with some popular female characters?

This book is really good, especially the description of Lu Bu's fight for Mink Cicada Q picture with Sun Wukong. Hundreds of battles gathered together, but Xue Baochai It is indeed too strong, if it weren't for Noxan's outer ring + Noxar Guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing will kill you. But i compare Think about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Little You're a proud man, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey who knocked him to death with three sticks. In general In short, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are also very good. Bit!

It's pretty good, but I wrote a lot of female characters who are interested in the male protagonist. In the end, the protagonist only married Yao Yue, and the other five hundred chapters were confiscated...

To be honest, what I want to see is the glorious story of the protagonist. He can participate in the stories of different people, but he should not directly change them (the above is just a personal opinion), but the writing is still good.