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Quietly give yourself a good review and mention this book by the way. 1. This book is actually more group-oriented, although it may be because of my writing style. The reason for the pulp may not seem like it, but this is actually the letter to this group. I am not willing to give up any of the Thirteen Heroes, so I will try my best to We will try our best to give them the same role. Of course, the male lead will also write well. Xiang Xi probably has the most roles, after all - the male protagonist 2. Character issues of heroes and warriors. Regarding this point, you can discuss it. Anyway, I will most likely not change it. Although the words are absolute and a bit unpleasant, in fact, in my eyes, this is what 13 Yingjie would be like in a world without collapse. Again, this is what the author sees. If you think what you see is right and what you wrote is better, then you can write one yourself. There is no irony, it is just an objective discussion. Of course, if your theoretical basis is enough to convince me, then I will change it. Yes, after all, we mainly ask for advice. Let's summarize it. After all, I think this point is quite important. Alicia: Needless to say great, pure and flawless, perfect girl, tall Attack and low defense. (Actually, some people have different opinions on this character design. Some readers will think that in a world without Honkai Impact, Alicia would not be so perfect, and her image should be closer to the girl next door. But I think that no matter where she is, just like the Collapse world, she has experienced a lot, but she is still willing to believe in the goodness of human nature. Alicia will become that flawless person. She is born like this) Eden: With elegance in her bones, she can handle everything calmly Yes, being friendly to friends and strangers socially is a joy An "ordinary" girl who loves to sing and sings beautifully. Aponya: "Gentle", an intellectual big sister who is willing to help others A friendly resident, a night shift nurse who is proficient in knife skills. Sakura: The ultimate girl control with a bit of tsundere, kind and gentle, with her own perseverance She is persistent and will do what she thinks is right and move forward unswervingly in that direction. She is a strong girl. I hope she will meet a boy who will take her seriously~ Velvet: A girl who lacks love and is lonely by nature, but she is a genius, a genius in all aspects. Her latest hobby is making friends, and her goal is to become good friends with a snake first. Mebius: Severely arrogant, speaking out about integrity. His best friend is Alicia, who is a very kind person. (The pure version of the professor that is not contaminated by Honkai~) Gratius: There are only painters who can't procrastinate! She is a very ordinary little girl, very talented in painting, sincere in treating others, and a kind-hearted child! Hua: She hasn't appeared yet. The main reason is because she is positioned as a female college student. Gratiho and Kosmo can appear, which is also because of Apponia. After all, the main characters are still a group of social veterans and basically have no contact with Hua. I will find a way to add it later, so don't worry about the specific character design. Face... Old-fashioned, persistent, strong in martial arts, guardian of traditional culture He is a part-time expert, and Yingjie has the characteristic of being kind-hearted. These are the characteristics of Hua. Padu: So far, I have made relatively few appearances, mainly because my writing skills are limited. You can take your time Positioning words: Timid, lucky, lazy cat, good at calculation I like to take away some small items that my friends don't pay attention to. As for the male character... I won't write it, I won't write it, I've already written it. It's over 1,700 words. It's almost one chapter ahead of me. I'd better follow up with you guys. Take your time and go see it by yourself. Let's stop talking here. See you later~ (Remember to click on the update button. I will not start writing the next chapter until there are 8 updates. After all, you want me to know that someone is watching (@w思)) Leave a comment. By the way, I also know that what I wrote before is quite "general", but I am too lazy to refine it. After all, I think many people have read it, and not many people will read it after I correct it, right? Well, it's also because I'm a little lazy, so I feel like I'd rather give out two more chapters as a bonus… In short, it should look better at the back, but it's almost as good as the front.

Please accept it, this is my last five stars! Love the door!

"They have lived so proudly and carried it through to the end." Alicia, you came to the world in the name of "Promised Land", God has given you the beauty of humanity that cannot be reflected on paper; you live the world with your benevolent body, no more than the brightness of the bright moon; the meteor cuts through the wings of the clouds, dragging the gorgeous tail of the comet, etched in the depths of memory in the journey of life I think I have a firm goal and will be put into practice But the too fast pace brought the wind The scenery ties up the skirt I've never been good at recording life Many good things only remain in memory They are forgotten as time goes by Until she reminded me of the meaning of the journey I'm missing a Mnemosyne in my life God of memory and prophecy Excuse me Will I still be alone in the future? Excuse me Will I still be indifferent to beautiful scenery in the future? Excuse me Will there be a footnote for you in my future? Chasing memories that can't be let go I will embark on a journey with you

I feel like the writing is pretty good, but why isn't it popular? >O<

Good luck, I would like to have more of it

Accept my five stars

Good-looking, but not popular, why? [What]

So sweet ah ah ah ah ah ah ah, I have never seen such a sweet book ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah

It looks good, I love watching it, I want to try Beng San

With five-star reviews [laughing]

5 Stars must be full of confusion

So good, so good

Needless to say, excellent There are no new books so far [almost crying]

Brothers who have good reviews, have good reviews [learned]

There are only four-star reviews for this book so far. It's so good, please give it a thumbs up♪! ! !

It looks good, but don't stop updating it. I don't want to have another customer.

Don't stop! Don't stop! Don't stop! Say important things three times

Very nice book

Sorry, Ling, I failed you [cry][cry][cry]

Personally I think it looks pretty good

Good news needs no words

Why is no one watching?

It's beautiful, thank you to the author!

Good looking, sweet daily writing, top quality.

Very pretty, I really didn't lie to you

Five stars, must be five stars, woo woo woo, my Ellie

It's really too sweet and so wholesome

Good-looking, it's my daily favorite [eating melon]

Everyday, 13 pounds, all-sugar, no-knife Bengsan must-eat, top three on the list [Sending Hearts]

It's over like this [Sending Hearts]