Swinging the Sword One Sword at a Time, Cutting Across the Starry Sky, What the Hell?

Invincible, the writing is good, the characters are okay, but the updates are slow

The overall story is okay, and the entire story is painted in 1080k high-definition by the author. The descriptions are very clear and the painting skills are superb. Thank you, ordinary and great, my soul seems to have been divinely washed, and devout believers sing for you.

It's okay, but it can't be compared with God of Death. But it is much better than other gods-slayers. Its combat power is not broken and the characters are okay. The plot is tight and sloppy. (There are two or three similarities with Zhan Shen, and I like these similarities better)

Kuoyi currently has a single female protagonist. Just give her a five-star rating. The author has to work hard. I have tried the poison and it can be flushed, but it is not enough. The author quickly writes a small suggestion here. It would be better if the protagonist has a system template so that we can know the specific strength of the protagonist.

Nice! ! ! I've seen another God-Slayer before, and all I can say is... Speechless! Isn't it cool to be "not the one in the mental hospital"? No! This really ignited me! Must be five stars! Cabbage, if you don't add more, I will draw a circle and curse you for being 10cm short [smile][smile][smile][smile]

It's beautiful, it's very beautiful [Admiration], cheers for the author [Like] [Like], but it's a little short and not enough [Grief]

It's beautiful, so beautiful. The illustrations drawn by the author in the book are extremely explosive in the entire novel world. Storyline? Don't worry about details like that, just look at the pictures and that's it [laughter]

I didn't expect this. The God-Slaying novel is very good. There are no messy knives. The whole text is humorous. The plot is really well written. I read other comments and some of them are slow in plot. The reason is that the author is slow to update and it's short. Come on, it's only one chapter short.

Great writing! Moreover, the heroine's character is very lovable and not annoying, which is a plus, plus a plus, plus

The literary direction is still very clear, the protagonist is funny and there is no long development process, it is very enjoyable to watch, some places are also very hot, the pace is fast, the writing is not bad, there are no big pitfalls, it is a very good novel

Dedicate yourself to protecting the lights of thousands of families and sacrifice to protect what you want in your heart. This book is really good. I like your efforts. Keep writing it. Don't worry about the nonsense of putting things aside. Since I have written a book, let's ignore them and come up with your own ideas. Come on! Also, I really like the setting of the heroine Ling'er. Why don't you stay here? I want to see them together. They want to protect Wanjia Denghuang and they have feelings, so adding a heroine won't affect it. It's still very good-looking. I just hope you don't give too many blows. Also, it would be better if the characters are more fleshed out. Come on! [Sending Hearts]

Chapter 390 Message It looks good. Let's analyze it in a few points. 1. The story line of the full text is smooth: with the protagonist's story as the core, multiple lines are developed in series. The structure of the full text is roughly divided into before the Eternal Night Era (a blockbuster, purely refreshing article), the middle of the Eternal Night Era (tragic), and the abyss after the Eternal Night Era (only seen this so far). The storyline unfolds in two lines in the abyss after the Eternal Night Era, and the story lines are very clearly connected. Second, the characterization is wonderful: most of the characters' personalities are perfectly three-dimensional, their growth lines are complete, and the sacrifices of many people have become the highlight of the story. Third, the clues of the article are clear: the swordsmanship performed by an ordinary wooden sword runs through the whole article, from the early Xiaoyao swordsmanship (the youth's freedom) to the swordsmanship of the years (has experienced the baptism of the human world) to the final Shura (carving out his own way) (I only saw this, sorry), it is very touching. That's it for the class representative's summary, please like [send your heart] @

The writing is good and I enjoyed reading it, but there is too little content to read. The author has worked hard to update it [Like] [Like] [Like]

Love it so much! The protagonist is invincible! ! ! The rules of logic are better! The characteristics of the character are better described! Really love it! ! ! Overall very good! ! ! Just relatively few! Renew! ! ! Renew! ! ! Come on, author! 😘😍

Although the protagonist's surname is Lin, which feels very traditional, the content is relatively novel and looks interesting. The characters' IQs are quite normal, regardless of their high IQs. The most important thing is: it comes with illustrations written by the author! ! ! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Who would have thought that this is a new author, but the number of words is too small. It would be better to update it quickly. I look forward to the plot advancing to 15 days later. The protagonist is well portrayed. Other God-Slayer types believe in their teammates and fight with them. In this book, the protagonist wants to stand in front of everyone and protect everyone. He is like an ascetic. If he suffers more, others will suffer less. If he can bear it, he will bear it, and if he cannot bear it, he will risk his life. I've basically never seen a protagonist with this kind of personality, and it's getting hot. In fact, I can still give it five stars, but I feel that the author is a bit overestimating his ability. He wrote a third line. He didn't want to just write about the protagonist, but also wanted to write about the knives of the supporting characters. But if you don't have enough writing, that's nonsense. If you write a third line for your plot, it will be useless for you. Gao Yuan's emotional scene is also very weak, and the writing is not enough. You have to write the blood of the protagonist while writing the knives. You still can't control it for the time being. My suggestion is to just pass it over to the other two lines. It would be better to leave this setting in the later stage. After all, there is a control group of the protagonist in the early stage, so everything you write will look like a joke.

Uh... (ಡωಡ)Hiahiahiayosiyoxi, the author's art level is really good [laughing]

This book is well described, well written, novel in subject matter, compact in plot, exciting in plot, and rich in characterization. It is also rare in Tomato, and one of the best among the books I have read. Support the author greatly. Cabbage's words make me linger, but don't draw them next time! •᷄ࡇ•᷅

The description is vivid and detailed, but a bit slow. Read the first fifty or sixty chapters first, otherwise you will not be able to understand the rest. Otherwise, how can you say that the description is detailed? This author is also good. Even after three updates in the middle of the night, he is still typing. Don't ask, I just saw it when I stayed up late. By the way, it's very sweet.

The characters are perfectly created. The illustrations are also very nice. But the author actually enjoys watching "The End of Ten Days" as much as I do. Hahahaha, it's very interesting. Highly recommended.

After reading it for a while, it's almost 100 pictures. The plot is okay, but the writing is not proficient enough, and the description of the battle scenes is not high, but it is already very good. By the way, the author's knife is not sharp enough, and it is not sharp enough. For example, the death of Yang Qing, the author You can add sweet scenes between him and the captain in daily life, to show the feeling that Yang Qing takes the initiative, but the captain does not accept it due to various reasons. When he finally dies, he gets a sharp knife. In this way, the knife may be sharpened a little more [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

It feels a bit indescribably vague (character characteristics, main plot, emotions), but other aspects are still good and you can watch it. The following person: I don't like to use emoticon pictures and long paragraphs of text after each chapter. After all, I am here to read a novel. The above is completed, I hope the author will work hard ୧꒰•̀ᴗ•́꒱୨

The plot is good and very interesting, but the writing can't describe the detailed character of the character. It's still worse than Zhanshen. Forget it, my requirements are too high. All in all, it's very good. Please update it quickly! ! !

It's so cool that it makes my skin crawl. Generally speaking, it is funny when it should be funny, it is sensational, the male protagonist is single-minded, and the value concepts it conveys are also good. There is no luck, there is no death or death, just watch it and it is over. It contains high-definition pictures. I support it.

The content is very detailed, and the author is a bad reader. The characters have distinct personalities, making people feel immersed in them, and triggering emotions. There are also hand-painted paintings by the author. There are a lot of love scenes in Ting Ding Ding Baozi, right? The part about the system and the part about Uncle Wang are the relationship period where he died. How come there is still a love factor?

After Killing God, this is a very good novel. There is also pathos, but the style is not as much as that of Zhan Shen, and it is more of a passionate and refreshing style. The author's writing style is very good, and overall it is worth reading. This is my review after reading the first volume. After reading the second volume, I will publish another one. It won't necessarily be five stars by then. Anyway, the author's writing style is really good.

Unique style, the protagonist is invincible and awesome but I know the author wants to convey to us the spirit of sacrificing his life for the country, but the plot needs to be strengthened. In fact, when watching it, it actually felt really awkward. All in all, this is an invincible and refreshing book that doesn't require any thought. It's not bad.

Let me comment first after seeing Chapter 127. The illustrations that the author has been working on are really interesting and very fresh. After all, I haven't seen other authors working on illustrations [shy][blowing kisses] that made me want to keep reading. There is a female protagonist. As a person who likes to read novels with male protagonists (big female protagonists), I can almost accept no CP and focus on my career [I understand]. There are not many emotional lines between the male and female protagonists in this novel at the moment. When I first read the comments, I wanted to quit because there was a female protagonist, but the introduction was very attractive to me. Other comments It also attracted me, how can I put it, I felt very comfortable watching it, and I felt that I was less averse to stories with female protagonists (male protagonists). I also liked the female protagonist, sober, and the interaction with the male protagonist was also fun, just like rejoicing with enemies [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

What can I say about this book? It's very similar to Zhan Shen but different. I have a knife, but when I saw the author's illustrations, I wanted to laugh. Everyone's definition of a good or bad book is different. I think this is a good book and an interesting author [laughing]

It's very beautiful, and the writing is also good. I like the title of Sword Holder very much, but I am also touched by the people who silently work to protect the world. Uncle Wang died, and the system left. His black hair turned white, and no one knew how much pain he felt in his heart. It would be really sad if the system didn't come back in the end, but it's a pity that Uncle Wang will never come back [crying] [crying] [crying] Holding the sword of the world and protecting the lights of thousands of families, the boy who wanted to save the world and pretend to be cool grew up into a man who wanted to silently protect this country. The cost of growing up is really high [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] It's too little and it's not enough to watch. It ended suddenly after watching it. Although the ending is he, the subsequent plot is not very passionate, because the protagonist only wants to protect the people he loves and is no longer the pushy person he used to be. But this ending is inexplicably good.