The Iron Pioneer

Strict and clear logic How to say it? Some of the rhetoric is forced and even incomprehensible. And the sentences are not fluent and read very strangely. From my personal point of view, the plot is too slow, not suitable for online novels, and it is also very confusing to read and cannot be understood. Writing time-travel novels requires at least some explanation, otherwise readers will not understand it at all. The introduction is also strange. The subject matter is quite good, the overall plot is okay, and some of the descriptions are okay, such as some daily life. All in all, the author has little experience and needs to practice his writing or check if there are any problems before publishing. The plot needs to be streamlined and not too slow or trivial. These are my personal speculations and analysis through the first dozen chapters, which are my subjective opinions. In fact, I have to read the following parts to get them.

There are too many typos,

I'm not giving five stars because the author writes well. It's because I looked at the earliest upload time of the catalog, which was May 27, 2023.

Although I haven't yet, since the author has been updating for so long, I'll give it a five-star rating.

Lots of typos

It's the same as what AI wrote. It's too long-winded, a running account within a running account.

Why does this novel look like a literal translation?

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