The Goofy Female Side Character's Guide to Self-Improvement

It looks good so far The heroine is the most straightforward person I have ever seen. She takes revenge on the spot when she has a grudge. She doesn't argue with the scum. She kills the disgusting father and son on the spot. She doesn't hesitate about her household registration. She is capable but is afraid of becoming a gangster. If the scum stays for a second longer, it is disrespectful to herself. I give her a good review. Cheers to the author.

The writing is good, and the whole story is very readable. It is obvious that the author put a lot of thought into the concept. The language is not refined enough. What I mean is that the information extracted from a large paragraph of text is not rich enough. Once useful information is not obtained, it is easy for people to skip it while reading. At the same time, the pace of the narrative is a bit slow. The heroine's own side plot takes up a considerable part of the chapter. It may be because the narrative method is too flat, without waves, and it is a bit boring to watch, so I basically skipped it and found that there are a few more characters, which have no impact on the main plot. However, if the straightforward narrative method is changed, it may be more watchable. In order to make the writing interesting, the narrative structure, and the use of language need to work more. I read the author's comments. This is her first time writing an article. I think that although this book has flaws, the whole story is still excellent and unconventional. I hope to keep up the good work.

Great love, I don't know the reason at the beginning, but I see the heroine starts killing people brutally. After I know the reason later, it makes sense. The heroine appears to have nothing to do with her, but she is actually soft in her heart. Along the way, she has been thinking about the advice of her mother when she first met, and has been looking for the truth. The story is long, but very compact. The heroine has her own personality and perseverance. People who know the heroine are sincere and are looking forward to her future stories.

So far, it looks good, so cheers to the author

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking. Say important things three times! I like the character of the heroine very much, but... Can she be beautiful alone? I don't need the male protagonist or anything like that😁

Looking forward to the exciting follow-up

It's very interesting. The heroine's straightforward character is very lovable. I'll update it soon.

Mark.172 It's good to watch, but I almost forgot about it after watching it for a week. I can't follow the plot 🤦 I forgot to comment before, but it's not bad anyway.

Not bad, not bad, not bad

I really like reading this kind of article, thank you to the author.