[System + Forming Forces + Cultivating Killers + Summoning Strong Men + Recruiting Legions + Killing Decisively] Others in the world of cultivating immortals are busy cultivating, but I, who is in the late stage of lazy cancer, am busy summoning strong men to form a force with the help of the system. If you can't beat me, just shake him. I just like the way you can't stand me and can't kill me! (Yakuza fantasy, conflict between forces, output of violence)
Reader comments
The structural framework is not clear and it feels a bit messy. Now here, now there. The story line is messy, and it feels like a big game in terms of conception. I thought of a big structure, but the details were all messed up. I have lost the desire to continue watching
Don't write such rubbish books in the future.
What are you writing?
Although I said the writing was not good, I saw that you were a newcomer so I didn't say it.
In fact, it's great. Each chapter has a lot of words and is waterless [thoughts]
The structural framework is not clear and it feels a bit messy. Now here, now there. The story line is messy, and it feels like a big game in terms of conception. I thought of a big structure, but the details were all messed up. I have lost the desire to continue watching
Don't write such rubbish books in the future.
What are you writing?
Although I said the writing was not good, I saw that you were a newcomer so I didn't say it.
In fact, it's great. Each chapter has a lot of words and is waterless [thoughts]