The Bright Moon Sets in the West, Shining on My Lonely Boat

The plot is very compact, let me talk about the overall impression: it starts to get better from about chapter 13, and it is obvious that there is a more fascinating key node in the 20th chapter. Later, the author writes more and more smoothly, and the narrative and story progression become very smooth. Moreover, the author is really not good at writing. There is a lot of information in the suspense part, and the plot moves very quickly, but it feels a little rushed in the last part. The content related to medical skills is also written very well and vividly. At first glance, it seems that I have taken the effort to take it seriously, rather than making it up to save trouble and mislead readers. If there are areas that need improvement (from a reader's perspective, after all, I am a novice and am not very good at it), I think it is in the first 10 chapters. The foreshadowing and descriptions are a bit heavy, and it is easy to lose most readers here who like a fast pace and get to the main plot in seconds. After reading the author's book, I feel somewhat the same way. We are the same kind of authors who are not good at writing cool articles. In the world of routine cool articles, it is difficult to find a place. That is to say, we insist on writing our own inner stories in our own style. In addition, from a pure reader's perspective, Nan Xiang is not the male protagonist, which is a very reasonable arrangement. In my personal opinion, he and Yuexi are not suitable for each other. Big cheers for the author~

Give yourself some encouragement and work harder to code.

After reading Chapter 15, I couldn't help but come here to comment. The author seems to be a good kid who doesn't understand Shui characters yet. The plot is moving so fast. It's pure good stuff.

I watched more than half of it in one go, telling each story. The story is quite imaginative, the case is also exciting, and the plot does not drag on. I personally like to read novels about ancient crime-solving and medical techniques, which are especially to my liking. I didn't expect the first twist at all, and the second one I guessed the murderer based on my feelings, but when I saw the ending, I realized that there were a lot of details buried earlier. Now that I'm seeing the beginning of the third one, I can't wait to guess along with the plot. I hope the author can keep his mind open and update as soon as possible.

Well written, the writing is smooth and the layout is thorough. After reading your book, I understand what the problem is with my book. Tomato is not suitable for this type of article. The current ones are all superficial time travel, systems, and fandom... However, it is still comfortable to insist on writing according to your own style. Following the crowd is a waste of time and cannot be called a book. Come on!

I'm not surprised that my book is sinking! Why did this book with smooth writing and substantial content sink? It's much better than some hot-selling stories! ?

I'm currently reading the third story, and I didn't go to bed until I finished it. That story is really good. I've finished it, and I'm grateful to the author for writing it to the ending without any sloppiness. It's a very solid and compact book. Maybe because there is no popularity or anything, the traffic of Tomato is not very high. But it has already outperformed many books on Tomato, and there are many rotten books on Tomato. If articles like yours don't get traffic, it can only be said that Tomatoes will only get worse and worse.

The author's writing style is so fluent and the content is good. It's inappropriate not to give traffic to such a good book.

Great! Come on, author, don't forget your original intention of writing!

The plot is compact and fast.

The male lead is the best. Three of the four stars belong to the male lead [laughs] [laughs] I really like his behavior and personality. It would have been better if the female lead could be more decisive in dealing with the second male lead. The female lead is very smart!

A very nice novel

It's very good-looking, the content is compact and not laggy, the characters are well-drawn, and the male and female protagonists are very well designed. All in all, the author is great [Blow kiss]