Genshin Impact************

[Request for update] People in today's world are so sinister that they can only seek comfort from lilies.

Yeah, the plot is good. The lily is so big! Gan Yu's character collapsed, but the character was meant to collapse. (Author, all three of your Q groups are full, can you open another one? Thank you!) Scored. Don't scold me, I don't want to see this book blocked

This book is rarely a book that interests me, but here are some suggestions for the author: The progress is too fast. Although I know you are thinking about us, if the progress is too fast, it will still cause a little discomfort. (You can write a few more paragraphs when you first meet Gan Yu, ask her to make some inquiries, and finally agree to call her sister) (Didn't the protagonist get beaten when she was finishing her treatment? You just wrote that Gan Yu came and took her for treatment, and then there was no follow-up, and she was cured quickly. Here, you can suggest that the person who injured the protagonist also apologize.) I know you want us to see those plots faster, but the progress can be slowed down a bit. If you write too fast, it will be messy. When others read it, they will not be able to read it because they have not read a few chapters (you must know that many readers like to skip reading) Overall, it's pretty good. I give it a four-star rating to encourage it. You can read more similar articles to inspire inspiration. "The Vampire Princess" (a very good book, forced to discontinue the update). "I am not a weakling who became a maid with fox ears" (although a man changed into a woman, the structure is clear)

Hurry up and update the author. Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this (ง •̀_•́)ง Come on

Very nice, I just hope the author can update it with more pictures!

There are some minor flaws in the plot at the beginning, but it's pretty good later on. The author's creativity is outstanding, and he cleverly integrates astringent elements into serious articles, giving people a unique and interesting reading experience. There are still a few places in the group, but they refused my entry and said that the group was full. Do you think I am blind and unhappy? [Smile][smile][smile] No, the more I think about it, the angrier I get [angry]

Lily, Tie Tie, the most beautiful thing in the world

It looks great, but can you create a group? All the groups are full [crying]

TM shocked me for a hundred thousand years. The last page of the book can be reviewed. The author also remembers to add more groups. I don't dare to give more for fear of being banned.

The author is not simple Sorry author, it's been three days

@ Chi @ [][][][][][][][][][][][] I want to take you away

Check it out. Is there any kind person who can post the uncut version of In Liyue? Press again.

Is there a second possibility in the extra chapter?

Let's talk about the advantages first. The author understands that dog food writing does not require combat power. This is a good point, and the plot setting has no major flaws. To put it bluntly, in Mondstadt, there is no need to write characterization here. The disadvantage is that the writing style is a bit immature. The author needs to understand that what we are looking at is Gan Yu + the protagonist, not the protagonist + Ying. The interaction between Gan Yu and the protagonist should be the main theme.

Author: Where are you going? Can you say something? [Top post]

I think the rating of 5.6 Is too low, so I decided to raise it a little [laughter] Forget it, let's just press it down.

I joined the group and was kicked out again. I didn't do anything?

Hey, this book is going to be finished early, because the review is getting more and more excessive, causing the author to collapse, so it will be finished early, but I want to ask the author, what is the full name of your new book? I'll search for it. Every punctuation mark must be correct, otherwise I won't be able to find it.

It's a miracle that this book has survived to this day [laughing evilly]

Why is it comprehensible reading? [Laughing]

[You taste it carefully] It's very exciting, but can you elaborate a little more?

A very good book. The author must be very good-looking. Only then can I write such a very good book. I don't want to go into too much detail. Everyone is welcome to take a look.

The author's understanding of Genshin Impact is really shallow.

Does the author really not have any weird side jobs?

I finally understand why your first few books were blocked [laughing]

Good book, unexpected happiness

This cow is very good-looking [laughs evilly]

Very exciting to watch

Everyone is yellow, hehehe

Woohoo, this book cart is so fast