With My Harp, I Point to the Top of the Fairyland from Afar

Don't feel too fulfilled watching her grow step by step. It feels like watching Female Goose. The female protagonist also has a great personality. She has clear grievances and grievances. If there is kindness, she will help me within the scope of her ability. If there is resentment, she will not hesitate to eradicate it. And Female Goose has no cp! Our female goose is uniquely beautiful! For that matter, who could not love it? Not to mention the author's writing style is also very good! Some are fighting side by side, some are alone, exploring their secrets step by step, with a clear goal - to return to the upper world, and some are working hard for it. To be honest, reading this book only gives me a glimpse of what makes a worthwhile journey among immortal cultivators. Finally, I have a heartfelt invitation, big brother, I'm hungry, I want to see it [sending my heart]

The title of the book is very good, and I was attracted by it at first sight, but the heroine... Can still tell that the author really wants to pave the way for the subsequent plot, but I feel that the heroine has no real power, and it is useless to write about the golden elixir. In the end, she uses her spiritual consciousness to attack people, in order to highlight the fairy bones. The role of the heroine is written as if she is useless. She was a person in the upper world before being reborn, and she did not take advantage of this advantage. It is really weak. It is thanks to the help of others. The plot is also repetitive. How is it reflected: the heroine helps the original protagonist to revenge, which is always repeated. Since the original owner didn't ask them much, if they die on their own, don't blame me for being rude. What I said is a bit verbose, but the slightly better thing is that the solution speed is very fast. This point is not verbose. You will die if you directly attack with spiritual consciousness... Also, I want to point out that a skill is very awesome, so I wrote: This kind of Shuchi is very rare even in the upper world... (No, right? , Someone from a certain sect in the lower realm can use it, the upper realm is not so weak, right) The heroine was very poor in the early stage, but when she became a little more developed in the later stage, she spent more than 10,000 spirit stones to buy a piece of clothing (an auction item) that can withstand a single skill. Isn't this equivalent to a one-time use? These personal feelings are really true anyway, and there is no need to describe them in such an exaggerated way... Advantages... The answer to the question about the spiritual weapon is okay, and there is also a place where the help of the fairy is written. Ah, the plot is still connected. You can check it out. The above is just my personal opinion. It is worth reading. Come on, author. Although I haven't seen the back part yet, it may be what the previous person said: suppress first and then promote. Looking forward to the follow-up I just checked it out again. The growth-type heroine, well, since it is growth, it must show how it grows. The heroine works hard on her own, and the advantages given by others must also be used. Make use of the golden elixir you have in the early stage. Don't just focus on fairy bones and spiritual consciousness, and don't use overly exaggerated techniques. Come on, author! Don't give up, just practice writing while writing [love] and keep going! ! !

It's super beautiful (♥∀♥). The author's various settings really touched my heart. The heroine's character is also so cute. I love it.

The structure still needs to be polished. It takes hundreds of chapters to build the foundation. It won't be appropriate to reach immortality without having more than 1,800 chapters. I can't stand the forced stuffing at the back.

It's okay. I can feel that the world view of this article is quite grand. All I can say is that I can keep watching! Not too amazing. Looking forward to the author's later plot.

I read it on and off for half a month before finishing it. The writing is very, very good, and I like the plot very much, but the ending is a bit hasty. More than 400 chapters are not enough to read, and there are still many holes left unfilled. Anyway, goodbye Sangzi [crying]

It's beautiful, especially in the first world in the early stage. The protagonist and her friends all have their own characteristics and different talents, but they are all working hard to upgrade [currently in development] [currently in development] Needless to say, the protagonist is a hard-working baby who has clear goals and is never confused, and has a good personality; and from the little friends we met at the beginning, to the subsequent apprenticeship, contracted cats, etc., The female characters who appeared in a series of appearances are all very loving, and they all give me a kiss [blowing kiss] Unfortunately, the progress bar pulled up too fast later. I feel that either the author didn't write the outline, or the outline collapsed. Many of the friends I met earlier have no follow-up articles. In addition, it seems that the author had difficulty continuing the plot after cutting off updates for some reason. It ended without filling in all the pitfalls [face covering]. However, as the article has always emphasized, it is actually difficult to have a companion to accompany you on the road to immortality...

The plots are intertwined and interesting.

I have to say that this book is the most compact book I have ever read. The plot progresses very quickly, but I really want to keep watching. Hope everyone comes to see it!

It's really interesting. Come on, author＾0＾~

This is the best of all the female immortality videos I have read.

It's super pretty, and the heroine has a good personality. I won't offend anyone unless they offend me. I want to know where that half-demon is_(:::з∠)_

Novel subject matter and detailed description

This book is not bad, the subject matter is novel, please give it a try, the author

The author can fine-tune the article

Just read it to the end. The author's writing is really beautiful and imaginative. I hope more people can read it (that is, I love strong women without cp). The author will give it a boost and update itヾ(@^▽^@)ノ

It's okay, the characters are distinct. The author's content is not bad, but he is a little frustrated, and he spent most of his wealth to find a teammate. It is best to write more about their contributions, otherwise readers will feel that the heroine is taken advantage of.

Fu Xiuyang almost suppressed his extreme hatred and anger, and said harshly to Sangzi, "Without Nian Jiaojiao, how can you fight against the four of us alone? Sangzi, your good days are over." Faced with Fu Xiuyang's ridicule, Sangzi smiled lightly, it was very simple. I'm a god, isn't it? After saying that, her dress automatically moved without wind, the spirit shield opened, and the four people's attacks were unable to break through. Finally, her breath was no longer concealed, and it was revealed. The eleventh stage of Qi training! ! Bai Jingqiu, Jin Ningyan and others almost stared out their eyes. How could such an aura be possible? Why did her cultivation suddenly reach the eleventh stage of Qi refining! Bai Jingqiu shouted in shock, no one who saw this scene would be able to believe it! Jin Ningyan stared at Sang Zi with wide eyes. ——Chapter 70 One against four

The heroine's thinking is so clear, and Nian Jiaojiao is so lively and cute, she is really good-looking. The heroine is also very modest, neither arrogant nor impetuous, and doesn't show too much trouble. She is really good-looking! ! ! ! The description of the heroine's appearance is also very specific and will not make people feel speechless. In short, three words: great! ! !

Can the heroine's eyes recover?

It's okay, but some of the content is a bit confusing

One of the rare books I love to read is the second complete novel about cultivating immortality that I have read. It's so good (○｀ε´○)! !

Very nice! The protagonist has a well-developed character, the plot is interlocking, the plot is reasonable, and the characters are well created.

It's quite interesting, but some characters don't have endings. They're all fictional characters. Even if the main text doesn't have an ending, there should be an extra chapter. It can be told in one sentence, but there must be a result. ...(｡•ˇ‸ˇ•｡) ... Overall it's good^o^

The heroine is very strong, and she can eliminate enemies by all means, which is really fun! It's much better than other mother-in-laws. The heroine pursues immortality all her life, and her unrestricted lovemaking really irritates me. It looks good even without CP!

Perfect character creation

There are good things and bad things. It doesn't suit my taste, so I'll give it 4 stars, 886.

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

It's beautiful. It's the first time I've seen this type of novel. But the author is too slow to update.

I haven't seen such a non-CP leisure book for a long time. Maybe it's because I play the piano and have always wanted to find a piano repair book. The heroine is so decisive and really has no cp