The drunken protagonist traveled to the world of One Piece and became a young Sengoku. I originally thought that I could know the direction of history by reading the comic of the same name before, but I didn't expect that the author of the comic that I traveled through time had not yet drawn! I only know a few big things!
As the time in One Piece grows longer and longer, Sengoku also understands the chaos of the world of One Piece. Sengoku wants to use his own efforts to change this chaotic time!
Reader comments
The subject matter is well chosen, but although I have only watched more than 20 episodes, I feel that the writing is too verbal and the words are too dense. If the paragraphs are larger, I can see it more clearly and not be too tired. There are too many words in one paragraph and the brain is swollen. I hope the words can be more concise.
The daily and character personalities are more prominent, and Garp's character is well depicted, but the dialogue between the characters feels too polite. Warring States and Garp should be more unkind, and there is no sense of empathy that can make people laugh.
It feels like the protagonist has a sense of superiority from time travel without really being integrated into it. All in all, the author's writing is pretty good, and I hope to continue working hard! The characters are not too OOC, and the author's selection of materials for this book is very novel. This is the first time I have seen a novel with the Warring States Period as the protagonist! The last time I read a book, it was by Father Garp. The first part was very good, but the second part just opened up a harem. I hope the author won't forcefully write a love line just because he wants to have a woman. If he can't write a love line, he shouldn't write a female protagonist! The story without a heroine is really interesting, I really like the bond between best friends! All in all, if the author improves his writing skills and opens a new anime series without a female protagonist, I will continue to read it! !
I hope that the Warring States Period can balance the navy and be a true marshal, neither dove nor hawk, but only use them as tools
Very well written, keep up the good work＾0＾~
Isn't this book cool?
In the Warring States Period, sheep were raised and now ducks are raised [smile]
The subject matter is well chosen, but although I have only watched more than 20 episodes, I feel that the writing is too verbal and the words are too dense. If the paragraphs are larger, I can see it more clearly and not be too tired. There are too many words in one paragraph and the brain is swollen. I hope the words can be more concise. The daily and character personalities are more prominent, and Garp's character is well depicted, but the dialogue between the characters feels too polite. Warring States and Garp should be more unkind, and there is no sense of empathy that can make people laugh. It feels like the protagonist has a sense of superiority from time travel without really being integrated into it. All in all, the author's writing is pretty good, and I hope to continue working hard! The characters are not too OOC, and the author's selection of materials for this book is very novel. This is the first time I have seen a novel with the Warring States Period as the protagonist! The last time I read a book, it was by Father Garp. The first part was very good, but the second part just opened up a harem. I hope the author won't forcefully write a love line just because he wants to have a woman. If he can't write a love line, he shouldn't write a female protagonist! The story without a heroine is really interesting, I really like the bond between best friends! All in all, if the author improves his writing skills and opens a new anime series without a female protagonist, I will continue to read it! !
I hope that the Warring States Period can balance the navy and be a true marshal, neither dove nor hawk, but only use them as tools
Very well written, keep up the good work＾0＾~
Isn't this book cool?
In the Warring States Period, sheep were raised and now ducks are raised [smile]