Original God's Dark Priest

I haven't watched it for a long time, but I don't like Lin Yi's setting and the fact that he wants to capture the heroine. He can obtain the elements of this person through strategy, which means that he can also easily obtain the elements of the heroine. Although the heroine does not have a close relationship with him now, I feel uncomfortable when I think of him having a relationship with Ke Qing and having to conquer the heroine. But aside from this, the author's writing style is very good, which makes people feel comfortable to read, and the interaction with the characters is also very loving! Awesome! ! !

It's good. Lin Yi's uncomfortable hole has been filled. Many fan writers have a misunderstanding. When you are in that world, you should stop treating that world as a game. The author handles the protagonist very smoothly, knows how to refuse, and the character becomes fuller. Well worth the wait. Come on.

Big. Can you arrange a separate male protagonist for the female protagonist? Just don't let her be with that Lin Yi. I think the heroine can choose someone who loves him and be dedicated to him. There is no need to compete with a group of girls for a man. Moreover, the character of the heroine in the front is very good. But after she meets the traveler later, she feels that the direction is a bit off. And can you prevent the heroine from liking that Lin Yi? I feel that you have always been such a good person, why choose a scumbag, and then Neptune? Wouldn't it be better to give the heroine a separate male lead? Why share a man with a bunch of women? Can I arrange a male lead separately from the female lead? Is that okay (personal statement)

I like it. I don't know if the main character's love line has been finalized. I'm looking forward to Lily. I just saw Lin Yi. It's really not good to have two time-travelers in one book at the same time. Especially for people who come because they want to see girls. The appearance of the new male protagonist will definitely dissuade many people, but the overall setting is great.

Requiring the heroine and the emperor to be together [laughs]

It's pretty cool. Even in the early stages, the other time traveler didn't do anything too extreme. The heroine just wanted that ability, and the exit of the other time traveler was also well written. It just inserts some clips of coming back in the future, just to foreshadow the story, and then it takes a long time to see the follow-up. To be honest, I personally can't accept it (some people like me will find it uncomfortable to watch). It doesn't mean that the foreshadowing is not good, it is well buried and has a beginning and end. I just finished reading Liyue's book. To be honest, it's very nice. I like it very much. I just used the word "Endgame". Can you add an element of "Endgame"? For example, you can't use angel form for clothes, so you can always use nun clothes. The devil should always be a dark little loli. There are two zodiac signs, which can be regarded as two forms (refer to the young master, Ms. Zhou changes her clothes when she changes her evil eye), so it is possible that the heroine changes into something similar to Gui Zhong when she is not fighting. The heroine is Gui Shu and not Gui Zhi. She definitely can't wear the same one. Although the heroine doesn't mind (I think the Hailantern Festival outfit is good [full]). Of course, this is a personal opinion and everyone has their own opinions.

I don't understand why I want to write about such a man Okay, okay, feel comfortable

How can I put it, if you still want to save this book, I suggest that the author should not go back and look at it, but just make a big change in the previous part. Of course, I know that this is difficult for me, and the book already has more than 600 chapters. It doesn't make much sense to follow up and change it. Even if it is changed, the book review may not be published. It's not up, but you think you should read the comment section, otherwise you won't change it later, but these dozens of chapters are so uncomfortable to read, which will cause many people to stop reading after seeing this. They skip reading and can't understand it at all. The first impression left on people is not good, and no matter how good the subsequent writing is, they may not come back to read it again. Of course, the author can also open another book. I think you wrote it very well. You may have accumulated a lot of experience in this book, so it would be better to open another one.

The writing is very good, but Lin Yi appears. . To be honest, let's put it here to avoid lightning. There is a male protagonist who has a harem. I've also read that book. How can I put it this way? After all, time travelers are not used to having a harem with a boy. This feeling is not very pure. . . I saw the heroine rushing in excitedly to see a man who felt like he was being fed shit. . But this is my personal opinion, so I give it five stars as an objective evaluation.

I have read Chapter 34, which is relatively small. Please forgive me for any mistakes. I think the author raised a question: What is the role of the character Lin Yi? I think this is a disease. Let me talk about the readers first. There must be a key point for readers to be interested in this book. I guess it is the time-travel heroine, who is beautiful, powerful, mysterious, and has a butterfly effect on the plot of Genshinori. But the appearance of Lin Yi made me feel that Safir's time travel is no longer special, and his strength cannot be reflected. The analysis and identification are very uncomfortable. The protagonist is looked at like a peeled egg, which is very detrimental to the reader's enjoyment. Secondly, from the characterization of Lin Yi, I feel that it would be okay to make him the protagonist of a book alone, but his appearance has overshadowed the protagonist's light, giving people the illusion that Safire is a supporting role, just a heroine who is difficult to conquer. This is not good, and Lin Yi also has profit-making plans for the protagonist, which makes people feel disgusting. Let's not mention this for now, let's just say that the purpose of the protagonist of this book is obviously the same as that of a typical female-oriented Genshin Impact fanfic. There is no cp, but Lin Yi suddenly appears with a harem, which is very disturbing. Also, the existence of Lin Yi has disrupted my imagination. My personal expectation for this book is the protagonist's influence on Teyvat. One butterfly is enough, but with the addition of Lin Yi, two butterflies make people feel uncomfortable. Finally, to put it bluntly, Lin Yi is just a piece of history in my eyes, but I think the characters, plot and setting created by the author are still very good. "The above only represents my personal opinion, please don't criticize, thank you." "All I can say is, come on, author, I will continue reading to see if the author has improved. I have now read Chapter 217. The author made changes in time. Lin Yi is offline and the speech and spirit skills are left to the protagonist. The offline plot is okay, but the full text will be better without Lin Yi. Come on, author.

This is the longest Genshin Impact fanfic I have read, and it is also the best one I feel I have read. Although Sunset Fruit is quite novel at first, I will feel bored and tired after reading it for a long time. Although I will feel a little tired after reading this for a long time, the plot is not repetitive. Moreover, the so-called poisonous point Lin Yi actually does not occupy much space in the main plot, and the plot of this novel refers to a lot of missions in Genshin Impact, as well as some deeper interpretations. I am used to reading novels without thinking, and I was a bit confused when I read them, but the plot is really exciting. Finally, I don't really like reviews when reading novels. Come on, author! Looking forward to continued updates!

It's very nice. Lin Yi, another time traveler, has a very beautiful way of leaving and is also very comfortable. Cheers, author [note]

Who is the male protagonist? Emperor?

The male protagonist, the Emperor, can also be

It's worth watching. Anyway, I'm really looking forward to the development. Anyway, I'm very attracted to the heroine. Hehe, the heroine was kissed directly, but there was nothing after that.

What happened to that Lin Yi? I like to listen to books while sleeping, so I don't read much of some plots. I only know that during my waking hours, this is a very good novel. Can anyone tell me about it? Who knows? My mother got up at four in the morning [laughing awkwardly], and I got up too. She was so sleepy that she couldn't sleep yet. At two in the morning, I was still awake. This chapter review was written at four in the morning [Petrochemical]

The plot is very good, the logic is reasonable, and the appearance and departure of other time-travelers are also very controlled. It is a very good book (don't quit thinking about the second time-traveler, look at it later, it is really interesting) But in the mid-term, there are some unreasonable settings. For example, the devil is immortal... But the flaws are not covered up.

It's very interesting, not bad👍 It was very interesting at first, but then I didn't want to watch it when the second time traveler held the heroine's hand. Then someone in the comment area said that I skipped to the end of chapter 90. As a result, I didn't watch many of the plot links and it was very embarrassing. If you want the male protagonist, hehe! How's it going?

It's well written (≧∇≦*) and it's wonderful. I like the character.

What did I say about why the rating is so low? In fact, as long as you read on, you will find that there is nothing too bad. The only thing is that the score is a bit low. I think the author will stop updating or something, which is a bit panicked, so the author works hard [sending heartfelt wishes]

I can still accept it if Lin Yi and the heroine Shuang Jie, after all, there are two time-travelers in Genshin Impact novels.

The second time traveler, Lin Yi, was completely toxic (?), But he sent it around chapter 90 (?), And the rest of it is still very interesting.

If possible, I prefer a single heroine, that is, without cp. If there is cp, it feels more like a bird in a cage, [thinking] [thinking], but overall it is still very good [note] [note] [love] [love], five stars for you, come on [like] [like]

It's something to look forward to, as long as it doesn't collapse later

Two girls, one girl or no cp. Is there a male protagonist?

It's really good-looking. It's one of the few Genshin Impact novels that amazes me. The plot is well handled, the writing is delicate, the characters are prominent, and the characters have distinct characteristics. It feels like reading a literary novel. The name Aurora Safire impressed me deeply. It ranks in the top ten among the more than 2,000 books I have read. It's so beautiful. How can it be so beautiful? I feel uncomfortable if I can't see it for a day. Love it.

Finally I found a book like this. The author must not stop updating it. I really like this book. Come on!

It's not easy to find a book you like. The author must not stop updating it.

This heroine hit my XP perfectly! ! [Sending Hearts]

Super beautiful, five-star praise