I Was Reborn and Became a Saint of Light

There are several reasons why few people read it: the first-person narration in the opening chapter scares away 50% of the people; several chapters later, the protagonist's sense of existence almost disappears, especially the description of the natural sect war and the struggle of sects. There is no need to write it so early. First establish the protagonist, and then spread out to write group portraits and world view. Since it is a Western fantasy and I like to use group portraits to express it. In terms of worldview, brothers, you should take a look at how much space Mr. Tolkien spent to establish the characters of Bilbo and Gandalf; the routines in the first few chapters are too vulgar, and the language is a bit stiff and complicated, especially when it comes to the confrontation between nature and the war sect. However, the author is still worthy of encouragement for continuing to write, so I can only say keep going. As a result, I didn't see the protagonist again until Chapter 11. The large number of God of War and Thomas in the middle had completely diluted my impression of the protagonist. I can understand that the author wrote a lot of past history in order to expand the world view, but this task should be carried out after establishing the protagonist's image. As a result, three-quarters of the ten or so chapters have nothing to do with the protagonist, but are about old things about an old father and the empire. Even if the protagonist's characteristics, personality, character, and personality were mentioned in the first chapter, they were diluted by this old story. When Messiah appears again in Chapter 11, it will only make people question, who is this person?

It's actually pretty good. But maybe because the author wrote the book, our perspective has always been that of an outsider watching. You can't bring it in yourself. Not like a novel, but a story being told by a person.

Changing Marriage, the writing is excellent, the description of women's clothing and female bodies is perfect, and the description of female abortion is zero. Western sword and magic worldview, group portraits, perfect god battles, the battle scenes are well described, the emotional line is not described much, and there are very few stickers, but the plot is still okay, but it is a pity that it has been discontinued, tsk tsk.

I feel like the author's writing is pretty good. I quite like the writing style. It's much better than the Tomato books. It's this setting, like two bodies and two souls, that makes me weird. I can't read chapter 20 now. I'll look at the development further [exploration]

Very good, time travel. Double body. Marry yourself

The first volume gave me a feeling that this is a story, an epic poem. Overall, it feels good.

Overall it's pretty good, just a little wordy. The story structure is quite refreshing, and I was a little confused when I first read it. It's still pretty good. Let me ask, hundred, single, married?

It's really good (ᵔᴥᵔ), the different styles make my eyes shine.

I backed out for a while when I heard there was going to be a change, but I came back to watch it anyway.

It's beautiful, I quite like watching it.

The author's writing is very good, but why doesn't anyone read it? [What]

I suggest you read the book Bai Ji in Pineapple and the vampire girl, and add Luo Li written in Chongyan. The combination should be very interesting [shy]