The Phantom Beast Species Is Replaced by the Shock Fruit, Which Shocks the School Beauty!

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It looks good. Why did I think the book looked like my brother at first glance?

Come, the author, read with me, I solemnly swear: starting from today Beginning and never changing. I will not watch dramas, travel, or give birth disease. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline and cherish time Like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, hard work Brilliant, taking pleasure in coding, steel refined a hundred times, worthy of readers, no doubt Ashamed of youth and worthy of the future. As an author, I Strictly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. The code word is me I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently I am the keyboard in the dark, the guard on the Great Wall of Internet, I myself I am willing to dedicate my life to coding every day and every night!

It feels very good. As long as the fighting strength in the back is not too low and you don't recruit girls without thinking, you will be quite awesome [laughing] [laughing] Hurry up, author, it's so slow. Can you hurry up? I can't be satisfied just like this [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

The author Shui Wen is very good [laughing evilly] You can explain something in one sentence, but you have to use several sentences with different words but the same meaning to say a few more [Thinking] If I hadn't read carefully, I probably wouldn't have noticed [Grief]

Write well, write well, write well, write well, write well, write well, write well, write well, write well, write well, write well, write well, write well, write well, write well, the benefits are indispensable to you.

(The kid is just starting out, and I don't have the ability of a big bookworm. I know very little about some aspects. I hope you can give me some advice, and I will spray it lightly [laughing and crying]): The subject matter is good, and from the perspective of the "urban pirate" pattern, it stands out from other "pirate fan fiction"; the writing style is reasonable, and the plot is relatively delicate, but there are some foreshadowings... I can't say it is too old-fashioned, it just seems obvious. It seems that it is not outstanding for some people (on the other hand, it may be to highlight the protagonist's mentality from childishness to maturity); but some plots are too cumbersome (of course, if the author really wants to use "Luo Yiyi" as the heroine, pretend I didn't say it. But if so, the plot of the two people alone is very successful, not inferior to ordinary love stories, and the characters are well portrayed). In short, this article is very good, I hope the author will read it. I'm really looking forward to the next performance, come on! (Disclaimer, I didn't take any money, from my personal point of view, it is really good)

My bestie! Malignant tumors, acute myocardial infarction, sequelae of stroke, end-stage renal disease, chronic renal failure, uremia, multiple limb loss, malignant brain tumors, decompensated chronic liver failure, sequelae of encephalitis, sequelae of meningitis, deep coma, bilateral deafness, paralysis, severe Alzheimer's disease, severe brain injury, severe Parkinson's disease, severe third-degree burns, severe primary pulmonary hypertension, severe motor neuron disease, loss of speech ability, severe aplastic anemia! Read a few more chapters before letting her go!

A very good novel but a little lacking

When are you ready to reveal the shock fruit?

Dear author, I have no other requirements or opinions about this book. The only dissatisfaction I feel is whether you can update it faster. Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this.

It's very nice. You can take a look. I'll go to the hospital to check if I'm poisoned first. This is not a brainless text, it's a headless text. If you want to read it, you can cut off the head and read it again.

Don't stop updating, how long has it been? Hurry up and type. [Eat melon]

I don't know why the rating is so low. Is it because the combat power has increased too fast? I have almost finished following the plot of the new update. It is still good so far. There is nothing that is particularly contrary to the world of One Piece. I can still give it an 8 points. After all, the pace is really too fast. However, because the score is too low, giving it a five-star rating will increase the score. Another point is that the plot has little ups and downs. After that, the system tasks are too unchallenging, and it feels like you can get the rewards casually.

It's a very good book, I hope I can keep it

The plot is okay, and there are some exciting moments, but the transition of the plot is like a line, a bit depressing and slow. It does not burst the store continuously, which makes you comfortable to watch. It makes people want to watch it but also feels a little bored. I hope the author can add more information when writing, and handle the daily and exciting plots well.

The concept of physique is still very strong in One Piece. For example, Big Mom has a great physique.

It's pretty good, in line with my taste, and the update is also good There is only one requirement for giving five stars: don't let it suck.

The imagination is good, the content is substantial, the plot is ups and downs but not too coherent and reasonable, the characters are average, overall it is quite good, at least much better than most novels

The protagonist should have some feelings for the heroine

Invincible for three months, but updates are too slow. This may be the reason for the low rating.

Good, good, just too little to read. I like this book very much. I hope the author will work harder and faster.

I finally saw such a good-looking one, and the author updated it [angry][angry][angry]

Really good-looking! ! I haven't seen any poisonous points so far, the heroine is well portrayed, and I like the setting very much.

It's well written and I like to read it. I hope it can be written faster. It's not enough to read.

It's beautiful. Everyone has different opinions. Don't worry about the comments. You'll know after watching it.

Overall it's pretty good. Although x has a lot of nonsense, it's still acceptable. Also, this is an invincible article. Basically, you are invincible from the beginning, and it keeps getting stronger. I'm not used to this kind of invincible writing. There's basically no challenge in invincibility. It would be better if I could level up slowly.

It's beautiful [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart], I love it, the author will update it soon! ! !

Hey hey hey, it's good to store your brain, otherwise I will be poisoned

It's pretty good. It would be even better if I added a sentence about beating the young master of the Tang family to a mentally retarded person.