Demon King**

Very good. Although it is a little different from what the real person wrote, and the writing style is also different, but overall it has the flavor of the real person, and the imagination is big enough. I hope to see the Demon Lord refining the five realms for two days, walking out of the void of chaos, and achieving eternal life.

It's rare to see a sequel written by a real person, support

I haven't watched it yet, but I remember "Fang Yuan Ju Yang Battles Xingxu", I think Xingxu can't stand it [laughs evilly]

Eternal love is equal to eternal life in the Gu world. They were all playing chess but it was all chess. Which one was playing chess? God will win in this game, but he still ran away with the answer. . Can this author please tell me whether this type of subject matter is easy to write about?

Zhenren's Gu world is to analyze and amplify the obscure things in reality. He depicts a lifelike story, but it is not just a story. This is beyond the pattern of ordinary novels. Fang Yuan is chasing eternal life, and people are chasing freedom and rushing to heaven. Courts will also resist fate because of the pursuit of freedom. They seem to have changed, but they seem not to have changed. They are constantly moving forward, and they are advancing unyieldingly. History calls this group of people bandits and rebels, and they also have another name: "Rebels!" ", They are insignificant little people, they are weak, they are humble, they are insignificant, they grovel and obey in front of the powerful, and in order to survive, they sell their children and abandon their daughters as slaves and maids. They live like puppets in a muddle-headed way. Doing nothing, being old and helpless, until numbness and death; it is such a little person, who has been devastated by fate, abandoned by society, and ridiculed by the world, who will fight for hope, fight for freedom, and fight for hundreds of millions of creatures who suffer the same oppression. When one little person falls down, another little person will stand up, because the most indispensable thing in the world is little people! "Because the weaker you are, the more you need to persevere!" - "The Persistence of the Villain"

Very good, I can see that you have put in a lot of effort, come on!

Fang Yuan not only wants the dragon maid, but also little star [smile][smile]

Come on, fairy friends! However, I still give a suggestion. If you really want to write a plot with a Gu flavor, I feel that you still have to have the endurance of the Gu author. When I read the original Gu work, I can basically feel that the author has put in so much effort and changed the outline for the sake of the good of the work, so that the subsequent plot will not be guessed, and the foreshadowing is passed down from ancestors. It is recommended that you plan beforehand. Please look forward to your eternal excitement. The ghost should have its own Gu that can make a comeback, right?

This book is really a rare good book. Although it is still worse than the original, it is the best one among all the fanfics and sequels. I hope the author can finish it.

I only read a dozen chapters because I was banned.

The writing is very good, cheers to the author [sending heartfelt wishes][sending heartfelt wishes]

Good, good, good, good, good, good!

The writing is tasteful and quite good, so it must be a high score, but it cannot be a perfect score.

It does have the flavor of a real person [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] It can't be a real person's trumpet, right?

Come on, work hard.

Very good I like it

It's really good

Not bad, come on, author

Just like a real person

Fulfill my dream of loving the Immortal Lord!

After watching some of it later, I felt it was very good, a bit like a real person.

Extremely terrifying. It's scary to think about it!

Come on, fairy friends! ! It's very beautiful, please don't update it [cry][cry][cry]

It's very well written. How can you know the dragon and the earthworm without trying it? At the beginning, I tried to write about the rise of three statues, and the flowing wind and the sun continue the front line.

Recite poetry, author. An immortal who cannot recite poetry is not a good immortal. After all, it is not like a real person, but it is enough to make up for the regret. The Immortal Lord pursued with great love, and after three spoonfuls of purification, he obtained the true inheritance. That year, the net was purified ten times, but the true person had not yet come to the end. I have been lamenting the injustice for three years, and now my Taoist friend is making an addendum. Great kindness!

Personally, I think the writing is quite good.

Personally, I feel that my writing is getting better and better, and the content is becoming more and more fluent. I also feel that the connection with the original text is very good. Keep up the good work!

Which one is stronger compared to the semi-immortal Wuji Demon Lord and the Ghost Demon Lord with the body of a supreme immortal who has mastered all sects in his previous life? [What]

Come on, author, keep going

It's nice to look at, and the fairies are friendly! !