Shh! the Five-Year-Old Cute Kid from the Richest Man's Family Has a Crow's Mouth

I just watched part of it, and giving it four stars is an encouragement! The one star I don't give is for the author to make this book more perfect! The plot is good, the only thing I find bad is that I personally think the adopted daughter plot can be dispensed with! It would be better to just turn it into stolen, because the children are innocent. Just imagine that after raising them for several years, it is impossible to have no feelings, especially as a mother! In fact, it is all very painful, but the adopted daughter is also very sad. After all, she is sick, and she is innocent! So no matter which aspect you read, I feel uncomfortable sitting here. I see that you have only written more than fifty chapters. I think it would be better if you revise it! It won't take much time to revise the beginning. I think the first volume can be divided into three volumes to write about the heroine's loss, return, and group favor. The second volume can write about the heroine's ability display, some family warm and interesting things, and can also add some heroine's ability to recover and solve some things, and finally the heroine's true identity or previous life father. After the mother wakes up, the heroine settles down or takes care of her parents and family in the world and returns to her normal life. Occasionally she returns to the human world to see her parents and know she has a good death. I think this is more interesting and better-looking. After all, the listening dog at the beginning also reveals the heroine's information, which also shows that this book is a fantasy plus a group pet. Without these, I feel that there is not much meaning in writing this fantasy plot! The author can think about it, I think it will be more exciting that way

After reading the entire book, after careful consideration, I gave it four stars, with one star deducted for the heroine's mother. My only personal opinion: the heroine's mother refreshed my perspective on motherhood. Just my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.

In fact, this book is really good, isn't it?

Very good, come on, come on, come on!

Very beautiful, I like it😍

Looks good, keep up the good work

It's quite interesting, but when the bad guys will be offline~Offline~Offline, the important things will be said three times. The author, please don't think it's too long-winded (┯_┯)[cry][cry][cry]