
Swordsman: Obtain Innate Skills at the Beginning
笑傲江湖:开局获得先天功
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- Completed
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- 1.8M Words
- Genre
- Martial Arts
- Subgenre
- Male-Channel Fanfiction
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 11mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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I like this book very much, this is the hero in my heart. Nowadays, many martial arts fans either fall in love with Ren Yingying, or go gangbusters and kill randomly. But I still like this kind of orthodox hero novel. If a chivalrous person is great for the country and the people, he needs this kind of novel about killing bad guys. I admire the protagonist's good character.
🈶Meaning, three correct views, not brainwashing when reading, recommended If you come late, don't miss it
It's the martial arts novel in my heart, noble and elegant
This book is very good. After reading so many Xiaoao fans, I can only read a few of them. Maybe I am middle-aged and like people like Yue Buqun in the early and middle years, so I especially want Yue Buqun to have a good ending in the end, so I will continue to read it.
It's so comfortable to watch. It feels so comfortable to relieve the pent-up energy in my heart. The protagonist's acting style really reminds me of my martial arts dream when I was young: I wanted to go to the end of the world with a sword, get rid of bullies, and save the people [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]
It is a breath of fresh air in the world of martial arts novels. There are no big tricks or big logical loopholes. It is reasonable and follows the logic of the constructed world. It is not the kind of sudden strength or weakening. Rare! Five stars for the time being to encourage you
This is the real martial arts. Jianghu has always been decisive, and hesitation has long since disappeared. People have so many psychological journeys. They are what they should be. The protagonist has a clear distinction between love and hate, is decisive in dealing with things, and has a righteous heart. How can such a person not be loved? As a reader, I hope the author can grasp the quality [Like]
Pure justice, no mess. A novel with super upright views.
When reading fan fiction, you always have to read something different. They are all the same as the original work. The author's perspective is good.
It has strength, can stick to justice, do its best to eliminate evil, has no love for children, has a smooth plot, upgrading and practicing content takes up less space, closely follows the main line, updates quickly, is sufficient, and has good writing.
Very good, the three views are excellent, the martial arts is not a hodgepodge, there are consequences after saving people, I already feel like a generation of heroes
It's so good to watch. It's been a long time since I've seen a male protagonist who repays kindness, is so chivalrous, and doesn't mess with the relationship between men and women. Moreover, he really has his lifelong goal of eliminating evil and promoting good, hoeing the strong and supporting the weak, and he has always practiced it. The protagonist treats the enemy with a violent storm, but treats the weak, friends and teachers with a gentle spring breeze! He is decisive in killing, careful in dealing with things, and what is even more rare is that he always has an innocent heart. Nowadays, although there are various protagonists of golden finger cool novels, they all have various desires. Some are killing everyone in the infinite flow, some are rising in officialdom, and some are hugging each other in harem novels... Even if they may do some good things in the process, the core is basically to obtain higher interests for themselves, for power, for power, for profit, for sex, etc. Although it is fun to watch, sometimes I always feel that there is something shortcomings when I look at it coldly... Now I feel that maybe I just lack some pure chivalry, the spirit of a truly chivalrous person. I admire characters like this from the bottom of my heart, even if they are in the book. Thank you to the author. Although I haven't finished the book yet, I always feel that I have finally made up for the breath that I have been missing for so long while reading Tomato novels.
It's a very good novel. Firstly, most of Xiaoao's colleagues pick up their bowls to eat, put down their bowls and scold their mothers. When they go to Xiaoao, their first thought is to go to Huashan. Later, they feel that Lao Yue is not good. Not to mention other things, there must be the gift of teaching skills, which can be regarded as the capital to settle down. Second, unlike many people who look like a teddy when they see a woman. One second the woman wants to kill him, but the next second he can forgive her and kneel down to lick her.
It looks good, the content structure is very rich, and there are no pitfalls [Love] [Like]
Although it is a martial arts fan, it allowed me to see what real martial arts is. I used to think that Qiao Feng and Guo Jing were heroes, but compared to the protagonists in this book, they are a few levels behind them. There's not much to say. The protagonist's outlook is very positive. The author writes it very well, with logic and brains. The score of 9.1 Is definitely low. I can give 9.5 Points to the book written by Wang Hongtao and Secretary Wang, and I can give 10 points to this one. You can understand whether it is good or not. You will know after reading it.
The writing is good. So far, the plot is uneventful but still enjoyable. A few personal suggestions. I hope you don't make the protagonist too bitter and hateful. Some extreme words can be removed. I am already a top-notch master. I hope the plot will not be an ordinary dungeon swapping and killing people, but a bit of continuity and integration.
It's very good. This is the first time in the past few years that I've read an article that doesn't have outrageous cheats or systems. I read it all in one go.
It is a very good book, and it stands out among the current time-travel literature about harems and various inexplicable straight-minded people who insist on saving certain female partners. The emotional line is not written poorly and has to be written awkwardly, the rhythm is quite good, the writing style is average, there is nothing poisonous, and you can probably see some of the author's own thoughts by reading the online article. Although using evil to control evil is not a very good way, it is still an effort. As long as there are still people who believe that good and evil are rewarded, there will be fewer people wandering on the edge of good and evil. Looking forward to the next new work, The Condor Trilogy, Tianlong and others, write more and love to read [Sending my heart]
Well written. The protagonist's outlook is at least like that of a modern person. Don't kill for pleasure. The author can write more about the sects that were not described in detail in Jin Yong's original work. For example, Beggar Gang, Kunlun, Dian Cang, and Shaolin can also be written in a few square characters. The protagonist can also force some people who are not so bad to change their ways and force them to do a lot of good deeds every year. After all, one person can't do it all even if he is exhausted.
The protagonist kills decisively, and the character style is not much different from the original work. So far, the latest chapter has not seen any collapse or poisonous points. The author does not forcefully create conflicts for the sake of promotion. The characters are three-dimensional and one of the few excellent products in Tomato [Adoration] The later stage is too dull and boring. I can't finish the story if I can't finish it. It's even more uncomfortable if I drag it on.
Objective description: The protagonist is full of positive energy. Although he is decisive in killing, he still acts for heaven. There is no woman in the heart who draws the sword and is a god of nature. Sooner or later he will become a top martial arts master. Many times, the protagonist does things without profit or reward. Not wanting profit and reward is the character of a hero, which makes him look a bit silly! Chapter 278 Becomes a pig's foot
Whether Yue Buqun is a gentleman or a hypocrite, Jiang Ning doesn't care. For him, Yue Buqun saved him, raised him, and treated him with kindness and kindness. "Since the government cannot bring justice to the victims, then maintaining justice is the meaning of the Huashan Sect's existence." A few words have retained an old bookworm of more than ten years, and the three views have been successfully connected. In the current fast food era, there is no novel subject matter that makes people feel happy. Only solid writing can make people integrate from the heart. Both the logic and character description are very good. I look forward to the follow-up performance.
Yes, I like this style very much, and I am a huge fan of the protagonist. The so-called great chivalrous person serves the country and the people. If you have the ability to do just things for the people, you should spare no effort to do them. If you achieve them, you will benefit the world. It feels like it's too smooth sailing and should create some foreshadowing and suspense. The protagonist has never encountered setbacks and has grown up too easily, but it is considered qualified as a refreshing novel.
The entire book's logical writing is online, which is rare on Tomato. Even if you haven't read the original work, it won't affect your reading of this book. The protagonist is an idealist who understands that he cannot eliminate all darkness and injustice, but will do his best to solve the darkness that appears in front of him and is willing to fight for the darkness in his heart. Die for justice, because he treats the villains ruthlessly and is not merciful, so he is called the Ningyan King. Some people think that the protagonist is a young and energetic fool, but the protagonist knows better than anyone else what kind of road he is walking on. In addition, the master and the protagonist are also a teacher and a father and son. The friendship is also very real. The protagonist respects the master who picked him up and raised him. When traveling, he will spend a lot of money to buy clothes for his master and his wife, and wear gifts himself. Because he knows some of the plots of the original work, he secretly swears that if Linghu Chong dares to disgrace his master in the future, he will never let him go. After him, the master and his wife also love the apprentice who raised him. The master is worried that he will not be able to deal with the world's villains alone, so he specially asks the protagonist to teach the new disciples, hoping that the protagonist will influence these disciples subtly, and hopes that someone can follow the protagonist and accompany him on this difficult road.
The writing style of this book is okay. Although there are some shortcomings, the many friendships are very touching and make up for many regrets in Swordsman. So it deserves five stars. The protagonist in this book is simply righteous and evil. He is not deceived by beauty. He has a heart for the world and will kill a bunch of people when he sees injustice. The author writes it very well, and there is no female protagonist. 1. The master-disciple relationship between the protagonist and Yue Buqun. In the first few chapters, people feel that the protagonist is Yue Buqun's licking dog, a tool man. The further you read, the more moved you are by their master-disciple relationship. The protagonist kills a family for justice at every turn, and Yue Buqun always supports him. When the protagonist travels down the mountain for the first time, the searching Yue Buqun gives the protagonist 200 taels. Later, the protagonist was hunted down and his life or death was unknown. Yue Buqun killed many people and even went to war against the Sun and Moon God Sect to avenge the protagonist. They both deserve each other's efforts. 2. The friendship between the protagonist and Lin Pingzhi. Lin Pingzhi is a tragic character in Swordsman, but the protagonist in this book gives Lin Pingzhi a new life. The protagonist is a person who dares to take responsibility and be responsible for his own choices, even if he may die if he is hunted down. This kind of person is worthy of admiration. 3. The protagonist's great love for ordinary people. The protagonist will kill a bunch of people when he sees evil. The author writes this very well and is very touching.
It's very good. The male protagonist is very decisive. The children like it very much. But each chapter is a bit short. I recommend more chapters.
I feel that the author's plot structure of this book is quite reasonable, the three views are relatively positive, and he has a clear conscience about right and wrong. Compared with Tomato🍅's similar type of novel "Swordsman", it has a unique charm. I personally feel that it is refreshing and the plot is more reasonable. (There are too many private opinions, [smirk] [smile] There is no other meaning. I am praising this point, because these views are more positive, so they sublimate the theme, because the content of this article is still a bit boring in terms of details. The most important thing is the emotion between people. It is worth thinking more about the perspective of different people. There are quite a lot of references in it. I think overall it is very nice, so I give 5 stars [smirk])
It's good to read, the author's writing is good, and it's quite refreshing. I haven't read the original work, but I also enjoyed it very much. It's really to my liking. The last time I saw a protagonist like this was the male protagonist Feng Qiyue. I beg the author to write more! ! !
Absolutely, from junior high school to college, this book is one of the best books I have ever read. The protagonist is decisive in killing, yet does not lack warmth and respect. He yearns for justice, eradicates evil and uses even more evil methods to deal with evildoers, but he writes about his fellow sects and beliefs in a way that chivalry should be. Excellent work, excellent work! Drink a big white! Come on, author! Keep it up, this book shines like a diamond in all kinds of exaggerated and three-dimensional novels, so please keep it up!
Not bad, not bad, a bit interesting! He is decisive in killing while adhering to the bottom line. The protagonist's character, IQ and way of doing things are in line with the perception of normal people. When so-called "mixed martial arts" novels are popular in the world, it is rare to see this kind of book that does not use a bunch of "celebrity" names that confuse people's thinking!