Waking up in the ruins of the orphanage, he finds himself chained and sold into slavery. A modern chemistry doctor was trapped in an unknown ancient world. The tricks of fate did not defeat him. He made plate armor, invented paper, built roads, taught statecraft... Trying to carve out a world for himself. But how can such a thing not arouse envious eyes? The overlord of the sea - Cartagena, the unstoppable army of Exoras, the Eastern superpower - Adhania, the merchant alliance - Sibalsis, the religious fanatic - Izarid, and the ever present - the barbarians of the Barren Forrest, all want to get some wealth from him. In the ocean of sharks, a skinny carp rushes hard, struggles to jump over the dragon gate, and builds a dynasty to surpass them all.
Reader comments
Strict and clear logic
How to say it? Some of the rhetoric is forced and even incomprehensible. And the sentences are not fluent and read very strangely. From my personal point of view, the plot is too slow and not suitable for online novels. It is also very confusing to read and cannot be understood. Writing time-travel novels requires at least some explanation, otherwise readers will not understand it at all. The introduction is also strange.
The subject matter is quite good, the overall plot is okay, and some of the descriptions are okay, such as some daily life.
All in all, the author has little experience and needs to practice his writing or check if there are any problems before publishing. The plot needs to be streamlined and not too slow or trivial.
These are my personal speculations and analysis through the first dozen chapters, which are my subjective opinions. In fact, I have to read the following parts to get them.
There are too many typos,
Lots of typos
It's the same as what AI wrote. It's too long-winded, a running account within a running account.
Why does this novel look like a literal translation?
Strict and clear logic How to say it? Some of the rhetoric is forced and even incomprehensible. And the sentences are not fluent and read very strangely. From my personal point of view, the plot is too slow and not suitable for online novels. It is also very confusing to read and cannot be understood. Writing time-travel novels requires at least some explanation, otherwise readers will not understand it at all. The introduction is also strange. The subject matter is quite good, the overall plot is okay, and some of the descriptions are okay, such as some daily life. All in all, the author has little experience and needs to practice his writing or check if there are any problems before publishing. The plot needs to be streamlined and not too slow or trivial. These are my personal speculations and analysis through the first dozen chapters, which are my subjective opinions. In fact, I have to read the following parts to get them.
There are too many typos,
Lots of typos
It's the same as what AI wrote. It's too long-winded, a running account within a running account.
Why does this novel look like a literal translation?
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