Become an Immortal from the Beginning of a Noble Lady

As a bookworm, I think this is a great read. After reading the whole book for the time being, the plot is relaxed and relaxed, the characters are delicately created, and the foreshadowing is complete. It gives me the feeling that it is elegant, and the breath of prose is integrated into the novel. I hope the author can grasp the direction of the next plot and not deliberately speed up the narrative. In today's fast-paced world, we can provide you with a novel that you can slow down and experience. I also hope that the protagonist will not forget his medical skills, otherwise the plot foreshadowing in the previous article will appear to be derailed from the rest of the novel, resulting in a bad reading experience.

After reading it for a while, it was okay. In fact, the text about sex could be further settled. The psychological description of the protagonist is not very good, it is just the kind of conflicts, weirdness or perversion. Judging from the current plot, the author Da Gai is lacking in characterization in that aspect. In the future, the road to immortality will be more difficult to portray. For example, the unique character image of Daai Immortal is based on him being a boy, and people's stereotypes are easier to accept. However, female fairies on the road to immortality are indeed rare in online articles. In the end, overall the author's pacing control was okay. It is a book worth reading and avoids the pitfalls of most novice novels. In the end, please don't end it badly. Come on, author ↖(^ω^)↗!

The only flaw is that it is a bit messy. Maybe the author's writing style is not good. For people who are impatient, this book may not be readable. However, I have to say that this book is still very interesting. I give four stars. Good luck to the author. I believe you will have a good work in the future.

It's very good, it's a book that suits my taste. There are not so many disgusting things. To cultivate immortality is to cultivate one's character. If one's character is not good enough, there are too many novels that only know about plunder and robbery, and they are not as good as those about gangsters and black men. Step by step from a small place to the world of cultivating immortals, the world view slowly opens up, you can experience the people and scenery in the process of cultivation, and you can experience the transformation of your heart when you climb high and look far.

It's good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, author!

It would be a pity to put tomatoes in at this time.

So pretty! But the plot of cultivating immortality disappeared right after it started. Come on, don't stop updating [I'm about to cry] It's not easy to find such a novel about cultivating immortality with a novel and exciting plot.

Okay, come on, author [laughing evilly] I hope to be single or lily [laughing]

Yes, yes, make a decision before taking action, have IQ, knowledge, courage and pursuit. I've been using it for a long time, and you just updated it so much [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

Oops, there are too few. It's not enough to watch. Don't get married. Lily is the best. I can barely accept being single. It's really too few to watch.

Beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ Good books are rare on Tomato. It's really hard to find a good book on Tomato! This is an accidental discovery, but it is very good. The writing, plot, and characters are all good (*^ω^*)

Refreshing, good book

Not bad! Just one more question, huh? One? Marry?

It's so damn good, I can't stop. I'll update it soon. I've always wanted to read this kind of fairy tale, and finally I found one that suits my liking. It's too slow. It's already 190,000 words long. The protagonist hasn't practiced yet. The plot has to be dragged out like this.

The main plot is good, the protagonist looks like a normal person, but you need to be patient to read the story. Maybe the protagonist is a doctor, so it can be seen that he is very cautious. The overall portrayal of the work is good, please go to the author,

The writing is very good. I can easily find a book that can compare with this one. What I wrote recently can only be described as average.

Very good looking, just fine as a single.

It was a good first read, and I felt like spiritual energy came out of the dust.

Is it better to seek strength and not to stop? Don't make me get down on my knees and beg you. [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

I haven't seen this kind of immortality writing for a long time.

It feels a bit like it, and it's a single article, I like it

Strange, it's very beautiful, why is it rated so low?

Although it doesn't focus on transformation, the writing is pretty good

I looked at the table of contents. Is there an outline for this book? I feel like I just write whatever comes to my mind. It doesn't have the flavor of a fairy tale. I can only see the spirit of life, tranquility, and fantasy.

I feel like the protagonist is too kind

I've read more than a dozen chapters and I think it's okay [like]

I found another treasure in Tomato. To be honest, I have seen no more than three Bianwen books with fairy charm in Tomato. This book is one of them. Its rarity gives this book a huge advantage in competing with other Bianwen. Moreover, the writing style is also at the level of a second-rate online, surpassing at least 98% of Tomato authors. As long as the author works hard, there is a high probability that it will become popular [Like] [Like]

You can write it very much to my taste

Although I have just finished reading the first volume of this book, I can't help but rate it. The writing skills are there, and the plot has a relatively novel beginning. The rating decision is underestimated.

Very nice book