Turn Left at the Next Intersection and Pick up a Slave Girl

It's a very good book. If it can continue to maintain this level, it may become one of the top books on Tomato. Although some plots are quite repetitive, just to let the heroine know that she is a free person, it is still ok. At least the writing is not so boring. I already understand the basic story line, which is to eat together sweetly, have fun, and cultivate relationships. As for whether it will conflict with the country in the future, I don't know for the time being.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a good book. It's different from Tomato's other cookie-cutter books. It's also very immersive. It's really great. I regret it a little. I found that you discovered it too early and it's not enough.

The daily writing is really good. The heroine is a bit silly and cute, and I love it so much. [Learned]

Hey, it's beautiful and very attractive. There are more than 30 pictures of daily life. Why can I only listen to books offline? ⊙▽⊙ (No knife, right? There won't be any knife in the future, right, author @strategist don't go up) Let's try it out

This is the first time I read such a fresh and refined yet philosophical book, and I like it very much. It is no exaggeration to say that I have been a bookworm for almost ten years, and I have never seen anything that can compare with this book. The author writes casually, and the readers read casually. There aren't too many intrigues and complicated plots, it's just the most humanistic daily life, but it's indescribably cordial. In fact, many of the questions are as unclear to us as Chen Xiao. Thank you Yunyuan for bringing me the answers, which made my somewhat solidified thinking active again. I really want a friend like Yunyuan, even if it's not a boyfriend or girlfriend. I hope the author can write more extras, it's really not enough [face covering]

The writing is very good, but there are two problems. I think the emotional line of this book is a bit too fast. It should highlight a two-way redemption. The relationship between the male and female protagonists develops very quickly. For this kind of two-way redemption theme, maybe the author's focus in writing this book is not two-way redemption, which is understandable. Also, since the author buried Yun Yuan to use magic to quickly become a "normal person", I feel that the author has let himself go. The writing is messy and disorganized. Compared with the previous period, the look and feel is really hard to describe. I don't know if the author is laying some foreshadowing. Updates so far You can still read it, but to be honest, if the author keeps letting himself go instead of laying out any foreshadowing, the viewing experience will get worse and worse. In short, it can be read, and after Amusement Park, you don't need to use your brain to read it. Putting aside these problems, this book is actually not bad.

Not much nonsense, the subject matter is quite novel, the plot is excellent, and the thinking is in-depth. I can only say that there are some problems in the plot that ordinary people or you can't think of if you don't think carefully. Five stars, that's it. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's very good. Let's not talk about the writing style. The professional knowledge is well written. The male protagonist is also very suitable for a suddenly rich person. The most impressive thing is the female protagonist's sentence, "Poor people need to think so much because they are afraid that they will not like it after buying it and regret it. Chen Xiao does not need it, because Chen Xiao will not regret it. If you don't like it, just buy another one."

Wow, it's really invincible. It's hard to believe who the author is. He describes so thoroughly from multiple angles, the shaping of the characters' emotions, the protagonist's perception, the protagonist's transformation, and the profound description of social life. It really stands out among all the brainless articles in recent times. The changes in emotions are so delicate.

Oh yo sis. This book. Very good. Very good. Very good. Except for some details. Everything else is still fine. Overall. Very good

A good-looking, very warm and sweet light daily novel. The male protagonist redeems the female protagonist from a machine that can only execute orders into a real person, and the female protagonist brings great wealth to the male protagonist. The full text is without a knife, the raised Yunyuan is too arrogant and skillful [Love]

It's so beautiful, especially the development of the heroine. It made my aunt laugh. My Yunyuan! Ah…! Great, I think this book will become popular. Insert an eye first. As a bookworm for ten years. All I can say is that this character setting is great. It's not that your literary literacy is particularly high. Rather, it just happened that the heroine got what I wanted. That's great, of course, it would be even cooler if the author updated it three times a day! ! !

It seems like this is my first time writing a book review. The first part is really good and very immersive. If I had kept the rhythm of the previous part, this book would definitely be a masterpiece. However, the writing after Dual Personality was too fragmented. I felt very sad while reading it. I recommend reading the first part. I never want to think about this novel again. The first part is really good! Well

I think this book is at least as popular as my wife who came from 5,000 years ago. However, the heroine's transformation is indeed too fast, and the pace of the whole book is also fast, so it feels like it ends too early. I hope to write some extras later. (Also, I've finished several of the books I've been chasing and I'm so angry)

It's good to watch, but it's developing a bit fast. You don't need to be in such a hurry, but there really isn't much to write about, because there must be a lot of the same plots. People who like to read this type of book are basically tired of it. I've read forty chapters. If I haven't read many books recently, I will definitely support the author. I'll see you again if the author is a single female protagonist in the book circle👋🏻

The first impression is good, it's more everyday, I hope I don't have a knife.

I rarely give five-star reviews, but this one is really good, no swordsmanship, and a sweet little novel. 90% Of it is daily life, and 10% is about magic and otherworldly content. There are no inexplicable enemies, and there are no third parties and various weird things. It is a breath of fresh air in the world of Tomato novels. It is very comfortable and good to read. Big boost to the author!

Overall it's very sweet, the interaction between the male and female protagonists is interesting, the heroine's silly and cute personality is very interesting, and the free analysis of some thoughts is quite in-depth. The front looks really nice! I haven't slept till now watching [Sending Hearts] Alas, it's a pity. I'm currently reading Chapter 85, and a second personality appears near this chapter, which looks a bit fragmented. I can't stand it anymore The heroine's transition from being a little emotional to being emotionally active is a little abrupt. There is a feeling of changing from a girl with "Three Nothings" to a girl with "Vitality" I don't know what the follow-up plot will be like. I'll finish it when I have time. Overall, it's pretty good, and the flaws don't hide the flaws!

My evaluation is very valuable. Just like the words written in my pen, even though I am full of materialistic desires at the moment, I can still calm down and write down what I want to say and express, instead of sticking to the routine and template plot progress. This alone is great. Although there are some things that may not resonate, there is no discomfort imposed on people. If it is insufficient, the writing style can be further considered and refined. The transformation of the heroine's character image is still a bit harsh and far-fetched.

How beautiful! This sweet, ordinary little daily life is so interesting. Yun Yuan is gradually becoming more lively and lively, how cute she is. Some of the contents in the book are quite inspiring, and I saw some new ideas. As for the character design of Yun Yuan that collapsed in the middle, I don't think it did. The reason why she was revealed later didn't collapse either. Who knows the changes in magical girls? I really can't get enough of it and am looking forward to the author's next book.

I can't stand it anymore, it's so good. This book is ordinary but not boring. It brings the story to life, but the update is not stable. There are traces from the indifference at the beginning to the strength now. The story is very immersive. At the end, it is a single dog in front of the screen. What are you laughing at in this book [laughing]

It's great to read. I've been obsessed with ghost stories recently and haven't read such sweet daily stories for a long time. I feel the same way I did when I read My Wife Comes from a Thousand Years. But this main line is progressing so fast. Can the author write as much as possible so that it doesn't end too quickly [I'm about to cry]

It's been 6 years, and it's incredible that I finally found a novel that I can barely count. Every sentence in the text is philosophical, every word is philosophical, and it contains almost all of the author's thoughts. Although the story is casual and ordinary, it made me deeply pondered and inspired. Every sentence seems to be an essay, but there is a profound meaning behind it. For example: Love can be said to be a kind of complementarity. The male protagonist in this article is in the process of transcending the worldly world, and the female protagonist is in the process of doing as the Romans do. This happens to be an almost extreme complementarity, that is, an almost extreme love. A thousand readers have a thousand Hamlets. The original meaning of this sentence is that every reader has a person like Hamlet in his heart, but what I understand is that every reader has a different understanding and even creation of the same thing. I think the ultimate pursuit of novels is to expand the scope of this understanding, and there are infinitely rich stories behind every sentence in this article. As the author of more than 1,200 novels and more than 800 classics, this book is the one I have the highest philosophical evaluation of.

The setting is attractive and the description is good, but the heroine is defined as too powerful, so much so that she can predict the future as if she has it at her fingertips. The author may have some experience with the content about digital collections, but it is too complicated and has too many irrelevant elements. It would be better to continue writing it using more common things such as stock trading, Bitcoin, precious metals, etc. The above is my evaluation after reading Chapter 16

After reading it, I would also like to express some of my own opinions: It is a sweet little novel that is more about daily life. It was suspected of falling apart in the middle, but it was recovered. Overall, it is worth reading. The character of the heroine is a highlight. If you have read "Violet Evergarden", you can basically take it directly. Finally, I wish all book lovers can find their own significant other.

Both in terms of concept and writing style, they are all the best I have seen so far. The changes in the heroine's character are well written (I didn't say it in the middle period, but it was still great in the later period). It's very interesting! Come on, author!

The story is very strong, the writing is quite interesting, and the language is relatively novel. But the disadvantage is that the change of the heroine's character is not handled well, and the contrast between before and after is so big that it makes no sense. Hope to make more progress. To be honest, it can be seen that you were a little anxious when writing it. To be more specific, the process of the heroine's change was not very clear. Just writing about the two of them was too boring, and the story timeline was not handled well. Finally, I suggest you change the title. To be honest, you won't be a slave until the end of the writing, it will just be a lolita article.

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It's pretty good. The characters' personalities are becoming more and more vivid, but I don't seem to feel the beauty of love anymore in the later part. It's a bit strange. Anyway, when I read the later part, I suddenly felt as if someone else had written it, and the writing style had changed.

I read it in one go. I prefer daily fiction. The beginning is pretty good and the characters are not bad. The middle part is a bit dull. Although it is a bit rushed, it is to be expected. Overall it is very good. Plus this is the author's first work. Highly recommended.