The Mysterious Otherworld: A Seeker's Legacy

The general world view of this book is similar to that of "My Cell Prison" (that is a masterpiece of the Cthulhu mythology, very exciting). It will be updated at the end of June, and it is currently the period of manuscript preparation [laughter]

The cultivation system of Dragon City is relatively briefly described in My Cell Prison. I hope the author can give it full play in this novel. The author's writing was pretty good, but the concept might not be in line with my interests, so I let it slide.

This book is a bit like Boss Han, but I think it can be changed at the beginning. After all, the content of a few chapters is all about the fate space and the content of the legacy of the seeker. This is not good. You may remember it at the beginning, but forget it later. I hope the author, if possible, can modify the previous ones and introduce some basic rules first. The remaining rules can be recalled by the protagonist himself when encountering specific events or talking to people, to help deepen the impression. Overall it's great, keep it up! 😘😘😘

So far so good, I don't even see a typo. Some places are a bit lacking in thought, but these are minor issues. In fact, this is not particularly brain-burning, and most people can understand it. [Sending Hearts]

From a level perspective, I am currently following the setting of the Lord of Secrets, and there are not many main stories at present, just two things, but it looks okay. I hope the author can speed up the pace a bit, and it is necessary to have a big relationship with the current adventure team (the author has already replied, saying that the relationship is not big)

It's so beautiful. Come on, author.

There are too many daily routines, so it's better to enter the game

I finished it by accident. The protagonist's fighting ability is okay and his personality is normal.

It's good to watch, but why doesn't it have a heroine? I think Saint Sister is pretty good [laughs crookedly] If you're not good at writing emotional scenes, you can be like Tomato and turn the heroine into a passerby.

Good looking