我捡到了被欺凌的她

It's so beautiful. The author's writing is good. Maybe it's progressing too fast. The outline (should there be one?) Is set towards the back. Otherwise, the writing may be more poetic. The sweet and greasy feeling is already there. The main thing is when to get rid of the annoying supporting characters. I understand that it is to promote some main plots, maybe after the confession, or after some main plot? Just less of it. The link of saving the beauty is easy to use, but if you use it too much, you will feel a little tired. Finally, I finally found the sour feeling again. Although the book I read before was a bit different from this subject, it was very touching! ! !

Overall, it's super sweet, and the second half of the book is very touching. However, the switching of different perspectives and some changes will make it hard to understand for a while. The characters are quite vivid, with flesh and blood. The plot design is a little uncomfortable at the end. It seems too abrupt and omits some key points. The overall impression is not bad. , The main theme is about love, expressing mutual care, consideration, taking care of each other's feelings, respecting each other, slowly cultivating feelings, and guarding a love for a lifetime. Love transforms into love, which transcends appearance and material things. In the current era when love is like fast food, it is extremely rare and valuable. In addition, the plots that attract people's imagination can be less... In short, when will the author arrange a rainy summer for me?

It's so sweet, it's been cured, it's great, please keep it up, "Santa Claus, it turns out to be bread-flavored."

The previous writing is very good. Although it is a cliché plot, it is unique through the switch between first person and third person. The creation of the male and female protagonists is very successful, and the two-way redemption is very heartwarming. But I felt that the sociophobic man and the two non-mainstream junior high school classmates were a failure. The characterization of the sociophobic man was too deliberate and unnatural. The appearance of the two junior high school classmates was also very unexpected. It's pretty good in other aspects. As a new author, it's already very good. In terms of story line, the author needs to improve, so give him five stars for encouragement.

When I first read it, I actually didn't feel very good, because the progress in the beginning was very fast, and the plot of taking it home directly didn't seem reasonable to me. At that time, I thought this book might not be able to bear it, but I tolerated it a little bit later, and after reading the back part, I found that the author has made progress in the whole book. The writing is very green, but the emotion is very good. Some of the psychological feelings made me feel depressed, and I felt the sincere love between the two protagonists. I give it a full score of 9.5. The shortcoming is the beginning, but I still give it five stars.

It's super nice and the characters' emotional descriptions are also very delicate. The only thing that made me uncomfortable was the quarrel. The quarrel between the heroine and the hero when they went home for the Chinese New Year was not very good. After all, it was the first time I went there (no malice). However, the writing is still very beautiful. The writing is very positive in the three views of men and women. Overall, it is very beautiful. By the way, can the author write more chapters? Two chapters a day is a lot! ! ! [Grievance] [grievance]

This book directly meets all my requirements, no quarrels, no breakups, no misunderstandings, no frustrations, no green tea, no procrastination, no obstacles, the journey is sweet to the end [Love][Love][Love][Love]

If I comment based on my preferences, this is a very good work, very sweet, I hope you can continue writing, (mainly because I don't like to comment, unless I like it very much, I like this work), so keep up the good work and look after you [Like]

It is very well written. This is undoubtedly one of the best novels I have read. The little match seller has countless tragedies. She meets Santa Claus who only belongs to her on that rainy night. It feels very healing. The only drawback is that there is no daily life between the two of them after marriage. It is a bit regretful. Santa Claus really tastes like bread.

I think it is very well written. I have heard so many novels and I think this one is my favorite. It is ordinary with a little surprise. The title is always eye-catching and makes me guess wrong. I also fantasize about living this kind of life... This kind of novel has an inexplicable sense of substitution. It writes about the identities of the rich lady and the young master. Most people only write about this kind of thing when they get home (which makes the heroine feel surprised 😲), but the author did not write it like this. It's just a bit short and not enough to read. I haven't finished it yet. I've only reached chapter 100. The author continues to work hard (why does this novel not have a multi-person dialogue function? It makes me uncomfortable at work). The author has released a new book. Tell me that I have decided to become your biggest fan.

This book is one of the best I've read this year. Although the plot is a bit cliché, I really like the content. I haven't read a daily light novel for a long time. Thank you, the author, for letting me experience cloud love. It's just... It's been a long time since the two of them confessed their love, kora [laughter]

Coming from another book, overall this one can only be regarded as barely passing as a redemption love story. Let's talk about the advantages first. The writing is good, and it breaks the traditional law that the bullying heroine must be a top student. But there are many shortcomings. The first is the life experience of the male protagonist. I always feel a little uncomfortable and even curious about it. Maybe I am being picky. The second is the content. The two-way redemption is not very obvious. I feel that most of them focus on the one-way redemption of the male protagonist to the female protagonist. I feel that the redemption of the female protagonist to the male protagonist is not obvious. Also, after the relationship was confirmed, I obviously felt that the plot was insufficient, and it ended in a hurry at the end. Therefore, this book can pass as a redemption love story, but it is only passing the mark.

The writing is okay, it feels a bit like a Japanese light novel, and the characters in it are a bit similar, but it's okay. As I read it, I always felt that there would be something wrong [face covering]. I always felt that the protagonist would die or something later, which made me worried for a long time.

It's okay in the early stage, but it may be a bit boring to read later. After all, it's a daily novel, but it doesn't feel so sweet at the end? Maybe it's my own feeling (personal opinion) overall it's good, the light novel has a strong flavor, four stars

There are many styles of novels, and this is the simplest style I have ever seen. Although details determine success or failure, the general content is also clearly stated. The perspective we see is determined by the author. Many romance novels will tell the story from high school to post-marriage life with full details, but this one can also vividly describe the story before college, which is very good. If this is the first book written, it is already very powerful. Although some of the details are not rigorous enough, the impact is not serious, come on.

The writing is very good and the style is a bit like Nikkei's. Keep up the good work.

I've finally finished reading it, intermittently. The author's writing is okay and quite sweet. The new extras are also very good. First of all, they are not a stupid couple, so it is impossible to be anti-flash, but it is still very sweet. Although the heroine is miserable, but the ending is good, then it couldn't be better.

The plot refers to the angel next door, the school beauty is always the same (Bai Yuyou), a Japanese light novel type, the content is also very sweet, the pace is fast, but it does not affect the author's love. The male protagonist runs away from home and meets the bullied female protagonist, and the two live together and fall in love for a long time. Moreover, this is the enhanced version of Bai Yuyou (single female protagonist), which gives me a replacement for Bai Yuyou's harem [get it] Sweet, sweet, sweet, say important things three times

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good. This book is quite concise but flashy. It feels a bit like a light novel. I love this first-person narrative. It is easy to get into. I feel that this book does not have that kind of cliché. I find it strange and novel. Overall, it is very interesting.

This book is the only redemption story I have read in Tomato. Although it has some minor flaws, it is overall very good and worth reading.

A sugar-filled novel with double redemption. The male protagonist redeems the female protagonist, giving her the meaning to live. The female protagonist redeems the male protagonist, allowing the male protagonist to find the meaning of life. The dual perspective changes are impeccable. Looking back on my youth, this book makes up for the regrets of my youth.

The routines are all the same, but the description is still acceptable. I hope to maintain the beauty of love. No knives! !

I like this book very much. The character of the heroine is well developed. It is different from other novels. I hope the writing style can be improved. I believe that the author's books will get better and better [Sending my heart]

The content is interesting, but the first person perspective is not very comfortable. I haven't seen it in first person before. (Doge) The content of the book made my eyes light up, and the sentence "So I am alive" made my heart tremble. To be honest, I have been confused for a long time. I don't know what the meaning of living is and what the meaning of making money is. But the author's values ​​really touched me, thank you. Come on✊

Except that it felt a bit awkward to talk about that period of my life at the beginning. . Everything else is very good and in line with my taste [][]

The sweetness is just right, the writing is good, except for the number of words, everything is okay

It's already five stars, don't let it down. Personally, I quite like this kind of redemption text, maybe it can heal my broken heart. Besides, there won't be any knives, right? No knives, just sweet ones [crying]

A good sweet article about tomatoes, worth recommending I don't know why the writing is very good but the score is not above 9.0 First person light novel is a newer form in Tomato The image of the male protagonist is very successful. Lu Ailin's portrayal of the male protagonist is more successful than most novels. Almost nothing is written about what should not be written, but the process of climbing out of the quagmire of the male protagonist is rarely written. This is a mistake. The image of the heroine is a bit thin. Maybe this is the reason for the low score. The identity and background are not fully explained. Looking forward to it, the next one will definitely be better than this one In summary, as a redemption sweet novel, it is very good, but as a light novel, it is not as vivid as the characters. At the same time, the writing style does not match my own ideas. The writing style needs to be refined, there is little foreshadowing, there are few twists and turns, but it is excellent, and there is less writing on the environment. At the same time, as a light novel, it should break away from the shackles of ordinary sweet stories. Other characters should also use some ink, and there should be a little splash of ink without using big strokes. It tastes a bit like sweetness for the sake of sweetness.

I like to watch it, it's good to watch, come more, my friend likes to watch it

Although it is a cliché plot, the writing is really good and interesting.