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I think it's well written. Why are there no comments?

This book should be considered a good book depending on its direction. It seems that there are still Liyue chapters, Li Yue chapters, investigations and so on, plus Teyvat's invitations from the abyss everywhere and daily life, it's not too much to spend another 150 chapters, right? Liyue Zhang pushes forward a little further, right? If we want to complete it further, it should take about 200 chapters. It may take at least 300 to 500 chapters to complete. If you want to get into this book, please be prepared for a protracted battle. If I were to use a very popular metaphor to describe this book, my evaluation would be: Tomato Scrambled Egg Soup Has certain characteristics. But in terms of points, I can give it a 4.2 At most. As for the story, the description is still relatively detailed. The characterization of the characters can be seen that the author has intentions, except for the small and insignificant poisonous point of time travel. (I always feel like there is something, and I understand that it must be because Tianli became the third Herrscher, causing the world to be invaded by the collapse, because this is a world bubble with the will of the world, so the will of the world pulled a big primitive species from somewhere to help him survive this disaster, and our protagonist has already shouldered an important mission in the dark, and will definitely join the Fools to become the executive in the 12th seat to overthrow Tianli, marry a wife, and reach the pinnacle of life [smile]) I just feel that the picture is a bit too big. What Wendy said, I always feel that the protagonist must be extraordinary. I blindly guessed that the protagonist is the second throne [laughter] (This article is related to the following. After viewing, please choose to enter the pit Disguise brotherhood Brotherly love goes sour metamorphosis refers to living things There is no invincibility in the normal stream. The protagonist does not have the Eye of God at the beginning. After obtaining it, he is five points weaker than the character we are familiar with. Visually, there is no qualitative leap within 200 chapters. The trio's daily escapes and defeats Shocked! Two men and two women living in the same room. Is this a distortion of human nature? Or did Prince Yan drink money without bringing tea? ''My relationship with my brothers'' ''My relationship with my brother'' Something's wrong with my brother Shocked! My brother is actually... (Spoilers involved [laughing]) family relations Emotional disputes [laughing evilly] Resistance to go home [laughing evilly] "About the fact that I traveled to a different world, became the original god of the Miscellaneous Fish Treasure Thieving Group, obtained the Eye of God, and discovered that my brother is unusual") It is recommended to eat at 2.7 Times speed, it will be a bit boring in the middle and late stages.

It's quite interesting and the writing is good.

Make a good relationship (Ma's rule requires at least five words)

Excellent fanfic, well written. The plot follows the interaction between the protagonist and supporting characters. The protagonist's character is delicately portrayed, and his personality is like a friend (male) around him. The plot characters are appropriately described, and the plot has ups and downs, making it very comfortable to read.

Generally speaking, I think this book is relatively successful. The protagonist's combat power never breaks down, the character's personality is well maintained, and the background of the character is carefully crafted, creating a chance acquaintance just like reality. The plot doesn't move quickly but it's by no means unintelligent, and it's not dull either. Maybe less environmental description. All in all, it's a very good book. Why hasn't anyone read it? I feel like now I always receive books like Tomato that use the worldview of a certain world to write my own original stories. I have read several books and all of them have either been discontinued or castrated. It feels like the author is completely driven by love now. I don't want to say anything, don't worry about what others think and just write your own story. I just want to say that I hope the author won't stop updating. I love the story of Orth and Cora falling in love with Hawk!

It's quite depressing, but I can only tell the truth. The book is not easy to become popular, but the plot is novel.

The author has not been polluted by the same Genshin Impact fanfics on the market. There is no drama about multiple female protagonists or a single female protagonist and then having an affair with other women. There is no invincible fighting power. Compared to Genshin Impact fanfics, I would rather say it is a light novel article written in the setting of Genshin Impact. It is unbelievable. This article is in Tomato, and it is much better than other high-rated Genshin Impact novels. It has not been very good since I left Mondstadt. The plot of Fontaine is a mess and the whole book is extremely fragmented. It is very annoying to read. The plot of the post-290 generation is somewhat outrageous, and even makes people speechless and speechless. At the end of this book, the three protagonists will still be part of the treasure stealing group. Have they quit the group? If you retreat Have you withdrawn? Can't retreat why Because I am a treasure thief group who wants to live peacefully You can still watch the Mondstadt plot, but the Fontaine plot has slipped away.

The story is pretty good, it's my favorite type, it's incredible. Alas, it seems that the author is not at this level and cannot grasp this book at all. The subsequent plot is getting more and more boring. I have written more than 400 chapters before leaving the treasure thief group. I am speechless. I should leave within 100 chapters. There are no highlights to attract me to continue watching.

Let me comment on this. The writing style of this novel is not very good, and I think the plot rhythm of the novel is very slow, so the reader's perception is not very good when reading it, and the later reading is a bit boring, so no one reads it, and then it is thrown into the bookshelf to eat dust. In the end, I gave five stars because of the author's unremitting updates for more than a year. I can't bear to give a low star. If nothing else, the author's efforts are worthy of my five stars.

Not bad, it is separated from the main plot, and the plot develops in another way, but there is no overall coordination of combat power, only high and low, and no detailed classification of levels. The high level of the original god is ridiculously high, and the ball thugs kill as many as they want, and the low level one even has to join forces with the ball thugs, and is exhausted after the fight. I like this plot line, please give it a try, author

Is there a single heroine? Can the protagonist participate in the plot and so on? I hope to have a harem. Even though you, the author of the original characters, also did a great job

It suits my taste, but I still feel that the protagonist should inherit the memory of the protagonist in the real world, not the protagonist in the real world who time travels into the protagonist.

The author, it's so short, sister-in-law, it must be very hard, right? The writing is very good, but very short. It should not be viewed as a fanfic of Genshin Impact. Think of him as wearing the skin of the original god, the original novel... It's pretty good, but it just borrows from the world view. The main plot has nothing to do with the protagonist. For now...

That's great. When I get rich during the Chinese New Year, I'll give it to you as soon as possible.

It's good to read, and the original plot is quite exciting, but the plot progress is a bit slow, and the characters' personalities don't conflict. It's a good book and it's done.

It's still pretty good-looking, with good ideas, and the author's writing skills are adequate. However, the setting of the male protagonist being unlucky is a bit uncomfortable in the mid-term. In the early stage, no one can defeat anyone, so it's okay. Later, the combat power barely picks up, which is okay. However, in the mid-term, I feel that the protagonist is not stable. Overall, it's okay.

It's on the stall, I hope it's popular

A very good book

Good looking, good luck to the author

I hope the author makes the protagonist stronger

It's good-looking, but... Tsk, it's really short. I can only make ends meet. Really, if you don't give up, this book will be a hit once the number of words increases.

The characters are realistically drawn and the story itself becomes interesting. Although there are still many problems, overall, this is the best Genshin Impact fanfic I have ever read. (๑> <๑)

It's super beautiful. I haven't encountered such wonderful character descriptions in a long time (｡>∀<｡)

Update it quickly😊, it's different from other fanfics and has its own characteristics

Is it a single heroine or multiple heroines?

Why is it only 6:00 or so?

I still like it very much [love]

There are not many good books left, so you must persevere!

I think it looks better\(//∇//)\