Comprehensive Martial Arts: the Great Qin Immortal Dynasty

The biggest highlight of this book is that he traveled to the Qin State in Zongwu's world and directly took the position of Qin Shihuang! And seize the throne by force! This is something that all Zongwu novels dare not write. But, this is innovation! Regardless of whether it is well written or not, at least the book has the author's own thoughts. However, since we are writing about the comprehensive novel worlds of Jin Yong, Gu Long, etc., We can't just borrow the names of these characters without participating or even having nothing to do with them, right? Isn't this "selling sheep's meat to dogs"? After all, this is the world of martial arts, so martial arts should be the most important and the most prominent, but there is almost no content in the whole text. So this book is a huge failure! In the end, even the world of martial arts and Zongwu was not written well or clearly. Suddenly, a few more time-travelers came, and they directly merged with other different worlds. Then the book was completely useless! The author should delete his account and reopen it. This book will definitely not score high [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

I like to give it three stars for the subject matter. The pace of the content is too fast. It should be created by a newcomer! The protagonist is not good, the early stage preparation is too backward, the system is not good, and the skills are not good. If the name is Xian Qin, it means it has something to do with cultivating immortals and becoming immortals. So, as the master of Xian Qin, should the protagonist be more powerful, otherwise how can he play better than Xian? Now that we know there are immortals, do we need to arrange for alchemists, weapon refiners, formation masters, Feng Shui masters, etc.? Do you have to keep up with the Immortal Qin Luck and the like? In short, the subject matter is very good, and the pace of the content is unusually fast. It does not reflect the intelligence of the protagonist or historical figures at all. There is no thrilling plot. The protagonist is just reckless, but still reckless.

Is there a system with time-travelers and reborn subordinates? How can the protagonist go smoothly in the early stage of the country, but he is always beaten later?

Damn, I have a headache reading this. Is this my first time writing a novel?

A little wordy, the word count is a little short

After destroying the Four Kingdoms, I don't know what to write anymore. It seems like I talk about home affairs every day.

Five stars. . . . .

Poisoned to death [laughing awkwardly] [laughing awkwardly]

I've read a few chapters and I don't want to read anymore. I'd like to give you a five-star to encourage you.

Written by a primary school student, eating for free

In this trashy novel, you don't even know who's talking, and you don't even write your name in front of it? Like this Ying Hao: ",,," Ying Zheng: ",,,,"

It's okay in the front, but not so good in the back. Also, if you go to martial arts, you won't accept any martial arts beauties. It's really...

The front is okay, but the back is a horse riding or something like a sudden change in painting style.

The protagonist in the previous section kills decisively. But when the protagonist meets Guo Jing, it becomes disgusting.

Did the author write a mess?

Chapter 8, what is it about? Even if it's free, I can't help it. Did you press the heads of the entire civil and military officials of the Qin Dynasty into a cesspool and soak them [angry] [angry]

The content is good, but the writing is a bit unreadable

Write something. The Turks died and came back to life.

The front is ok. I looked a little confused from behind

What the hell are you writing? You have changed several dynasties, and any small country that appears later has an army of tens of millions. You, the constant overlord, are nothing.

The first few dozen pages of this novel are okay, but the latter ones are rubbish.

Only two stars

The more I write, the more confusing it becomes.

Diaosi is pretentious

Rubbish,,,

Messy

It's so annoying!

Come and see everyone

I'm too lazy, I get beaten all the time, and I often ask for peace and timeout.

If you don't know how to write a novel, why don't you write it? It's okay. It's a mess. It's like Gao Wu Da Qin. It's written. It's written. What's this? Author, your brain has shrunk, right?