"Here, this Naruto fanfic was written by the same author. It's so bad. Is Hei definitely not the protagonist? Why does he have so few roles and he's just a spectator?"
After reading the first twenty chapters of a novel, Xing Feng said angrily, "If I were to become this Black Zetsu, I would definitely do too many powerful Black Zetsus in the book."
Suddenly, a white light appeared in front of Xing Feng.
Reader comments
I'm looking forward to the sequel, and I also hope that the author can write Black Zetsu as a time traveler who has watched Naruto, so that the style of doing things will be more in line with the author's ideas, or write a sequel based on the ideas and character of the original Black Zetsu, so that the story will look more interesting and relatively more exciting. , Otherwise, the protagonist Hei Zetsu is full of flaws. Hei Zetsu has a gloomy personality. Hei Zetsu's character is different and always does things that do not conform to his own logic (it would be better if he was a time traveler). If it must be written like this, the character of Bai Zetsu's body can be added later, and Hei Zetsu will be possessed by it. In this case, these characteristics can be added to Bai Zetsu, and Black Zetsu's shortcomings will not be so many. In addition, these few chapters are watery plots. I hope that the sequels can be written more with Black Zetsu as the main character. People who don't know it think that Black Zetsu is just a narrator or a supporting role (which is basically nonsense, There are too few things to do, and it doesn't look like a protagonist as mentioned in the previous article). Hei Ze is the protagonist. I hope the author will write the story with Hei Ze as the main line, and deduce the vitality of the article to make the article "live". Although it lacks some detailed descriptions, overall it is simple and smooth.
I'm looking forward to the sequel, and I also hope that the author can write Black Zetsu as a time traveler who has watched Naruto, so that the style of doing things will be more in line with the author's ideas, or write a sequel based on the ideas and character of the original Black Zetsu, so that the story will look more interesting and relatively more exciting. , Otherwise, the protagonist Hei Zetsu is full of flaws. Hei Zetsu has a gloomy personality. Hei Zetsu's character is different and always does things that do not conform to his own logic (it would be better if he was a time traveler). If it must be written like this, the character of Bai Zetsu's body can be added later, and Hei Zetsu will be possessed by it. In this case, these characteristics can be added to Bai Zetsu, and Black Zetsu's shortcomings will not be so many. In addition, these few chapters are watery plots. I hope that the sequels can be written more with Black Zetsu as the main character. People who don't know it think that Black Zetsu is just a narrator or a supporting role (which is basically nonsense, There are too few things to do, and it doesn't look like a protagonist as mentioned in the previous article). Hei Ze is the protagonist. I hope the author will write the story with Hei Ze as the main line, and deduce the vitality of the article to make the article "live". Although it lacks some detailed descriptions, overall it is simple and smooth.