Beng Tie: I Am a Fairy Boat General in a Restricted Area of ​​National Sports.

It's very interesting, and it's the first Star Railway article about the national fortunes that I've seen in Tomato. Can the author write two male protagonists? I especially like Yuanyuan [Love]

Nice! I've read a lot of similar role-playing articles about national games, and many of the protagonists have nothing to do with the characters and are OOC. This one doesn't have any OOC scenes so far, except for the part describing Sylva's appearance, but overall it's great! The author will update the article quickly (Sa Po Rolling, please update ing)

It's quite beautiful (I'd like to ask if there's a female protagonist) [Sending my heart]

The writing is very good, and there are no problems with the characters, such as Sambo, Xi'er and other characters. Compared with the overall plot, the time they appear is not very long. In addition, the timeline is different, so it can be regarded as not a big problem. After all, it is a fan, and it cannot be exactly the same as the original. Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง Ignore some people, they can't write it themselves, and they are talking about others here, hehe~ Some people with bad eyesight should not call out here. Did I mention Jingyuan's character design? If you have bad eyesight, don't bring trouble to others. And I didn't even mention a person's name. Some people took it upon themselves to take the position. Don't I deserve to be scolded? Really convinced

It's super interesting. Jing Yuan's character design is not broken. The only shortcoming is that there are too few. Author, please don't make me kneel down and beg you to type.

The writing is good, one of the few books in Tomato that I like. Unfortunately, I didn't write much when I discovered it. Now I update it every day, so the author will accept the reward and update it every day [Chigua]. The daily updates are simply not enough to read. It's been a while since I've looked at it. There have been a lot of updates. It's so full. It's so beautiful and I love to read it [Learned]

I have read this book. It is quite good in terms of national destiny, and the plot is quite to my liking. But I want to ask something. After writing Belloberg, will the author still write about Luofu? If you write, please update it soon. I want to see Jing Yuan and Jing Yuan meet [smile][smile][smile]

Yay! It's pretty good. There is no emotional line so far! I hope there is no heroine, come on!

It's great. I've watched it over and over again many times. The plot where the actor and the real person stick together is the first time I have seen it in a book of the same type, and I surprisingly accepted it well www Please update more about the author, children will love reading it ^q^

Nice The story of National Games Beng Tie is of very good quality, but the author writes it a bit quickly. He doesn't have to follow the main plot line all the time and adds some branch lines. Many holes dug by Beng Tie's new plot have not been filled in. The story of Yunshang Wuhai can only be regarded as unraveling a corner. Even Jing Yuan's setting in the official setting is incomplete. For example, what is the real name of the blade? The dead fox woman? What are the details of Jingliu taking Jingyuan as his disciple? What are the specific circumstances of the family that broke away from Jing Yuan? What are the details after Jingliu turned into a demonic body? Where did the scroll on Jing Yuan come from? Who are the seven generals of Emperor Gong? Such a big thing happened to Luofu. Why didn't there be any movement in other immortal boats? These are all mysteries. There were many details that were not broadcast during the general's interrogation. If the current plot development progress is followed, it is easy to have incomplete settings and then be backstabbed by MiHoYo. It is better to create some self-designed branch plots to delay the plot first, or add some butterfly effects to the progress of the main plot to slow down the plot.

The description of the general with his eyes closed is really good. It fits the character setting in the game very well. It's not that it's a brainless and cool text. The general with his eyes closed is also very good. He looks lazy, but in fact he is always calculating the art of war in his heart.

It's nice to read. It's really rare to see such a well-written but not very watery story about the national destiny. I hope the author won't be too sloppy and won't collapse in the later stages. (Although I really, really want to see the meeting between Jing Yuan and Jing Yuanyuan, the author needs to take his time! The rhythm cannot be messed up)

This book is very good, and the author is very careful in shaping the characters and arranging the plot. Well, I've been reading fanfics on various platforms, and I feel like this is the least OOC of all the fanfics I've ever read. Come on--

It's well written, Tomato's first adventure article about national sports in forbidden areas with the background of collapsing iron.

An article like this that I read to the end in one breath and feel so comfortable after reading it must be five stars! I have to say that the protagonist's writing is really apt, and the author must have had an in-depth understanding of it. He deserves five stars for being so serious! Recommended, highly recommended!

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This Star Dome Railway novel is one of my favorites. I feel that there is no big OOC in terms of character design, and Jing Yuan and Jing Yuan's posts are really a bit awkward. The story progresses a little slowly, and there is definitely no heroine. It starts with Beloberg, then to Fairy Boat, and then to No Star and Dome. The author's writing style is still very good, but it's a little rough, but it's understandable. After all, the plot of the game "Star Railway" doesn't advance much. If you write too fast, you will easily get backstabbed. It's understandable, but I just hope that the author can write more stickers about Jing Yuan and Jing Yuan. I really like the two big white cats posting together. But I have a little doubt, that is, after the fairy boat plot ends, will Jing Yuan continue to follow the train or stay in the fairy boat. I personally understand that if the author wants to continue to advance the plot, he should follow the train plot, but I really want them to stick together. [Sending Hearts]

When I first saw that it was a story about the national destiny, I thought it was not very good. However, I didn't expect that the writing was quite good. It felt like it was just covering up the national destiny. The national destiny was not very important. The focus was all on the protagonist. Then, the star iron plot was completely separated and a new main line belonging to the protagonist was opened. Although the general direction did not change much, some minor changes were made. The author of the plot is very interesting. For example, the protagonist plays Jing Yuan, and then the star god reveals that he can only act as an actor. I think this is very well written. After all, in Star Iron, compared with the star god, Jing Yuan is not really a top-notch combat power. Even among the star god envoys, he is not good at combat power, but is famous for his resourcefulness. So this point can be regarded as a starting point to guide the protagonist to find his own way. When it comes to the plot of Xianzhou, some of the plot arrangements of the two Jingyuan are also very interesting, and the writing style is also very comfortable, making it very immersive to watch, and the plot is told in an unhurried and fascinating way. It is truly a rare masterpiece! [Like][Like]

The quality of the article itself is fine, but here I still want to mention a few things that I am not satisfied with (it will not affect the general readers): This book, like other Star Iron humanities, will rise to the Star God level later. At this level, it faces the problem of explaining the origin of the system and time travel. Like other works, this book chooses to explain it as a higher dimension. I personally don't like to set this point separately. It is very OOC and does not cooperate with the grassroots world view of the work. (But let me reiterate that this issue has no impact on general readers, and may only cause some discomfort to some hardcore players). Overall, this book is a rare fanfic that respects the setting and is recommended to be read. To be honest, the author can be a little more relaxed in describing non-main plot or original content. Many plots just tell the main plot again with the addition of the protagonist. The kind where you can guess the next section after reading the first section is a bit boring. [Think]

Support, the plot is very good, it is recommended to slightly reduce the live broadcast barrage.

This book is actually okay. At this stage, there are not many people writing about Jing Yuan in Star Iron. Moreover, the book itself is not bad, and the plot is also okay. It is just that the part where Dan Heng uses the identity of Mao Mei to go to Xianzhou feels a bit strange. If he does this privately, wouldn't the country where Mao Mei belongs to have any objections? Also, Dan Heng has a bit of a bad character design (only personal experience). As for the plot, I personally feel that the part of Xianzhou is better written and interesting, especially the part where the two generals cheat people and each other. Also, although the protagonist is playing Jing Yuan, the author also said in the article that Jing Yuan is not the one who wants to To become Jingyuan blindly is to carve out your own path. In the early stage, I felt that it was a bit poisonous to meet Mao Mei after entering the forbidden area of ​​the National Games. However, the author's writing is already great. Overall, the writing of this book is good. I look forward to the subsequent plot development and exciting updates. The author gives a big boost!

Brothers, it's definitely not a loss to click in and watch. The characters' IQs are online, the original characters are not OOC, the plot settings are reasonable, and it's very exciting. The protagonist is powerful but not brainless, and the author's language is smooth and attractive enough. In the circle of book friends, there are even generals who have personally arrested people, substituted for others, etc. And created two short articles. Hurry up and dive vertically into the pit with me [Like][Like][Like] I'm trying to score points, don't send it.

The characters in this book fit the personality~ Each plot is well designed, not only in the game, but also original by the author, and each logic is handled appropriately. Twice a day! I read two chapters every day, but it's not enough~ The previous plot of Belloberg is almost a foreshadowing. I personally think the plot of Luofu is more interesting. I hope everyone will be patient. They will be so happy when they see Jing Yuan and Jing Yuan looking at each other in the mirror later! ! ! (Very loud) (Quietly) You can kowtow to Yuan Yuan~ Narcissus is very, very good, and there are many Yuan Yuan wives in the book circle, even 🚗 All in all, I highly recommend reading this book! ! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

Go ahead, go ahead (I just realized I didn't rate it) Ah ah ah, Jing Yuan Jing Yuan, ah ah ah Oh ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho ho! ! ! (Throws the phone to the ground due to excessive excitement) (Monkey jumps) (Baring teeth and claws) (Screaming) (Twisting) (Crawling in darkness) (Climbing into the tropical rainforest) (Swinging on vines) (Baboon barking) (Atavistic roar) (Screaming) (Transforming into maggots) (Wriggling) (Rolling) (Charging towards the bad friend) (Shaking her hard) (Kicking her away) (Screaming)

This book can be considered in the front row among the novels of this type that I have read. It is not stuck in the two words of national destiny and role playing. In comparison, it is more like a fan novel that adds these two elements. The existence of the "audience" seems to play a role in regulating the speed of the article and the lively atmosphere. It represents the readers' complaints about Jing Yuan's behavior, which sometimes makes me smile. Mao Mei's existence is more like March 7 in the train set, and my evaluation of her is more inclined to be silly. In addition, as for the female protagonist, my opinion is that it is better to eat Jingyuan and Jingyuan. After all, I prefer the big white cat to the female protagonist (actually there is no one). [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's invincible and beautiful. It's the best one I've seen so far among the national games. The characters are very realistic, the plot arrangement is reasonable and attractive, and the update frequency is stable. The interaction with other people is also very interesting, and the expectations are very high (that is, every time after chasing a new update, I am still not satisfied,,, Jijiji, I am the King of Jiji)

I have also read some humorous articles about national games, and this one deserves to be the first. While it fully creates the excitement, it also has many funny plots. The setting is also very good. Not to mention that the characters have distinct personalities, but they are not very different from those in the game. The protagonist Jing Yuan perfectly fits my other image of Jing Yuan. For some places in the game that are difficult to overcome, the author will use stronger words to overcome them, such as Belo Borg. The timeline written by the author is a few years before the arrival of the train, but how does the author get back to this pit? The setting of the Star God is also used here. (I feel that the Star God made the Star Dome Train arrive at Belo Borg in advance.) In the end, I drew Jingyuan at 160, then I drew Huangquan with two draws, and Rakshasa with ten draws.

Among the books I have read, this is the only one that makes me continue to follow it. It is so beautiful.

Although I haven't been looking for novels on Tomato for a long time, it is indeed the only one I feel comfortable reading and feel is good and my favorite [shy]. As a person who likes to read fanfiction, I am really happy. I can only say that maybe most of the writing styles in Tomato's books are not to my taste [crazy]. Because I like Jing Yuanyuan, I want to find a fan of Jing Yuanyuan, because Tomato knows the National Games novel () and wants to read the National Games... In short, it is great [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

I feel that this book is really good, and it is one of the best Star Railroad fanfics. This book is a national destiny + role-playing genre. The main character Jing Yuan plays the role of Shence General Jing Yuan, who comes to the Star Universe and becomes the pioneer of the Dragon Kingdom. The plot starts with Yaliluo VI, and then he takes a Mao Mei as his younger brother, and Mao Mei takes in a citizen who is living a good life as her younger brother. Jing Yuan and Jing Yuan are both "cheats", and the plot of the two swapping identities is really funny. But the Star Gods seemed to know that Jing Yuan was the actor of Jing Yuan, and Xun Xun also made him a general (seems to be his deputy). All in all, the plot is novel and worth watching, the characters have strong emotions and are very individual.